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-Awantika-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Err, the first time i read it i was awestruck !

ITs no different this time as well.

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

IM vvery late bt i wsnt here for few days...bt still i luved it to d core

believe me i jumped when i saw ur pm...i knew it wsnt ur ff bt still im so mad for ur wrk tht i kept redin it over n over again...

im soo dam happy u rittin a guldasta of os...i luv u soo much di...n ur ritin is

A-W-E-S-O-M-E

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: mansi_47
IM vvery late bt i wsnt here for few days...bt still i luved it to d core
believe me i jumped when i saw ur pm...i knew it wsnt ur ff bt still im so mad for ur wrk tht i kept redin it over n over again...
im soo dam happy u rittin a guldasta of os...i luv u soo much di...n ur ritin is
A-W-E-S-O-M-E

thanks dear..but dnt forget my FF...it is still waiting for your comment...

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Anupa28

thanks dear..but dnt forget my FF...it is still waiting for your comment...

ya di readin n long comment cumin ur way

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love.1

@love.1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Di amazing... absolutely amazing! Beautiful! 🤗 ❤️

😲 At the age of 13 she got married WOW...! that was such a surprise for me...!

Seriously society chat so much rubbish... its like mind your own effing business, and stop pointing fingers at others! They have nothing better to do!!!! 😡

OMG... bless Arohi. I so feel for her my heart goes out to her and Arjun. 😭 She was so selfless, and thought about everyone else and forgot about her own pain and everything. A woman can share everything but not her husband and for Arohi to let her husband marry another woman and share him God I can't imagine the pain! God she has guts and courage 👏

And when she was the one to play the kansh was sweet and loving, just doing it for him. Shows how much she loves him and wants him to be happy 😍 .

I understood Arjun's dilemma but I was like stop being a coward and speak up and stop it all. Seriously when I read this "Bandho karo'...sab bandho koro" I thought again he's just thinking it and not going to say anything... but I was so happy to read the next line haha was like yes he said it, he spoke!!!! Wohooo!

🥳 I was just so happy for Arjun to have stopped this idiotic thing and choose to support his love, his wife ❤️

Even though they have no money, no house or anything; most importantly they have one another. With her by his side he can do anything and with him by her side she can do anything. 😳 ❤️ 🤗 Money isn't everything... with it you can't buy happiness. I know you can't live on love but when you have someone with you that loves you and trusts you life is worth living and you can do anything for that person... and God is always with them. 😃

Great OS Di... superb, love it! Can't say anymore... amazing! 👏

Looking foward to reading the next and their new journey together.

Please update soon 😊

Thanks

Edited by love.1 - 14 years ago

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Mona Malik

@M00NA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

very nice... loved it...i realy want to read more of urs OS,,,,do pm me when ever u post :)

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SHAHAD971

@SHAHAD971

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Wow !!! This was fabulous !!!!

I've never read it before so thanks for posting...

I would love to read more of those ...please write more.

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Pratibha Sharma

@justprati

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

wow...amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
i had never read something like this before...amazing concept n beautifully written...very matured n perfect writing skills...
hats off yrr...

" Her in-laws wanted her to go back to her "baper bari(mayka) but she had managed to convince them she would never let her ominous shadow fall on Arjun's new life."
"are tum kuleen zamindar ho''...tum do to kya hazaro shadiya kar sakte ho"
u know when i read those lines ma temperature rose up wid anger i mean had they br8 daughter in law or some machine to manufacture children!!!!!!! n when they knew dat their purpose cannot b accomplished wid her they jst asked her to leave d house,throwing d machine out of d way ugh!!!!!!!!...n what 'kuleen zamindar' huh!!!!!!?does it gives license to marry 1000 wives or lyk dat!!! it feels disgusting to know dat there were n in fact are... still such narrow minded n selfish people r in dis world...
bt what arjun did is something very rare...something a true lover also wudnt dare to do at dat time n dat society...he cud have jst chosen d easy way out bt, his luv was so strong...it gave him d guts to face all d difficulties on d path of his love...of their luv...
very unique concept n as i said a matured n beautiful piece of writing wid a reality touch of past n even d present...luvd it...u have got awesome writing skills...keep writing...n ya thnx 4 such a wonderful piece tc :)