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Posted: 14 years ago
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k last part until further inspiration strokes.. i mean strikes!!😉

Part 6:
cut to Arohi's room:
Arjun walks in and sees Arohi sitting on the bed crying. He sits next to her and before he can say a word, she leans on his shoulder and starts, "Why Arjun, Ab pheron ki kya zarurat thi. Mujhe yahan se jaana tha!"

Arjun pulls her face up to him, so their eyes can meet. He tells her, "Arohi, aaj tumhe dekh kar, mujhe yeh ehsaas hua ke meine jab tumse shaadi ki thi, mere mann mein badle ke thoughts the, aur tumhe laga tha ke tum chiku se shaadi kar rahi ho. Phir shaadi ke baad, meine tumhare saath nafrat ke phere liye. Ab jab ke humari kahani ek naya mod le rahi hai, ek naye sire se shuru ho rahi hai, toh mein chahta hun, ke iss baar hum Mohabbat ke phere le. Mein saari duniya ko batana chahta hun, ke mujhe tumse Kitani Mohabbat Hai. Aur phir tumhi ne toh kaha tha ki mere saath khubsurat future banana chahti ho. kal hum dobara phere lenge, aur unn saare purane misunderstandings aur thoughts ko erase karke ek nayi yaad banayenge!! Kismat ne hume jo mauka diya hai, hume usse gavana nahi chahiye!!"

Kismat Se BG 😍☺️

Arohi stared at him, her head teeming with all those memories. He was right. This was the most beautiful way to start afresh!! They had hurt each other a lot and now it was time to rebuild. She hugged him, with silent tears flowing down her cheeks.

Arjun knew and understood her thoughts. "Girls!! har baat pe waterworks!!", he smiled to himself. He held her and asked
"Agar tum yeh nahi chahti ho toh bata doh, mein abhi daddu se..", Arohi looked up sharply!! "Nahi!! Karni hai, mujhe shaadi karni hai!!",
Arjun: Accha!! Wifey, tumhe badi jaldi hai??
Arohi: kyun dear husband, tumhe nahi hai kya?
Arjun: Nahi, mujhe bhi hai. But if you remember, humari shaadi ho chuki hai, toh hume kal tak wait karne ki koi zarurat toh nahi...😈
Arohi hijacks him mid-sentence, "...par hum wait karenge!!"

She gives him a sly look and changes topic,
"Humare vajah se kitane logon ki life par asar pada hai na.. Rashi, Raj, Chachu.. "
Arjun: "Voh sab thik hai. Rashi aur Raj, especially tumhare vajah se thik hai, aur tumhare rajvir chachu. Woh toh hamesha se hi gusse mein rehta tha na, uska kya kar sakte hain hum ab!!"

Arohi shoots him an angry look, and sees that he is just pulling her leg. But seeing her tear-stained face, Arjun asks,
Arjun: "abb, roh kyun rahi ho?"
Arohi: "Pata nahi!"
Arjun: "Stupid!!"
Arohi: "you stupid!!", she retortd by elbowing him!
Arjun: "Ow!!"
Arohi: "Sorry, sorry!!"
Arjun smiled and replied, "Accha stupid, ek baat bataun, mein iss kamre me pehle bhi bohot baar aaya hun. Right? Lekin aaj pehli baar, main door se, sabke saamne, puri Ahluwalia family ke saamne, unki marzi se yahan tak pahuncha hun. Feels cool na? TUm hamesha se hi yahi chahti thi na? Ek perfect love story, jis me sabki marzi ho!"

Arohi hugs him tightly and speaks into his heart, "Humesha se!! I really hope, abb humari iss love story mein aur koi twist na aaye."

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Ending here now.. am not going into the RPS scene..because I want to know the raaz first.. its khatarnak stuff.. too hot to handle!! Plus, the raaz has been so hyped, it will take maha-planning to infuse any ounce of logic n humor in it which I am sure it grandly lacks!! 🤓

All your appreciation is appreciated and all critical analysis is evermore welcome. Would love to get your input on exactly how crazy my thoughts are, you see 😳
Edited by aksh4IF - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
BG bhi add kia.... wah wah.. Kithani Progress Hai..🤣🤣🤣🤣 nice ending, but yeh THE END nahi hai na...... Raaz kya hai yaar??? Ab batha hi do RPS.. i can't wait any longer.. even a secret looses it's pull once it's been stretched for too long....wish he'd reveal it soon.. so that we can move on...

Aksh fab job.. can't say more than that cuz i aint creative enough..🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
thnx rosh.. but why u giving rest to ur creativity?? i need some rosh-style appreciation here 😈..
agree wid u.. ab raaz khul hi jaaye!!! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Aksh.... Nicely written once again.. Esp the kismat se bg.... Luved it ... Wished the cvs had also played it.... It would have suited the scene well....

I am alos waiting desperately for the raaz to open....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
haye super duper 😍😍😍
i just loved it,,,,,,,,
n ur r yt raaz s too hot to handlee
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesome awesome awesome. Aksh u made my day. not only did you make the ullus take care and apologize to arjun but you also made the remarriage to be arjun's decision . Kudos to u buddy . I am going to link the part to kmh2 fb pg and tell CVs that this is how it should have been.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
AWESOME AKSH YOU HAVE MADE IT MORE FUN THAN THE EPISODE.
i loved how you made bua take care of arjun he needed it wished someone actually took care of him. well at least you did.
the hollywood bit is great actually they both should go then their wont be a problem.and they will stay together.
you are doing a great job keep continuing.i laughed while reading it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
thnx kavya, imtiaz.. i was not happy wid those things in the epi n so i vented here.. its gr8 u guyz liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
👏 aksh ab seriousnes se bahar niklo aur hamme thodi comedy doo!!! hehe!!!
ajj ke epi neh toh pagal kardiya hai!!!
waitin for ur nxt upate!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Akshu loved the serious parts cv's should have handled it this way...

RES for now not coherent for some reason will come back and edit when my lazyness permits

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