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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations on your new ff...

Just reading the first chapter has already brought tears to my eyes.
Please update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi anusha,
great start
congrats for the new ff
looking forward to reading it
please pm me also
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks 4 ur support guyz
am feeling very very happy with all of ur support
and am still working on the next update
so i will post it on Friday
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vegesnaanu

Thanks 4 ur support guyz

am feeling very very happy with all of ur support
and am still working on the next update
so i will post it on Friday

will wait anusha
thanks for the note
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its awesomeee...luvd it...pm me...n continue soon...tc :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey it's awesome and thanx 4 the pm:) update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the ff plz send me pm n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: love.1

Dont know what to say... speechless!

The concept of the FF is so different from other FF's. Your writing and the storyline has brought tears to my eyes. I really feel for the two girls... how it must feel to find out something like this, the pain, the hurt, everything. 😭
Please do update soon, 😊
Thanks

thanks 4 liking my work
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Originally posted by: poo25

love the ff plz send me pm n update soon

accep ma buddy...req
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi friends
m back with the update nd a big thanks for liking my work. dis time am giving a short update but next time i will make it long.PMs later...



Flashback:

I completed Architecture and planned to do Ms in Australia but my father wants me to join his business so he sent me to U.S to get an MBA degree, there i met Sanchit, he is going to be my room mate for the next 2 years.coincidentally he is also 4m Mumbai he is a nice guy n we became best of friends in few days itself.

After completing MBA we both landed in Mumbai n we both left to our houses.After reaching my home, i saw my mom Savita Singhania waiting near the door for me, i went to her nd hugged her tightly bcoz i feel she is best mom in the world, she has tears in her eyes nd kissed my forehead. and then i saw Michael, he is my cousin but stays with us n he loves me lik his own brother, wen ever am in a problem he will be the first person to solve it, i too lov him a lot...

He came towards me nd hugged me nd we both are very happy to see each other nd then my eyes started searching 4 my dad nd to my surprise he is sitting in the sofa nd he looked at me nd said come in, am just waiting 4 u... i felt tears in my eyes with happiness bcoz this is the first tim my dad is waiting 4 me but my happiness diddnt last long even for few seconds wen i heard a voice 4m by back, den i understood that my father is not waiting 4 me but 4 his manager, i got disappointed a lot but i went to my father nd wished him he just said hi nd asked me to take rest as he has meeting with his manager...

I went to my room with anger, i wanted to shout loudly to throw my pain out but my mom nd Michael came to my room, my mom sat besides me nd said "Dad loves u very much". i just looked at her nd asked her---" since my childhood u were saying this nd am listening to this, but how many days mom? i want to see the love n i want to feel the love nd warmth 4m my father, dont i deserve this happiness mom? my mom had tears in her eyes, we both hugged tight nd cried..

Michael bhayya watched this nd tried to lighten the situation by saying some jokes nd made us laugh, after that, me nd bhayya went out nd spend all the evening by racing nd drinking..

next day Sanchit came to my house nd took me to his house, he introduced me to his family, his family is very cool nd mainly his father, he is very close to Sanchit n by seeing their father- son bonding i felt very bad bcoz i am missin dat bond in my life nd sanchit also had a sister i spoke with her few times but till now i didnt see her n she is very cool nd lovable nd today also i didnt see her as she is working as a software engineer n she didnt return 4m her work.Me nd Sanchit came towards the main gate by talking abt diff stuff nd suddenly his mom called him so he went inside.

i am just watching the empty road standing near the gate nd i thought to my self that my life is becoming dry nd dull with out any excitement thats wen i saw her, "love made me fall for her",something made me to look at her constantly and i felt good, may be her keen eyes and confident face made me lik dat, Everything about her was so pure and so innocent that it was touching my heart deeply.

she is the most beautiful person i had seen n wen the distance between us is getting small i noticed some spark in her eyes nd she left her hair loose nd the main thing is she is wearing a saree, that is the first time i believed the beauty of saree, i dont understand whether the saree makes her look beautiful or her beauty is making the saree look lik dat... i wanted to see her lik that 4 my whole life standing there, suddenly she came walking towards me nd asked me something...

Her voice is echoing lik a music in my ears lik a soft melody making me feel vibrations in my bodyshe looked at me nd started signalling wid hands may be she thought am dumb but how can i say her that i got dumb struck by her beauty nd her voice, i cant find words to admire her beauty nd after seeing her hands i feel lik touching dem to feel the softness of her hands... but still she is asking me something but 4 my ears it is only a music.

And suddenly a voice interrupted me, i got my senses back nd looked at Sanchit, he is coming towards me...

Edited by Anusha.V - 14 years ago

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