pyarisi zindagi ka ehsas...chap6 pg 20 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Friends
Thanks for ur feedback
i will post the update tomorrow
i wil try to reach ur expectations
but plz bear with me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww...
great concept..
am also waiting to knw deir love story...

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very nice intro plz continue and pm me plz 😊😃
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plz continue soon
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awsome luv da concepy ov da story
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hyy add me to ur pm list...lukin forward to the updates! :)
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Hi friends

Am writing 4 de first time, so plz bear wid me n if u find any mistakes plz excuse. so here is the update


PART-1

Alia and Akriti are more of friends than sisters, they share nd talk abt everything in their life.They love their parents very much nd they hav everything in deir life, they feel like they are the luckiest persons in the world.

But destiny has something else in store for them,they are going to get a big shock in dier life the next day, it is their 18th birthday...
As the clock strikes 12 at night Rashi and Rajveer came to wish dem, Rash nd Rajveer hugged their daughters wished them nd left the room.
Alia nd Akriti didnt understand bcoz every year Rashi nd Rajveer wish them nd giv the gifts nd they all spend the whole night together with chatting, smiles, pranks etc.. but this year its too different so they went to Rashi nd Rajveer to know abt the problem
As soon as they entered the room they saw Rashi nd Rajvver wiping their tears, they went to dem nd started asking
Aalia nd Akriti: wat happened dad
Rajveer: nothing beta, seeing my little angels grown up i felt a bit emotional
Aalia nd Akriti: smiled and says dont be filmy dad... ok wer is our birthday gifts?
Rajveer: everytime i am giving u de gifts, this time u hav to give me a gift.
Aalia nd Akriti: they look at each other nd says ok fine... Anything 4 u dad
Rajveer: you both should never leave us
Aalia nd Akriti: wat? why will we leave u? wat happened to u dis day? u both are behaving very wierd..
Rajveer : Tomorrow there is a party in our house, we are going to giv u a big surprise, after receiving that surprise plz dont leave us, we cant live with out u
Aalia nd Akriti: oh common dad, we dont know wat the surprise is but we will never leave u and we will never think of leaving u...
Rashi: Promise?
Aalia nd Akriti: promise and hugged both Rashi and Rajveer and left to their room.
In the morning
Aalia nd Akriti came down and took blessings 4m deir parents and they celebrated the day with their jokes nd etc nd they all had their lunch together nd enjoyed but Aaliya nd Akriti noticed the tension in their parents face
In the evening guests started coming and Rajveer receiving the guests
Aaliya nd Akriti come down in a beautiful gown one wearing red colour nd another in yellow with an asymmetrical just one bear strap and also fine petals highlighted with a good solid fragile center and additional layers associated with chiffon.They are looking like two angels coming down from the sky.
Rajveer moves towards them nd hugs dem and handover a silver moulded box to them, they open it and found a key in it, they looked at Rajveer, he tells dat it is their favourite car Peugeot. They both shouted in Unison nd hug Rashvir nd den dey meet deir friends and hav fun wid dem, Suddenly Aaliya nd Akriti notices some new faces, they appear lik big officers with files in their hands...
After the cake cutting, Rajveer nd Rashi take them to other room where all the officers are waiting.. Officers handover some papers to Aalia nd Akriti to sign, they both look at Rajveer nd Rashi they just nod in agreement, and they both sign the papers.
And then officers tell dem that now u both became the legal owners of singhanias property.
Aalia nd Akriti: what?
Lawyer: yes Madam, till now ur property is maintained by your guardian Michael Singhania after your parents death
Aalia: wat? my parents death?
Akriti: Are u mad? My parents are standing before u nd u are saying that my parents are dead
lawyr: Rashi nd Rajveer are not ur biological parents
Aalia nd Akriti: shouts at lawyers and ask them to leave immediately
lawyer: rashi nd Rajveer u shld explain dem nd before leaving they hand over some papers and a book to Aaliya nd Aakriti.
Aaliya nd Akriti just stand there wid blank expressions, they dont understand wat just happened and they were in a shock nd disbelief.
Rashi notices this and moves towards them and held their hands tightly
Aalia nd Akriti come back to their senses and asks Rajveer: wats all this dad? wat are they saying abt?
Rajveer: am sorry beta, watever they said, it is true. we are not your biological parents, we adopted u after ur parents death.
Aalia nd Akriti just stood their like a stone, the world just stopped 4 dem in dat min, they didnt understand how to react, they just hope that watever they heard now should be a dream and everything will be fine wen they wake up 4m sleep, they just closed their eyes in a hope nd opened but everything remains same.
The parents who gave all the love from their childhood are not their own parents, they are adopted children. They dont understand whether to love Rashi nd Rajveer more than before as they gave a wonderful life or to get angry as they hid the important truth of their life...
Rashi just hug them nd ask them to read the book so that they can know everything .
By saying this Rashveer left the room leaving Aalia nd Akriti in the room.

Aalia nd Akriti opened the book nd find a picture of Arjun and Arohi. Tears rolled down their eyes and they just hug the pic, they felt the special affection nd love towards Arjun nd Arohi.
at that moment they felt "Pyaari si zindagi ka Ehsaas"
Edited by vegesnaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well i read it b4...bt awesome...di...i luv ur ritin...
Edited by mansi_47 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start !

plz pm me when you update :)
Edited by ...Sheher... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waiting for the story to be unfolded by the diary... good start...

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