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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Simran,
thanks for the lovely update. You cleared so many doubts
It had to be the stuck-up old-maid music teacher from next door, Arohi.
wasn't about to give Ms. Prune Face Love the names he has given her -
Embarrassingly, there hadn't been any reason to play Bolero, and so he just stuck in the CD sometimes out of pride.was wondering where Arjun found so much stamina for so much bedroom activity, it was just to save his pride. - thank god he is not a casanova, just a hard working guyMaybe he'd been a little hasty to help her avoid body contact. Arjun chance mila tha to lene chahiye tha
She could look pretty damn good all the time if she tried, which she didn't. - So he thinks she is pretty and can even look more beautiful

She had that pale surface-calm-hiding-a-passionate-nature-beneath thing going,which he found extremely seductive - Oh ho. he can see the passion in her, that's way cool. So he will get to discover her hidden passion - Can't wait

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: .RockstaR.

so arjun finds arohi attractive...interesting
but arohi hates him still...
waiting or nxt update...


Well yeah arjun like her,n arohi doesnt hate him either its just that she thinks he is a playboy n she should never fall for such guy so she generally ignores him.As the story unfolds things will be clear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: MsSweetheart96

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nyc update but u shud try nd make it longer :)
i luv wat arjun called her...

Thanks,i know i m updating short its bcoz i m updating through mob but i will update atleast 2 scene a day plz understand tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
that was soo good!! you are a wonderful writer!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: punam2712


Simran,
thanks for the lovely update. You cleared so many doubts
I<font color="#ff0000">t had to be the stuck-up old-maid music teacher from next door, Arohi. </font>
<font color="#ff0000">wasn't about to give Ms. Prune Face<font color="#000000">Love the names he has given her -
</div></font></font><font color="#ff0000">Embarrassingly, there hadn't been any reason to play Bolero, and so he just stuck in the CD sometimes out of pride.<font color="#000000">was wondering where Arjun found so much stamina for so much bedroom activity, it was just to save his pride. -thank god he is not a casanova, just a hard working guy</font></font><font color="#ff0000">Maybe he'd been a little hasty to help her avoid body contact. </font><font color="#000000">Arjun chance mila tha to lene chahiye tha</font>
<font size="2"><font color="#ff0000">She could look pretty damn good all the time if she tried, which she didn't. </font>- So he thinks she is pretty and can even look more beautiful</font>

<font color="#ff0000">She had that pale surface-calm-hiding-a-passionate-nature-beneath thing going,which he found extremely seductive - </font><font color="#000000">Oh ho. he can see the passion in her, that's way cool. So he will get to discover her hidden passion - Can't wait</font>

<div><font color="#000000"></font>

Thanks 2 u 2 for reading n liking it n as the story unfolds we will know what will happen next.Wait n read tc Ps comment also
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: salmankh1

I'm still laughing at the Bolero playing all night! And Arohi'spounding on the door. That is awesome and I love the way you write. Please continue and add me to your PM list. I'm still laughing...😆

Thanks raman di n u already are in my pm list,u r a great writer,luv ur ffs tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
that was awesome
loved to every bit
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Chapter four, scene 1
"Do you want to come in?" he asked.
Arohi inhaled sharply. "No, you ?you ? oversexed monster."

Yeah, she was here about the music.
"Is this where I say, 'Ooo.I love it when you talk dirty'?"
She looked as though she wanted to take a swing at him but instead wrapped her arms across her chest and gave him a tight-jawed glare.
"You've been playing Bolero for hours. You couldn't possibly have needed it that long."
"Oh, yes, I ?"
"It kept me awake half the night and then I overslept and missed my chance for Angad khanna's tickets!" Who the hell was Angad khanna? It didn't matter.
She was really upset.Arjun thought.
"I'm sorry."
"Sorry isn't good enough!"
"Sorry's all I've got."
"Well?well, get sth else!"
A beat went by. "I'll let you yell at me some more. You can even come inside."
"No. I'm sure you're ?" her gaze flicked down his chest "--busy."
He raised an arm and leaned against the doorjamb. "I can make time for you, sugar."
She took a step back,as her anger subsided,he really was in the wrong here.
But he'd apologized already.
What more did she want?
"This year, I only wanted two things," she answered.
"Dining furniture and to hear Angad khanna in concert. It doesn't look like the dining furniture is going to happen, but I could live wth that bcoz I knew that I was going to get to hear Angad khanna. But thanks to you and your?your ? why isn't there a male word for s**tty? activities, I'm not."
"Are you more upset about the music or sex.
"I'm upset that you know I can hear you and you still?make noise."
"I can hear you, too, you know,"he said.
"There's nothing to hear in my bedroom".
"I know. My condolences." He smirked.
She inhaled sharply and stepped back to the corridor.
Edited by norchid - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you are back with update!! yay!!
hahaha!! arjun is soo funny!!
Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Brought a smile to my face! Awesome update.

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