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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow. so their parents are definetly going to frce them ot marry now thatthe babys on the way i mean if they want them to get married and now they already hav a child well obviously thyre gonna be married. cant wait to se their parents reaction about the baby! update next chapter soon! thannnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nyc update 👏 vl be waiting 4 ur nxt update...thnx 4 d pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the pm - great update - was shocked when arjun walked out of the cafe but good to know that he is taking responsibility.
please update regularly
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: moonkmh

What a cool lyf yaar? U dnt want 2 marry bt cn hv a child. Ekta maiya ke soap pe ye scene 3tyms sounds effct ke sath dikhate.I luv sara,she is so nice n undrstandng.
M hvng d feelng of watch salam namaste.Gr8 job.


Yup lmao ur correct but u forgot about the thunder sound effect at the background and the close up of the faces.
I have seen the film but they liked Each these 2 dont, but yup there are aspects that are similar.
Cheers :) thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cybergali

wow. so their parents are definetly going to frce them ot marry now thatthe babys on the way i mean if they want them to get married and now they already hav a child well obviously thyre gonna be married. cant wait to se their parents reaction about the baby! update next chapter soon! thannnx


Well u have to wait and see,it could be marriage or not
All will be revealed in the Nxt chapter:)
Thanks for the comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: brainychild92

wow.. every unexpected-nonwedded "to-be parent" goes through that "i cant even take care of my self" stage.. thank god sara was there to knock some sense into him!
lets see how the parents react..and planning too..
continue soon!!


Hey brainchild92
Sorry dnt knw ur name
Yup that's true :) Sara the saviour.
Thanks for reading and for the comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
please update soon, cant wait any longer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gone Against the Words


"What!" Arohi dad's yelled. Arjun gulped. "How could you both do this, bring shame on your families is that how me have brought you up." Arjun dad stood up. "That's it, you're both getting married, and I don't want any ifs or buts."

"no" Arohi yelled,"i am not marrying this crank; he is an oaf, the B.U.T, meaning he is a big, ugly troll."(Crank, is she from the streets)"Chudail, who would want to marry to, have you ever seen face in the mirror you look like a burnt jelabi" Arjun screamed across the room. "both of you calm down" said Arohi's dad in a dominate tone."

"Stop, behaving like 6 olds, even they behave better than this, get your acts together." Said Arjun mom. "Mom, everyone I don't want to marry this women, but me and Arohi have decided, that were both going to raise the child together by living together in an flat, were moving in together."

"Is this how I raised you Arohi, I expected better from you." Arohi began to cry. Arjun argued with the elders to make them agree, but they did not. "Am taking this step even if you guys do not agree, because I cannot spend my entire life with someone I don't like." Arohi said in a confident behaviour. "Me to."

There was a nervousness as well as anger surrounding the room's atmosphere."Fine, if that what you both want then, I am with you." Said Arjun father. "Wait Mohan (Arjun father) what are you saying, Arohi if you take this decision, I w...won't accept you or this baby in our family and that's final." With that note Arohi's father left the house with her mother.

(Shift scene- to the flat)

Arjun and Arohi got the keys to they new brought flat. Arjun put the key in the keyhole and turned the key. He opened the door and they both entered in. The flat was situated in the heart of Mumbai, so it would be easier both to access they work place. When they entered through the front door it was comprised with a spacious lounge. It compromised of French doors and it was illuminated by a beautiful modern lighting. There where 3 corner cream and red sofas which made a semi circle shape, with a coffee table. With an open kitchen to the left of the lounge, next to the kitchen was a huge sliding door which opens to a wooden and concerted patio and with a swimming pool. In the central hall off are 3 bedrooms with a bathroom each.

"I am taking the master bedroom" Arjun demanded. "Fine "Arohi replied. (Fine, is she okay why she being so nice, must be something wrong). Just then there was a knock on the door. Arjun opened the door. It was Neev, Sara, Sid and Ria."Hey guy, come in." The guys went to help Arjun unpack and the girls went with Arohi.

(Girls)

Ria: "so, what's the plan, with you and Arjun."

Arohi:"I have not made a plan yet, Ria I've just started unpacking."(gone to get drink from the kitchen)

Sara: "it's a real brave step you have taken Aro"

"Could we stop talking about the baby, please?" Arohi requested. "I've just heard whilst in the kitchen you have you given him the master bedroom,noo no sister you can not do that, he's going to start walking over you, take a stand women. Ria said as she marched out on to the patio. "You let him have the master bedroom, how could you, i know he's my brother, but even I know not to hand things over to him."Sara held. "So you want me to get it." Arohi said in a confused manner. "YEAH!!" sara and Ria said in unison.

(Boys)

Sid: Good luck man, hope you survive the 8 months, bit of advice form Mr. Siddharth, don't let her control you, women are control freaks.

Arjun: watt !!, she's going to control me, guess what she's given me the master bedroom, she was being nice it was weird.

Sid:"yup now that's weird, first they nice then they churn you like a mixer. (neev's entered)."Shut up Neev is coming, don't talk about Arohi." Arjun whispered to sid."What do you think there discussing outside" Arjun wondered. "Your death!" Neev replied as he sipped on his drink "and I am not lying, they feed each other with words and strategies which they apply on us."

(Girls)

They went to help Arohi unpack her things in her bedroom.

"You want to help with the cushions" sid asked Ria. "Oh I wish I could but don't want to"

"Are you looking forward to this?" Sara raised. "To tell you the truth its seems it just an compromise, i am just going along with it." Arohi responded. They all finished unpacking they stuff and met in the living room. "Are going to get a handy man to fix the shelf's." Ria asked."Nope I am going to do it myself."Arohi responded. Sid chuckled. "why can't you don't think women can do it" said Arohi and Ria."errmmm.. They can, you can't."

"i'll prove it to you, when you come here next time they will be up."

"I think we should all get going."

"Hey what's the rush" Arohi question. "It's Monday tomorrow and were all going to work." They all moaned. As they friends left, they apartment fell silent. Until Arjun began to sing

Humne ghar chhoda hai,Rasmon ko toda hai

Door kahin jaayenge nayi duniya basaanyenge

Tere bin jeena pade din voh kabhi an aaye.

(dil- Humne ghar chhoda)

"Shut you trap !(lout !! kitna baysura,half a brainier, he's lawn mower, that never starts.) " but Arjun just kept on singing." Keep talking...Someday you'll say something intelligent." Then he finally stopped and headed to the bedroom."AROHIII"he came running out. "Why is there your stuff in the master bedroom?"he yelled. Arohi looked up. "Well... I changed my mind, I want it know, sweet dreams darling, oh enjoy your new bedroom." She gave him a cheeky smile and walked off to go to sleep.

(Next morning)

Arohi got dressed for work and entered the kitchen. "What's that smell. "She coughed. "It my scrambled eggs "Arjun replied. "Do you want some?"

"No thanks" (why is he being so nice). "How do you like your eggs in the morning? Then Arohi"
Arohi answered back by saying "Unfertilized!"

( omd I think I am going to be sick) she grabbed the nearest object to her, she could not hold it in and puked.Arjun started at her. (Did she just puke on my plate of eggs ewww)."What have you done, you know how long it took me to make them, I was so proud of my achievement and you just ruined it."Arjun yelled. "Sorry, here you go. It was the smell" handing the plate over to him, she reached for a glass of water.

5 minutes past with both of them just looking at each other, as if they were going to rip each other eyeballs out. Arohi could not stand his face for another minute; she grabbed her bag and left for work. As she was about to leave Arjun called her?"Arohi, I would like to say something to you, if you die in the elevator just make sure you press the button up, cheers." She was not in the mood to argue (keep cool, you going to get thought this nightmare on Elm Street, where Arjun is Freddy Krueger). "Pardon me, but you've obviously mistaken me for someone who gives a damn."

She walked off. As she walked of she thought 32 weeks more of him please help me !!!!


thanks for reading

Hope you enjoyed the update and criticism welcome :)

Edited by Ruky07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
its awesome! update the next update soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wao! They moved to flat...nice going. Btw what they hv plannd yaar? Means aftr d baby's entry they r planng 2 b separate. They r jst together 4 baby's born? I guess they wl fall in luv in dis 32 week. Thanx 4 remindng me abt dat thundr effect. I luv ekta maiya btw,bcz nly 4 her,we get karan,kritz n kmh.thank god there was no 3 tyms head turng,thundr effact in kmh. Btw,i luv ur ff. Cmpltely bindass n open.

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