FF: Arjun Arohi ka karwa chauth [Updtd prt 2 pg 3]

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay I know this is very early to write this but I was feeling like writing something in sync with the story and I really liked this concept my friend tanu had told me so I wanted to write on it...This one is dedicated to tanu....

Well this was actually supposed to be an OS but it became a bit too long so I made it into a two part FF...will update the next part tomorrow'hope u guys like it do give me u're feed back silent readers can press the like button instead'


In this FF the words written in bold italics like this represent the conversations between charecters


Arjun Arohi ka karwa chauth part 1

Arjun and arohi had come a long way since their marriage...in the beginning they didn't even consider it as a marriage...they were living in the same room were so close but then too they were miles apart because of the distance in their hearts but as time passed they had come to a silent unspoken mutual agreement on the fact that whatever had happened between them either misunderstandings or mistakes wasn't bigger than their love...they had understud that they had touched a part of each others heart and now they were a part of each other this neither of them could change so they had accepted this reality of their lives...beneath all the hatred they always loved and cared for each other...their love reflected even in the bad mornings and I hate u's...they fought like tom and jerry it was not an unknown fact but now they had even come to accept the fact that the most beautiful moments of their lives were with each other be it the masquerade party, the days in the jungle, the sunrise view from the cottage, the long drive, the valentines...even they didn't know unhe ik dusre se kitani mohabbat ho gayi thi...after a while they stopped protecting each other because only they could hurt each other now they stood by each other because they loved each other because they cared about each other and they couldn't see the other get hurt before their eyes...this unspoken bond of their love could be seen in their eyes it didn't need words to define it and that is why they had never confessed that they were in love with each other again...the arjun and arohi who used to announce everyday their hatred couldn't confess their love in fear of rejection, pain or maybe simply because they liked how the relation had become stable and survived time on its own without any commitments just on pure love their love and they wanted to keep it that way

Dadi was very happy the way arjun and arohi's relation had shaped up...this was something she had always wanted...for them to be happy together...it was karwa chauth the next day...dadi wanted arohi to keep vrat for arjun but she knew if she told arohi then arohi would do it for her sake...dadi didn't want to force anything on them now...it was their relation and they could take care of it atleast they had reached that level of maturity...they didn't need to be spoon fed everything now...she knew kumud wouldn't keep the vrat and rashi wasn't in position to keep the vrat...she put a plate of sargi for arohi and served dinner in a plate for arjun covered both plates and left thinking agar vrat rakhna ho te khudse rakh lenge mere bolne di zrurat ni padhegee

"mata rani mere vishwas ko galt sabit mat karna...ab in bacho ki Jodi humesha aisehi salamat rakhan...ab arjun te arohi nu alag mat karna un bacho ne bhot museebatein jheli hai avi tak ab aur nahi"

Dadi prayed to mata rani for arjun and arohi as every night and went to sleep

It was 1 in the night arohi was restless and was roaming in the lobby of the first floor lost in her thoughts...she didn't understand how it had happened or when it had happened only one thing she was sure of she was in love with arjun again...and though she didn't like it this time she loved the good with the bad she loved arjun singhania though she didn't accept what he did she understood it that he wasn't bad but he commited all the crimes because he felt indebted to rps for giving him a life...living with him had taught her how good he was and that he was the only man she could ever love...now she had even come to terms with the marriage given his love for rashi his over reaction was justified...now she had accepted the marriage to be a real one as well...in her small ways she always tried to show him that coz she couldn't tell him directly...Today she had redecorated the room back to the way it was before she had converted it into a pink Disney princess bedroom "Well u were right'the room wasa little too pink it was beginning to hurt my eyes" she said to him a little nervous...he couldn't believe his eyes...his room was normal again...he was finally out of the Disney fairy land but he was afraid he would say something wrong that could result in forever banishment in arohis pink land...so he chose to smile at her as hugely as possible instead...that answering smile of his was the one that always made arohis heart skip a beat and her face turned into the color the room previously was in...she was understanding he was trying to do the same and show her that he had accepted her as well...because today arjun had made a portrait of the photo dadi had made them to take with arjun , arohi and raj and had hung it on the wall in their bedroom above the tv so that it would always be before their eyes...that picture would always remind them that how much ever they fought or disagreed at the end of the day their love was visible not only to them but everyone else around them as well...and he wanted arohi to feel that and remember that always...Both in their own ways were trying to show that they didn't hate each other anymore...that they cared...that they loved...arohi was pacing around thinking that it was karwa chauth...she wasn't able to decide to keep the vrat or no...she knew arjun being the 70's hero that he was wouldn't like her taking the pains for him...but she wanted to do that for him she was slightly feeling guilty now for being so mean to him...she remembered when she had shouted at him innumerable times saying that she wished he were dead and that she wanted him to die...that wasn't true now and she wanted to show him that by keeping this vrat for his lambi umar...she went to search the kitchen for some food for her sargi thinking dadi might have kept something for her knowing how dadi was

Arjun on the other hand had not come back home yet...he went to have lunch at home and then he told arohi not to wait for him cause he had some important work and left home...he thought of that with a smile on his face like she would ever listen to him...she was probably still awake thinking about how things were changing...how both of them were softening towards each other...and now he was feeling guilty because arohi wasn't the reason for rashis pain on the contrary in the past few weeks arohi was the biggest source of happiness to rashi...seeing them both together you would never imagine that they were nanand and bhabhi they looked like two sisters...it never ceased to amaze arjun till today how arohi had made palce in rashis life again and became so close to her...Arjun started remembering how it all started that fateful day when rashi feel down the stairs, arohis tears and fright on seeing rashi bleeding, how he had married her to take revenge for rashis child, then he remembered the day he had brought rashi back from the hospital...rashi was so depressed she couldn't even speak properly...it seemed like just yesterday that arohi was hiding in her room afraid of facing rashi...no one was able to make rashi smile or merely even talk...arjun was afraid that the fact that she could never be a mother again was breaking rashis heart from the inside and she would not recover of this pain...he was afraid that they might have to take her back to the hospital again so that she could recover...no one was able to understand what to do...it had went on like this for a week...arohi had been noticing this from far she never dared to set foot in front of rashi...but she had had enough...she couldn't hide anymore like a criminal when she wasn't at fault so she decided to take rashi lunch that day everyone tunted her and tried to stop her but once arohi ahluwalia had decided something who could ever stop her??arjun couldn't say no to her...every other thing had failed...maybe arohi could do something...arohi went in hesistantly but confident of herself...rashi was her usual silent self...but arohi didn't need the other person to talk to make conversation...she started talking on her own kept on and on being silly as always...but after 10-15 minutes also when there was no response and arohi was loosing hope she realized being silly wouldn't help

"rashi...m sorry mujhe tumhare paas nahi ana chaiye tha...but mujhse apna guilt handle nahi ho raha tha...m really sorry rashi agar mein us din gauri ko tumhe insult karne nahi deti toh who tumhe room se bahar kheenchke nahi lati aur agar mene tumhe time pe pakad liya hota toh tum nahi girti...I m sorry rashi kahi na kahi tumhare baby ki maut aur tumharee is halat ki wajah meri bewakufi thi...m sorry rashi tumne meri wajah se apna baby kho diya'"

rashi spoke properly for the first time after coming home

"arohi mujhe dukh is baat ka nahi ke my baby died mujhe is baat ka dukh hai ke apne baby ke sath mein bhi kyun nahi mar gayi...arjun ko bhi meine khudse dur kar diya tha...meri life ki iklouti achi chiz tha who baby and now hes no more...why dint I die with him??kyun arohi??why??"

saying this rashi started crying arjun had started stepping towards rashi to console her but arohi stopped him by signalling him with her hands'...she went and sat beside rashi hugged her and let her empty her heart...'after that day arohi took care of rashi just like raj like her child'...slowly rashis condition had been improving and now rashi was much much better she would smile at romits jokes and talked to arjun all because of arohi she had made place in rashis heart just like she had made place in his heart arohi surely had some charm in her no one could resist liking her if she wanted them to like her'...now arjun really felt guilty for punishing arohi for rashis accident when she wasn't at fault'...he wanted to do something special for her to make her feel nice and forget the bitterness of the past'...he then heard someone in the office saying that the next day was karwa chauth and his wife had already ordered him to take a holiday'...arjun called that person and asked him what karwa chauth was and why his wife wanted him to stay at home

"Actually arjun sir'...karwa chauth is a day when all the wives fast and pray for their husbands long life aur meri biwi chahti hai ke mein bhi ghar pe rukke uske saath vrat rakhu'...ab mein use kaise samjhau yeh sab toh aurto ko hi suit karta hai hum mard kaha vrat rakhte baithenge..."

Arjun knew arohi wouldn't keep the vrath for him and this made him sad but another possibility was going on in his head right now so he didn't pay much attention to this at the moment'

"acha toh yeh vrat agar pati bhi rakhe toh patni khush ho jati hai kya??"

"haan sir khush toh bohot hoti hai'par aap yeh kyun pooch rahe hai??"

Arjun had a huge grin on his face he knew arohi ko kaise khush karna tha

"nahi kuch nahi meine bas aisehi pucha tha'...ab tum jao bohot der ho gayi hai mein bhi ghar ke liye nikalta hun'"



TO BE CONTINUED...

Edited by --Ari-- - 14 years ago

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aksh4IF thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice..arohi ka vrat..par arjun rakkhega!!👏 aaj ki naari!! sahi ari.. abhi fatafat..dono ko sargi pahuncha do..hummer nikalna hai??

edit: dun wanna spam ur FF😆 .....Yet 😈... hummer sirf band bajane ke liye thode hi hota hai..agar hota hai bhi toh...arjuhi ke ego ki band toh bajani hi hai...maanti hai ke nahi!?!?😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aksh4IF

nice..arohi ka vrat..par arjun rakkhega!!👏 aaj ki naari!! sahi ari.. abhi fatafat..dono ko sargi pahuncha do..hummer nikalna hai??



haww...bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha....itna acha ff likho aur tum hummer nikal rahi ho😭 kalyug hai bhai kalyug
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Posted: 14 years ago
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how can u keep vrat w/o the opposite's knowledge? aww arjun is going to keep vrat 4 arohi!!!!!!!!!!!! i like they way u illustrated ur analysis on the present track as well as the hope for the future track..
can't wait for the next part:D

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great work ari.slowly slowly i m becoming ur fan.luv u loadsit is awsome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

how can u keep vrat w/o the opposite's knowledge? aww arjun is going to keep vrat 4 arohi!!!!!!!!!!!! i like they way u illustrated ur analysis on the present track as well as the hope for the future track..

can't wait for the next part:D



lol normal people cant but this is arjuhi we are talking about yeh toh kuch bhi kar sakte hai....i can give u many exaples 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanu111a

Great work ari.slowly slowly i m becoming ur fan.luv u loadsit is awsome.


thank you so much tanu....this one is specially for u....really happy u liked it😃😃😃<<--- itna happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i like the concept, I hope they use it in the drama, it would be a nice 2-3 episode 😊
good job on the fic!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye Ari tu toh maha writer banne ki path mein ho... OS ko FF bhi bana diya......

but Fab job ari.... even i feel like writing something... but darr lagtha hai kahi Aksh ne waha bhi hummer nikale gi....

next part kab aayega??? loved the way you handled the rashi - Arohi scene hopfully CVs bhi aise hi karega 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one arifa...loved it completely............ply continue:)

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