OS Reworked- Arjun unconcious scene

Scene Arjun unconcious scene

Dhondu and Arohi go and plan to throw coin in lake nearby instead of fountain.

Arohi goes a bit deep playfully ignoring Dhondu warning and looses footing in lake(leg gets caught in creeper) and starts drowning and starts shouting for help to Dhondu.

Dhondu panicks but not willing to go into lake to save her

Arjun hears her screams and comes to the spot and does not know swimming but jumps into lake to save her and somehow saves her

But in that process too much water goes in his lungs and he starts turning blue. Dhondu removes water from lungs and carries him to cottage and leaves to get doctor

Arohi remembers the scene where Dhondu her best friend was not ready to risk his life for her but Arjun despite her misbehaviour some time back came back to save her and jumped in lake even without knowing swimming. She realizes what a good person he is and regrets her misbehaviour towards him that day.

Nice re-take on the situation, though if Arohi was was wet as well then how could she have looked after Arjun in the way she did? :)

Originally posted by: Anham.

Nice re-take on the situation, though if Arohi was was wet as well then how could she have looked after Arjun in the way she did? :)

nice prem!! more heroic than wat happend!! also shows concern, possessiveness, responsibility..the way he goes to pick her up... arohi has had this situation before when cheeku ran away though!! ofcourse that only means she shud have been jhatka-fied to tht emotion tht she felt in the jungle that day n realized she still feels that n that she still loves arjun..n hez still the one she fears losing the most!! so awesome job!!

good one thank you for the one shot!!! lot better then hitting his head on a fountain of all things...i still can't get over it, a fountain? gahh anyway its all said and done, good job prem!

I was going to write a one shot but my fic DR is soooo demanding i can't stop writing lolz

Originally posted by: Mina_T

good one thank you for the one shot!!! lot better then hitting his head on a fountain of all things...i still can't get over it, a fountain? gahh anyway its all said and done, good job prem!

I was going to write a one shot but my fic DR is soooo demanding i can't stop writing lolz

Originally posted by: myviewprem

Thanks mina. Why not write your OS we all would love to read it

Even i found it very silly that Arjun fainted and got fever with a hit on head in fountain. How come he was up and running with a bullet injury in jungle-that means he is strong to take pain

I think if chiku got fever with taht hit i would not find it out of place but Arjun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

exactly my point! The guy walks around with a bullet and can't take head injury, where there was NO blood involved.

Originally posted by: myviewprem

Thanks mina. Why not write your OS we all would love to read it

Even i found it very silly that Arjun fainted and got fever with a hit on head in fountain. How come he was up and running with a bullet injury in jungle-that means he is strong to take pain

I think if chiku got fever with taht hit i would not find it out of place but Arjun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!