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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

awesome do continue!! will comment elaborately this weekend :D

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Continue...

With a gasp she grabbed for her clock.

Eight forty-five?

"oh,god,its late?"

What had happened to her alarm?she shakes the alarm.

Normally, Saturday mornings were for sleeping in, but not this Saturday. This Saturday,
she had to be on the phone by seven-thirty when the Jones Hall ticket office opened.
Angad khanna, the Angad khana, the violinist recently named one of America's sexiest
men, was coming to Houston in November.

Ever since he'd made that list, tickets to his concerts sold out instantly.He was the love of many womens n fans n she was one of them,he was her fantasy man.
Just thinking of being in the same room ?okay, auditorium ? with angad gave her a little thrill.

Looking at the shirtless picture of him in People magazine gave her a bigger one.she had a huge crush on him.

Still, as a fellow musician, Arohi counted herself as a true fan and not one lured by his bulging biceps or the smoldering looks he gave the camera as he caressed his violin.
Looking at the concert advertisement in the paper, she grabbed the telephone and punched in the number for the ticket office.

Busy.

She'd expected the line to be busy, but she'd expected to be trying to get through much earlier.

She wanted a ticket. Just one. At any price. She was even raiding her dining furniture fund ?
that's how badly she wanted a ticket.

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Sanjeeda

@MsSweetheart96

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

nyc concept... cnt w8 2 read further :)

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Sanjeeda

@MsSweetheart96

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

res*

*the 1st chapter seems 2 b really gud...

nyc start... luv the concept nd the update...

update soon nd plz add me 2 ur pm list 😊

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

thnx for pm...

lovely concept n

plz try to make ur chappys long!!!!!!!

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Actually i will be updating from my mobile so i can only give short updates,but dont worry i will give atleast 2 short update =1 long update,hope u understand

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.RockstaR.

@.RockstaR.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

congrats fr ur ss... best of luck...
okk they are neighbors... interesting...
arjun is a playboy... whom arohi loathes...
and this angad... arohi has a crush on him... dislike this guy...
continue soon...

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Chapter 1 scene 3

She was constantly on phone but because of Arjun and his late-night entertaining,she might not get it. She hit redial.Still busy.She hung up and hit Redial again. And again.

She got into a rhythm, but when she realized that she was hitting. Redial in time to the beat from the apartment next door, she stopped. Okay. There was no need to panic yet.She was going to dress, then try again from the portable phone in the kitchen.
Arohi wanted to put on shorts and a sweatshirt, but mindful of the violin students who'd begin arriving at ten o'clock, she dressed for a six-hour day of giving private lessons,mean while she got through to the ticket office and was put on hold.

During the week, she taught middle school music and supplemented her salary by teaching privately on Saturdays & Wednesday evenings. Though she loved her job, there were times when she craved real adult music amid an audience she didn't have to take on rest room breaks and lecture on concert manners.She wanted a peaceful,civilized evening in civilized company, something her uncivilized neighbor probably wouldn't understand.

Arjun bore a strong resemblance to her hormone-saturated students.whomostly attended her class to flirt wth her not that she mind themthey were like childrento her.Its not that shenever had any relationship,she had dated many times,not recently though,but the magic,passion was missing.Angad was her dream boy handsome n musician,who might understand her passion.

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Simran sharma

@norchid

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Unfortunately, he also bore a strong resemblance to Angad.

When she'd first seen Arjun,she'd stared,momentarily disoriented, thinking that her fantasy man had appeared on her doorstep.

Could she help it if she had the tiniest, er, maybe not so tiny crush on Angad? Wasn't it reasonable that some of that crush would transfer to her Angad-look-alike neighbor? Completely understandable that he might stand in for Angad in a fantasy or two?

Say, the one where they were selected to be on the local show like Single Design,where she could finally got her elegant dining nook and as a bonus get to soundproof his bedroom?

Back when she was home her parents,two bros n her used to dine together in their dining room.she really missed those days,more than that she hated dining in the couch,this was her home n a home should have everything a dinning nook too.

Back to reality.

Yeah, like that was going to happen,stop dreaming arohi. She'd entered several times ? dutifully
writing a different one-page essay each week right up until she'd heard the first chorus of Arjun's nightly entertainment.

And then he'd had the guts to proposition her before his sheets had cooled ? that very next day ? the next morning ? a Sunday when they both found themselves walking back from the corner convenience store with a copy of the newspaper.

Arjun-"It looks as though I'm going to be staying in Houston awhile," Arjun had said.

"Usually I'm sent from place to place and never get to know my neighbors.

Now that I've got the chance, how about going to breakfast with me?".

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

great job yar! its becoming more wonderful by the minute and something makes me think that angad and arjun are the same (something like hannah montana) hehe!

umm...one suggestion or request,if you dont mind, please make the sentences allign properly...its a bit difficult to read...

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