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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ruky, i have started having a passion for your ff now - its a good start - i have a feeling that this ff would turn out to be just great - pls update regularly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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U r writing so well that i resist myself 4m commentng. I luv today's part,oh nik,dostana flavour. I dnt knw what u hv kept in ur mind bt i defintly say,it wl gr8. Bt i wud luv if they feel sm emotion be4 baby's entry. I luv arohi's last statement a lot. Gr8 wrk dr. Superb.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
that was superb
now i think arjun may care for the baby
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wah dear..its too good !!
n i liked d d way aru reacted to arjun ..
i wnder y he dint evn thnk abt his baby?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am really liking this FF..loved Arohi's dialougue at the end..hope Arjun starts to feel something for both Arohi and their baby
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome one end was too emotional hope they help each other and start understanding soon ad thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Anupa28

I am really liking this FF..loved Arohi's dialougue at the end..hope Arjun starts to feel something for both Arohi and their baby


Thanks anupa,thank you for the comment and for liking the Ff
Hopefully soon
T.c
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...wenz the next update??
its so damn nice!! i want your update asap! plz tell me when its gonna be??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ruky07


hey arohi,arjun
sorry dnt know ur name
oh no nt salaam namaste agen. lmao.
but anyway thankyou for the comment, i knw when she's big she will need help :)
T.c

My Name is Tia
Looking forward nxt update. wehn ur updating nxt??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Scan Time
Arjun, quietly knocked on Arohi bedroom door.
"Can I come in?"

"No"she yelled."Arjun as normal did not listen and entered her bedroom.she was sitting on the floor hurt.he came and sat beside her.

"Arohi stop being stubborn and eat this. "he handed the plate over to her." yeah you were right about the party, it's going to take sometime for me to adjust.it won't happen again, now eat up, I can see you have not eaten all day."

He cleared his throat." next eat somthing during the day,I want my child.. t.to be healthy."

"Well am not sorry for throwing your guest out nor screaming at you." she snapped.(well try being nice you chudail) he rose and left the room to go to sleep.

The week passed arohi was busy with her article and Arjun was busy with hotel. They argued a lot but somehow had the strength to face each other repeatledly in the morning.

Couple of weeks later (shes 12 weeks) Arohi and Arjun agreed that they would hold a Saturday late brunch with Ria, Sid, Neev and Sara.

(Saturday 11:00 am)

There was a loud bang on the door. Arohi opened it, the gang came altogther.they all hugged each other and sat outside the patio. " "so what's cooking"Sid asked Arohi. "There is toast, egg, salad, quiche, risotto, crissontants, begal..."

Arjun entered the garden; he was wearing White polo ralph Lauren t-shirt with beige shorts.

"Hey guys "he smiled. He then headed to the kitchen. "I don't like risotto." He moaned. Keep talking. I always yawn when I'm interested and everyone is entitled to their own opinion. It's just that yours is stupid." Arohi said sardonically.(B***h)

The girls finished cooking everything and the food was placed on the deck outside.
They all sat down on the table to start eating.They all began to indulge in conversations until Neev asked Arohi.

"How is it living with Arjun Arohi?"Neev asked."erm'it crap, it's not that I have to see his face everyday but he is. He's so lazy that if there were work in bed, he would rather sleep on the floor and when he says I have heard you actually Translated as I haven't the foggiest clue what you just said, and am hoping desperately that I can fake it well enough so that you don't spend the next three days yelling at me." . Arjun gave her a wicked smile. "Your mother Theresa. "He said sarcastically. "oh please don't start arguing" Sara complained. Sid began to laugh Arjun your face reminds me of when you Strawberry lookalike contest and he won."Arjun laughed. "You cried. "He said mockingly. "You kissed a guy"

"That was you."

"How did we end up with these jerks" Arohi sighed. "Maybe were magnets" Ria suggested.

"hey Ria and Sara I was wondering if your available on Tuesday would you come with me to my scan." Arohi requested. "yeah sure" they said in unison. "why isn't Arjun going?" Sara asked."Arjun why are not going with Arohi on Tuesday to the scan?" she said in a insisting tone. He felt a bit taking aback by the question you could see he felt embarrassed. "be..Because..i.i...Need to attend a meeting.

The time flew in the friends company; soon it was time for them to leave.

"Arohi can I have a word with you."Neev Said in a soft tone. "Yeah"

"I know you have given alot for this coming child.I just want you to know that when ever you need anything I"ll be here.I just want the best for you, I know how Arjun can be, if there is any problem..."

"Yes get the no point in getting violent neev bhai, Arjun Is an easy task (more like a task that never be will be finished) if there is any problem I'll let you know."

"Are you sure"

"Yes I am" she said in a postive tone.

They friends left and once again the apartment fell silent.she sat down on the coach and turned the TV, so she could avoid any conversation with Arjun.it have been living together for 2 months but there was a slight improvement in the relationship

He sat next to her.he stared at the TV for a while before starting a conversation."Is it possible that, instead of Ria and Sara I could co..Come with you to the baby scan,if ria does not mind." he mumbled."(What's happened to him?)Yeah sure "she nodded."Is there anything you need?"

"Nope, but I'll let you know if I do." she replied.all that was needed to be done was to tell my work.

(Monday morning elle)

She got ready for work wearing louse blouse and brown chino trousers

Arohi entered work and knocked on Mrs Kalra office door."Come in"

"(now smile for the crippled cow) she shut the Door behind her.

"Could I have a word with you about taking a half day tomorrow" arohi asked sweetly."Why?"She said in a demanding tone.(once I've told her the whole work place will.oh well..) "I've got an appointment for the doctor in the morning, for a scan."

"scan?" she asked in a conused manner." baby scan" I replied in an unconfident tone." when did you get married?"

"I am not" she secreeched." oh...I see, yes go ahead you can have the morning off tomorrow" the conversation ended and arohi left her office to return to her desk."hi babes" nick smiled."hey" I said in a low tone." why are you so glum?"He questioned."Nothing"

"Okay on Tuesday you have to help me with a photoshoot."

"errrm...I can't because (oh I think it's time) am goin for a baby scan." nick looked shocked."baby..I can't even see a bump are you joking with me."i nodded " I am not" nick blinked contionously "who? When? You never told me you had a boyfriend Tell me all about it" he demanded. "Remember goa 3 months ago, it was a huge mistake, and yes am not dating anyone."

"so who's the father?" he said surprisingly."Arjun singhana, mohan singhana son." he began to laugh."You mean playboy Arjun singhania."

"Yup" I responded. "He's hot! I wish I could get my hands on him, but I don't think he is the type to'sick by you, if you know what I am getting at."

"Yeah, I know what you mean, but if he does not I will break his haddi"

"By the way I saw him with on the models that other day, they were."Arohi cut him."I don't want to know what he does and does not do."

"Okay calm down, lady. I'll zip it."

(Tuesday morning)

Arohi and Arjun entered the clinic. They doctor asked a few questions before the scan.

Doctor: has there been any problem so far?

Arohi: nope there has not.

The doctor noted down, the important things he needed to, he then started the scanning procedure.

Doc: is this your first child, since you have been married?

Arjun: yes it is, and were not a couple?(ewww how could you think she was my wife.)

Doc: as you know a good diet and stress free pregnancy is the best (well try explaining to this gorilla to stop annoying me.)Arohi smiled. "Yes I know he keeps good care of me."Arjun gave her a dirty.

The doctor started to operate the ultra sound machine on her Stomach. The baby was visible on the screen. Arohi began to smile. "(I can't see it, is that blob..Shall I ask her; forget it am going to look dumb.)He nudged Arohi and whispered in her ear."I can't see it?" I guess the doctor heard and pointed it out. The you could hear its heartbeat. Arohi began to cry, Arjun took hold of her hand and lightly smiled. Just then through that baby's heartbeat he felt something special. It was just then when he realized soon something else would take over his world for good. He was going to become a father.

thanks for reading,

Criticism welcome :) hit the like

Edited by Ruky07 - 14 years ago

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