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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Nice concept. They are going to be fighting from day 1. Love it. Please add me to your PM list

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Ok Vrsh i will try to align the words properly,actually i am updating from my mobile so,i will try to arrange it properly thanks 4 d suggestion tc

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: norchid
Ok Vrsh i will try to align the words properly,actually i am updating from my mobile so,i will try to arrange it properly thanks 4 d suggestion tc

thanks for considering my request...if you are updating fom mobile,don't use space or enter to got to the next line...that usually causes this...tc

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

hey

congrats on your first ss

you have given it an awesome start

completely enjoyed reading it

aru is arjun's irritating neighbour - hahah

i think arjun is angad - no sorry iam damn sure about it

What say norchid???? - will wait for the story to unveil

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

CHAPTER 2 scene 1 Arjun had asked arohi on breakfast.she had been so embarrassed at having overheard him the night before, she couldn't even
look him in the eye. Then, she was aghast that he'd asked her to breakfast. Even though his overnight bed partner must have left and why hadn't she fed him breakfast? Arohi just…just couldn't think straight. And because
she was embarrassed, she was sharper than she'd intended in turning him down. She'd said,
"No,and I can't believe you have the nerve to ask me." instead of"NO" " Not "No, thank you." She knew she had overreacted.Then
she'd done a little riff on the general faithlessness of men and pretty much alienated him.
Not that she cared.
Even if he did look like Angad. Angad she thought.she closed her eyes and visualized his flowing
black hair, full lips and heavy-lidded gaze. His face was on the cover of every CD he'd ever made. Arohi knew that because she owned every CD he'd ever made. She was going to try to get him to autograph one after the concert. She imagined waiting by the stage door, invited to be there because she was a fellow violinist…their eyes would meet…he'd agree to come to her school and play for her students…he'd ask her to ditch her students and come away with him…

Edited by norchid - 14 years ago

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

reserved

interesting, please continue norchid

Edited by Arjuhisis - 14 years ago

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--Anushka--

@--Anushka--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

nice updates. loved reading it. update the next part soon

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.RockstaR.

@.RockstaR.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

nice updates...
agree with varsh, me too feel may be they are angad and arjun be the same guy...
looking forward to what you have in store for us...

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

SCENE 2

The phone was answered by a recording informing her that all ticket agents were currently helping other peoples, and was put on hold.

For the next forty forty-seven minutes, the phone was glued to Arohi's ear as she cooked and ate
breakfast, assembled a music stand and plugged in her electric keyboard. All the while Bolero pulsed in the background. She was making her bed when a voice sounded in her ear.

"Thank you for calling ?"
"Yes, I want a ticket for the Angad- the Jones Hall ticket office."

A recording. "The Angad khanna concert has sold out."
"No!" Arohi shouted.
"To be placed on a waiting list,press one."
After doing so and laboriously keying in her telephone number,the recorded voice returned with, "Thank you. You are number one?hundred?twenty- three."

"I can't be number one hundred and twenty-three!" Aware that she was yelling at a recording,
Arohi disconnected and sank onto her bed, staring at the wall separating her bedroom from Arjun's. She wasn't going to the concert and it was all his fault.

Bolero finished with a crash and there was a moment of silence.Then it began again.

Arohi's fist connected with the wall. Then her foot connected with the wall."Ouch"she was hitting the wall. Then she realized that connecting her foot and fist with Arjun would be softer. Driven by a rage she hadn't known she was capable of, Arohi stormed out of her apartment,took a giant step over the potted geranium between their two front entrances and beat on Arjun's door.

Edited by norchid - 14 years ago