FF: Do Dil Ek Jaan update pg7

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Hey guys i have started a new FF Tell me what you guyz think and whether i should continue or not.

DISCLAIMER: ONLY THE STORY IS MYN


CHAPTER 1


Karan : Arjun pass the ball, pass the ball

Arjun continues to dribble the ball as he wants to shoot the basket and win for the whole college. Due to a lot of players playing defense he decides to pass the ball to Karan, but Pia's cheering forces him to do it himself. Arjun pretends to pass to Karan and fools the defence team, he quickly starts to dribble again and heads for the basket and shoots just before the defense team could block him again.

For a second it felt as if the world stopped as the ball keeps on turning on the rim and finally goes through the ring.

''The Elite college has won with 4 points more than the Tilten college both the goals scored by Mr. Arjun Singhania in the last minute.

College: Arjun!! Arjun!! Arjun!! Arjun!! Arjun!! Arjun!! Gooo! Arjun!!

Director: and cut

I can just sense it this movie is going to be a blockbuster with superstars Arjun Singhania and Pia Khanna playing the lead roles, the great script it just has to be a hit.

Pia: Of course it will be a hit you were right when me and Arjun act together no doubt it will be a success. Another thing I love about this movies is that we are using our real names this really makes it much easier.

Arjun: More than that me and Pia can both relate to the movie and also the audience loves our chemistry and wants to see more of it.

Director: Enough of praising the movie go and get ready for the next shot. Remember we are going to shoot for the sad sequence.

Pia: Yes Sir she said with saluting him

Scene 5 shot number 4 and action.

Arjun was staring at Pia who looked like a modern angel coming down the stairs in a electric blue skinny fit dress. She looked so hot and beautiful no words to describe her thought Arjun until he realized there were tears in her eyes.

Arjun: what happened Pia why are you crying?

Pia: Gauri told me everything

Arjun: I don't understand anything Pia please can you explain?

Pia: Arjun, Gauri told me everything about the bet.

Arjun just stood their for a few seconds before saying ' Pia I really didn't mean to

Pia said with fresh tears coming out of her eyes- whatever you wanted to do you did, now what I want to do I will.

Arjun: Pia but

Pia: Arjun let me finish the bet is now my past and so are you

Arjun: what do you mean Pia

Pia: I am breaking up with you Arjun I cant stay with someone who has been lieing to me the whole time she said before starting to walk away

Arjun caught her hand before she could walk away

Pia: Arjun chodo muje Arjun meina kaha leave me she said shouting

Arjun: I know I don't deserve you forgiving me but please just listen to me

Pia: After everything you have said and done is their anything still left to explain. Oh I know you can tell me someone the ways you betrayed my trust and made me your girlfriend. Do you know how much pain it would have caused me after finding out that we were together only because of a bet.

Arjun: Pia I can understand tumhare upar kya beeta hoga

Pia: How would you know how it feels if someone tells you " I think Arjun won the bet, he really can have any girl in the world I had thought you weren't the type that gave your heart to someone so easily". What do you know Arjun, When Gauri said all that to me I felt as if someone had stabbed my heart. Pia: I really trusted you Arjun, she said crying her hardest.

Arjun went forward to wipe her tears but she pushed away and said don't you dare Arjun cursed himself for doing that to her.

Arjun: I wanted to tell you but I was to scared I would lose you if I did.

Pia: I was never yours Arjun because the love that's based on a lie is neve true love.

Arjun: I didn't tell you because I fell in love with you

Pia: you expect me to believe that nonsense. Look I don't want to listen to anything else am going and also don't ever try to contact me.

She turned around and started walking away while Arjun started to play his favorite game, Palat. If she loves me she will turn around, he said palat 5 times before she turned around. But she said something that shattered him

Pia: Arjun don't ever play with a girls heart and feelings.

Arjun- ( I really love you PIA)

Director: cut amazing shot. It felt so real, like you 2 were actually breaking up. We really wish that will never happen and you both will move on to tieing the knot.

The whole world knew that superstars Arjun and Pia were in a relationship since their first movie released which was 2 years ago. Pia was a newcomer ad she studied in the Elite College. Her first movie was against Arjun too." KITANI MOHOBATH HAI" made her one of the laeding ladies in Bollywood. But the fame never got to Pia's head she always loved acting like she was just another normal girl. Her best friend still was Arohi Aluwalia. Who would be coming to meet her any second. Both of them studied in Elite, Where the shooting took place.

Pia: As usual Arohi is late she said to Arjun.

Arjun: don't worry itll be the same thing the teacher must have kept them in for extra time.

Pia: you are probably right lets go and wait outside her class.

IN CLASS

Arohi: Omg i wonder when this sadu will let us go, anyway i really cant pay attention to what he is saying i cant wait till i can go and meet Arjun and Pia.
Teacher: ok students sorry for keeping you guyz in late, but we really had to finsh this chapter. Ok then meet you next time class is dismissed.

As soon as the teacher finished his statement Arohi practically ran out of the room towards the shooting area. On her way she bumped with something really hard and was about to hit the floor hard when 2 strong arms caught her. Arohi opened her previously shut eyes and looked into the heart throb of millions of girls eyes. ' Arjun Singhania'

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Next part - 50009231

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter 1 ... Pg 1 49039766
Chapter 2 ... Pg 4 50009231
PROMO ... Pg 6 50592699




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Will update later
Edited by karan.kritzkmh - 14 years ago
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow a New FF - GREAT NEWS

Congratulations to u
Awesome start -
Pls continue sooon
Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gd ya bt i din lyk arjun n pia together
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pia and arjun are dating?!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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goodt start..

so Pia and Arjun are dating and they are film stars.


add me to ur list
Edited by Anupa28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow a new ff!!
congrats
loved the 1st chap tho arjun is wit sum1 :/
add me 2 ur pm list pls
and do cont soon.x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 start, arjun and pia co stars and dating while aru and pia are bffs..i think i see a love triangle coming.hmmm continue soon.add me to ur pm list plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 start...luvd it..plz pm me...w8tin 4 the nxt..;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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New FF.. Congo...
Amazing Start... Add me to the PM list...

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