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Kudi_NextDoor thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Always the woman huh. It's always just like that. No one ever points a finger at the man, I mean there could be something wrong from his side too, but of course not.

Anyways, I want to applaud you for touching this topic. You have described the pain of a motherless woman so so well! I am just so glad that society has started to broaden up a bit, if not a lot from those times. Child marrige, dowry, sati - all these things need writers like you, that give the WOMEN a voice.
This story was so unique, and I am just so glad by the end of it Arjun proved himself a real man- by spitting at these unrooted rituals of society. A hard life it will be for them, but I am so glad the story ended the way it did. For now they have each other timelessly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
This is a fab OS, loved it when I read it the first time. write more anupa , would love to read them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
beautifully written
:D it was so sweet yet there was pain, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it
great concept,he stuck by her at the end
it's an amazing OS,Truly powerful
thankyou for sharing this
cheerio :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
this is such a beautiful OS..
i read this b4 nd i luved it..
the more i read it the more i love it..

its amazing,
ur a really gud writer..
wud luv 2 read more 4rm u...

thnks 4 the pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
for the very topic u have chosen for the os...
child marriage, remarriage for sake of children, branding women inauspicious ...these r the practices still going in some regions in india... which is crap...

arohi's sacrifice u have depicted made my heart heavy...

Slowly she moved down kissing his neck, his throat, gently nibbling on his earlobes. Her eyes devoured him for the last time, his handsome face, his firm muscular body. "Ami tomak e chai (I want You)" she whispered. Arjun already aroused with desire wrapped one arm around her and brushed her body against his, kissing stroking and caressing her soft and supple body like a frenzied man .He wanted to taste and savour every bit of her, making her moan and grasp for more pleasure. They have made love before but this was more the consummation of the soul than of the body. As they experienced new heights of satisfaction and ecstacy, they found solace in each others bosom for the night''...


now this is called sensuality at its best...

.Arjun looked at the direction the sound was coming from and he froze. It was Arohi. Desparetely trying to blow the "auspicious" kansh with one hand and trying to cover her "ominous" face with her saree. Her face devoid of any emotions; her heavy bosom undulating with rythmic sound of the kansh...


this scene gave me goosebumps...
and the thing our arjun filmi ishtyle me sabko jawab deta h...
arjun doesnt looks like this but cant find anything else...lol...



Edited by .RockstaR. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: .RockstaR.

for the very topic u have chosen for the os...
child marriage, remarriage for sake of children, branding women inauspicious ...these r the practices still going in some regions in india... which is crap...

arohi's sacrifice u have depicted made my heart heavy...

Slowly she moved down kissing his neck, his throat, gently nibbling on his earlobes. Her eyes devoured him for the last time, his handsome face, his firm muscular body. "Ami tomak e chai (I want You)" she whispered. Arjun already aroused with desire wrapped one arm around her and brushed her body against his, kissing stroking and caressing her soft and supple body like a frenzied man .He wanted to taste and savour every bit of her, making her moan and grasp for more pleasure. They have made love before but this was more the consummation of the soul than of the body. As they experienced new heights of satisfaction and ecstacy, they found solace in each others bosom for the night''...


now this is called sensuality at its best...

.Arjun looked at the direction the sound was coming from and he froze. It was Arohi. Desparetely trying to blow the "auspicious" kansh with one hand and trying to cover her "ominous" face with her saree. Her face devoid of any emotions; her heavy bosom undulating with rythmic sound of the kansh...


this scene gave me goosebumps...
and the thing our arjun filmi ishtyle me sabko jawab deta h...
arjun doesnt looks like this but cant find anything else...lol...






Mere Pyare Rocking Rockstar...thats why I love you so much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
wohoo loved...n it has also become very close to my heart for the bong connection...😊
.RockstaR. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Anupa28



Mere Pyare Rocking Rockstar...thats why I love you so much...



i know... i know...
everybody loves me...
i m too lovable...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
anu luvd the concept of this OS...too good!!
lukin froward for the 2nd OS! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Just beautiful dii😍😍😍...loved it...truly awesomeee n spcly it is more spcl to me bcz of its Bengali touch in it...just loved whenever u mentioned those bengali words...Spcly when Arjun said, "Tomakei sudhu bhalobashi, tomakei sudhu chai..chirodin..chirojiban..."...truly touched Anu dii...😊😊😊

Edited by sreya19roy - 14 years ago

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