FF arjuhi..story with a bit of comedy - Page 12

guys what about the suggestion on how should arjun start the convo??

thanks for pm, loved how arohi showed that varun. go girl. cant wait to see what you have instore for there first convo.

Originally posted by: sezo

thanks for pm, loved how arohi showed that varun. go girl. cant wait to see what you have instore for there first convo.

humm convo sugestions hey, let me see: i would probally start with arohi moving away from the bench and arjun catching her wrist, and then turns her around so she is so close that only inches apart and he then states: so ms unkown someone can actually make you cry, as with all the attitude you show, would think that it would be others who would be crying.

sorry if not good but i'm not good at writing like you, but something along this would be great, but you go with what you feel.

thanks for pm again.

ps: love the long updates and plz to pm me again

hey thanks for the suggestion...well Arjun was even scared to sit beside her...i don't think he would take the risk of going close to her and catch her wrist...he has already seen what happened with Varun...n i don't think he will prefer getting slapped by the girl...so he would try to stay away from her as much as he can...but yes i liked the line...will surely use it...😊

waiting for d romantic scenes

I have embaressed me front Of the whole klass today, We got five min break under tht time i read this FF, and the flirting part came i laugh so much tht fell of My stol plus ididnt get up i just laughed more. But too good Part

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans

I have embaressed me front Of the whole klass today, We got five min break under tht time i read this FF, and the flirting part came i laugh so much tht fell of My stol plus ididnt get up i just laughed more. But too good Part

hahaha...lol...I am glad you liked the part😊

hey first of all i was the fan of the movie itself
and you are making the ff for my faqv. jodi
with the first part i thought you are going to put the same script not that am complaining i just thought
but you changed it in your own way
i am really liking it
make it more romantic
but please keep the innocense and attitude of protagonists and keep it only decent (in the sence no triangle love stiry and all)

Originally posted by: pallavi_bs

hey first of all i was the fan of the movie itself
and you are making the ff for my faqv. jodi
with the first part i thought you are going to put the same script not that am complaining i just thought
but you changed it in your own way
i am really liking it
make it more romantic
but please keep the innocense and attitude of protagonists and keep it only decent (in the sence no triangle love stiry and all)

even i liked the movie and arjuhi...so i decided to make ff on arjuhi with this story...so i kept the initial plot as it is. But if u remember the movie, genelia is a lot innocent and arohi isn't like that...so i introduced her as someone who can fight back and teach lesson to flirts like varun...not, there won't be a love triangle...the story will have bits of the movie bomarillu even after this. for eg: his dad finding him a girl, then their love affair, little romantic, little fights, little comedy...and then i like the seven days concept...i might introduce that too...but make it more hilarious than the movie...hope you would like it...

This is AWESOME. The convo between Varun and the Girl was cool an witty. Please continue.