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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anupa28




The second one is almost done..just editing it..hopefully people will like it


THANKS. WAITING FOR IT
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anupa28




The second one is almost done..just editing it..hopefully people will like it


thank u...
cant wait for it...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Guys... I am back with my second OS...I have dedicated this one to a very special person...my friend PRIYA...an ardent reader, a lovely friend and a very positive human being...I will alwasy cherish your support and encouragement...the title has been suggested by her as well...


LOVE'...the Rhythm of Life

"Utho Arjun subah ho gayi hai'..aur kitne der tak sote rahoge" Arohi's melodious voice, the touch of her soft lips on his skin and her fingers running through his hairs brought an instant smile to Arjun's lips. "Ummm'...tum bhi so jayo" he hauled her towards him and imprisoned her in his embrace, nuzzling his face in her soft bosom and inhaled seductively "pleaseee". "Pagal ho gaye ho kaya''..abhi abhi naha ke ayi huun.". Arohi's pretend anger stirred more passion in him. "To kya phir se naha lena''actually I have a better plan'.sath sath nahayenge" Arjun winked mischievously looking at his blushing wife. They were married for nearly two months but he enjoyed the way Arohi's coyness made it feel like it was always the first time. "Awww'..eksath'..besharam'.chhoro mujhe" she turned her eyes is mock anger."Nehi chhorunga 'kya karogi" he rolled around crushing Arohi under his craving warmth, knowing very well that she was enjoying every moment of it. Her whole body, smelling for freshness trembled in anticipation as he cupped her face and ''.

Arjun's eyes shot open at the sound of the bell echoing through the hard and arched stone walls of the dark underground cell. He had been really sating himself in the same dream for the last three days but for the ominous bell every single time he has failed to relive the intense passionate kiss they had shared afterwards. Her soft, supple body melting in the glory of love and his heart beat soaring sky high with utmost pleasure and satisfaction. Treacherous destiny wouldn't even let him bask in some cherished memories '.the only solace he has left with in his dark sombre life. It rang like a nemesis every morning to let the prisoners know that another day has dawned to the outside world. But for them another day of constant harsh interrogations, third degree tortures and inhuman brutality has arrived. As for him another day of waiting for some good news from the Indian embassy issuing his release order. But with every passing days along his body even his mind was succumbing to the never ending dark pit of hopelessness.

Till then he had been brave, have coped with all the interrogations with maturity but he was getting scared and apprehensive. Scared that he might never come out from this place that defies every human rights; sacred that he might never see his precious Arohi; sacred about loosing everything.. He had noticed people disappearing, have heard terrible screams and hushed voices at night as if plotting something ominous. His last cell partner Zahair was a muslim doctor from USA. He could speak Arabic and Arjun had managed to pick up few words and phrases from him with the hope that he would be able to converse a bit more with the guards during interrogations But now that he had some knowledge of the language he was getting to understand things better. Initially he thought he could use the language in his favour but since a week back his partner was taken away in the middle of the night and a sense of apprehension has dawned on him. Zahair was told he was being released but later on Arjun had gathered he was indeed released from the burden of the world in the true literal sense. The mere thought have sent a chilly shiver down his spine. His fatigued body and mind was giving into the constant pressure and he could feel he was loosing it at times. Oh God!!!! It has been months since he has had any correspondence from anybody from the Indian Embassy. He remembered when he was first arrested a man claiming himself his lawyer had assured him of help but nothing has happened since then. At least the lawyer had confirmed that Arohi was safe back in India and it was on her request he had been sent by the embassy. And that had been quite a relief for him. He dreaded to think about Arohi's pain and agony without him at her side but he was sure with the family support she would be able to fight the system and definitely get him out. His little Arohi was a strong woman. Who would have known few days in the lovely surrounding of Pyramids and beautiful waves of sands would turn into an absolute nightmare for them.

Arjun tried to force his bruised body up but failed miserably. "Ouch" a sharp sensation of pain shot through his spine past across his middle rib. Last night the drunken warden had taken out all his anger on him. Day after day, nights after nights the same question "are you a spy?" in different tones took its toll on him. He had failed to make them understand he wasn't a terrorist or a spy''he was just an ordinary tourist who came for his honeymoon to Egypt with his wife and have been duped, tricked. He really had no knowledge about the documents he was carrying neither about his friends whereabouts. But their constant relentless nagging had touched his anger chord and he had spat on him. What followed was beyond comprehension. His whole bruised, burnt, tortured body bore evidence to the inhuman treatment. The only consolation was his frail chained body had failed to bear the pain for much longer and had lulled him to unconsciousness. And his Arohi had come back to him again and had healed all his pain and agony with the delicious touch of her lips'''..only he wished the bell would let him finish his dream'..it has been months since he had last seen her, felt her, taste her. It was the memory of her beautiful face, her laughter, her encouraging play of words have kept him going, have kept him alive even in this condition.

A smile curved his lips as his mind reeled back to the time they had been so happy together, enjoying their honeymoon in Egypt. Arohi once told him that she has always dreamt about going to Egypt so she was absolutely overwhelmed when Arjun had booked their honeymoon to her dream destination'.."The Egypt of Pharoahs, temples and archeological digs". They had visited every part of Egypt from the urban Cairo to the old Egypt steeped in its history and romance. Luxour, Aswan, Alexandria''Arohi had been fascinated with the everything she had seen, been enthralled with ancient Egypt with its monuments, tombs, pyramids and the Spinx. Every time her face had lightened up with excitement he had felt complete. As they had explored Egypt hand in hand in each other's company he had thanked his stars for gifting him with such a lovely life partner. One of his friend from college had moved to Egypt and he had helped Arjun get a deal on booking a Egyption sailboat for two nights for the Nile River. Arohi was initially quite cross with him for spending so much of his hard earned money for sheer luxury but it was very penny worth spending for. He could have never afford it unless for Mikhael. Arohi had however very soon succumbed to enjoying the pleasure of the surroundings and the company. He had very romantically arranged for the dinner to be served at the upper deck and after their al fresco candle night dinner he had reached for her and they had made love under the starry sky. She was a bit hesitant to start with but later on passion took over her shyness and they had both basked in the sensation of a wild primitive love making. The heat of the place had evoked in them certain sensuality that had made them breathless with raw desire and wanting.

The day they were suppose to get their flight back to India Mikhael had come to meet them in Cairo. He had asked Arjun to take a packet with him and deliver it with his family. Knowing the customs regulations he was a bit hesitant but Mikhael had opened the packet to show its content. Some regular gifts for his family and a letter to his mother. Arjun couldn't have refused after that, not even in his worst nightmare thinking that this gesture would have cost him so much later on. He was arrested at the Cairo Airport on the charge of leaking information to Indian Government. According to their information Michael was an international spy and owing to not having any picture of him they mistook him as Mikhael. The packet that Arjun was carrying had some information on the secret defence mission. Despite of all his attempts to explain to the misunderstanding they refused to believe him and hold him responsible for creating a fictitious character. Arjun didn't have a strong case as he couldn't provide any information on Mikhaels' whereabouts. To the Egyptian authorities he was Mikhael Gomes. They confisticated all his personal belongings and deported him to Central Jail in Cairo without giving any opportunity to contact a lawyer or Indian Embassy. Later on he was moved to an old fortress converted to a prison for interrogating suspected spies. They had also arrested Arohi but according to the lawyer who had come to meet him couple of weeks afterwards she was sent back to India. He had shown him a letter from Arohi stating that she was fine and she had spoken to the foreign minister and they were trying their level best to release him The lawyer had urged Arjun to admit to all the charges against him and plead guilty. According to him that was the only way Indian Govermnet could have negotiated his release. He had urged Arjun to thiunk about his wife and his family in India. For a moment he had been tempted but being the son of an honest school teacher he had just refused to sign any false documents. He had asked his lawyer to fight his case in the proper way and earn him his release order. Days have turned into weeks and weeks to months and he was still in Egypt awaiting his release order.

The footsteps of the guards on the hard stone floor brought Arjun back to reality. Another round of marathon questioning was soon to be persued he guessed. They knew after last night his body and mind would be tired and thats when they like to strike to break up the man. The guards dragged his bruised body to the interrogation room. His face beamed up in excitement as he saw the same lawyer standing with a piece of paper in his hand. He had been waiting for this moment for months. " have you got my release order Mr Patel" he asked hope lurking in his eyes. "Sorry Mr Singhania'.not quite yet but we are definitely working towards it'' I have got a letter from your wife'..She is a very strong lady fighting against all odds just to get you out of here'..I hope this time you will cooperate with us" informed Mr Patel. Pride glittered in his face. He knew that his Arohi would never give up. It was indeed a letter from her. Her hand writing although quite disorientated but still the same. She had pleaded him to agree to Mr Patel and admit to all the charges. She had begged him to do it for her as this was the only way she could have released him.

He had at last agreed with Mr Patel. His rational mind had never given him permission to admit to anything like that but for her sake he gave his consent. As he waited for Mr Patel to get the paper ready he waited with immense hope for a bright future with Arohi. He almost fell asleep as the guards chatting with themselves set all his nerve ending into alert. They were talking in Arabic not having any knowledge about his understanding of the language. Nausea surged through him as he listened in absolute shock. There had never been any lawyer from Indian Embassy. Arohi was never sent back to India rather she was sent to the women jail, tortured and harassed like him. Initially they thought that on knowing that his wife had been sent back to India Arjun Singhania would agree to anything to go back to her and they would trap him.. But their plan failed drastically as Arjun refused to do that. He had turned out to be a extremely strong character confronting every torture and they couldn't take any steps against unless he had himself admitted to his guilt. On the other hand despite of all their harsh tortures even Arohi had refused to write any more letters to her husband urging him to admit to the crime that he hasn't done. So they had to wait and keep them alive but few days back they have realised that in order to crush them they had to use their love for each other. They have showed Arohi vedio clips of Arjun being tortured brutally and have threatened to kill him if she hadn't urged him to follow Mr Patel's instructions. And as expected she had agreed to do anything to save her husband's life. Arjun's heart stopped beating when they said that after writing the letter to buy her husband' life she had taken her own life; ashamed of her betrayal.. The guards continued to say that once he had signed the consent form he would be branded as the spy and their warden would get a promotion and declared a national hero and Arjun Singhania would be left to their mercy for life. Last night he had made the audacity of spitting at their warden face. Now for life he would regret that foolish act of his. They would neither let him live nor die. The guards laughed in unison as they mocked at the foolish emotion called Love'''

The news of Arohi's tragic suicide leashed a new surge of life in him. Till then he was living only for her. The thought of a future back with her one day had encouraged him to get on even in this situation but now he was not scared any more. Taking advantage of the talking guards he ran towards the courtyard. He was laughing like a free man, inhaling in the night breeze. He felt rejuvenated. They were right love is indeed a very complicated emotion to fools like them'but the ones who knows the true value of love to them it is the most divine feelings'it is the eternal flame that blazes forever, it is the rythm of life . He climed up to the bell and started ringing it. Although to the onlookers he looked like a possessed frenzied man but he knew exactly what he was doing, he knew the consequences and he was desperately waiting for it. He was not scared about anything any more, not even destiny. Till then he had been a mere puppet in fate's hand but tonight he was determined to even tempt fate. The havoc that he has created had sent a warning siren to all the guards and the sounds of their heavy boots coming towards him brought a smile to his face. The last plunge and everything would fall into place. Numerous bullets touched his back as he tried to climb the high walls clasped with electric wire. Yes they had fallen into his trap thinking that he was trying to escape. His body fell on the ground with his eyes looking straight into the night starry sky. A smile appreared on his lips as he could see his twinkling Arohi waiting for him up there. Her angelic face smiling at him and extending her hand she waited for him to come to her. "abb sirf mein aur tum'.jaldi se .a jayo mere pass." As he close his eyes in peacefulness her soft lips touched him and he felt himself getting immersed into the sensation of oneness'.her soft supple body providing him with all the warmth he has been craving for days'' the ringing bell had no impact on him this time''he was free from the shackles of the treacherous destiny'..he has succeeded in fulfilling his wish'..nothing could break the dream this time''.he was at last with his Arohi basking in the heavenly glory of togetherness''.



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Edited by Anupa28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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1st - love the title

will read nd edit later :)
Edited by MsSweetheart96 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i wont comment as i am angry at u for giving such sad os...
whenever i want to comment here and say something.. i m reminded of its pain...
yesterday night also i wasnt able to put anything... and i logged out...
so if u want me happy again and talk to u... quickly give a very very very happy os... i wont mind even if its before the update of ur ff...



Edited by .RockstaR. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
awesome OS
loved the way u wrote though it was sad one
Edited by ...vibha... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Di,u make me cry.u r amazng! Cnt cmnt nw.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
thanks anu
Thanks for dedicating it to me - I feel honoured dear
Thanks for the excellent OS -
priya
Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was awesome OS.
It was sad but the way u wrote and the emotion, everything was just right...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved the first one... the way arjun stood up to his family and society for arohi was amazing... the second one was too sad but very well written... waiting for more :)

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