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wow mina tthat prt ws awesome..........👏
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Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

You can read my fics here

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!

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What the hell are you doing here in my bedroom?" Arjun roared.

Arohi's reaction was not as coherent as her husbands, she flat out screamed when she saw Rajveer run into the room.


"Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!"



Chapter 8



Arohi pulled the covers but they were stuck between her and Arjun.



"Arjun why did yous curse?" His dadi demanded. Forget the fact that there were two people he couldn't not stand, Garui and Rajveer and two literal strangers, his dadi's friends.

His Dadi was more interested in why he was cursing.


"She bit me!" It didn't go un-noticed by all in the room that he still had an arm around Arohi.


"So what putar? Ye sab to hota hai." Dadi was grinning like a cat who just got her cream.

"Yeah but she did it hard! I didn't even do it that hard!" He then noticed everyone was staring at him, and Arjun blushed when let his dadi's words sink in.


"Hey, look at what you did." Arohi did NOT want to get blamed for all this alone. She pointed to the red welt on her neck from his pinching.


"That's cause you wouldn't let me go to answer the door." Arjun forgot his embarrassment for a moment too focused arguing with Arohi.


"Oh I see how it is, so now its my--"

"Bus karo!"

Both stopped arguing. "This lovely women here wishes to ask you some questions."

Arjun and Arohi looked at each other.


"Dadi's friend." Arohi whispered so that only Arjun could hear.


"Namaste Autie gee." They both said at the same time. Arjun and Arohi realized they couldn't leave the bed. IF they did, there shackled hands would be noticeable...they also knew if they told the aunite to go wait downstairs for them, they might take some time getting to her because they would have to find the key. The key was missing and who knew how long it would take to find it.


"Now what?" Aorhi muttered through a fake bright smile to Arjun. She was looking at her cha cha who looked like he was going to kill Arjun any second.


"What kind of a bed is this?" Rajveer demanded. The shock of seeing his niece and her "husband" in such a compromising position was grossing him out. However, he couldn't ignore there bedroom decor.


"Uhh bed cha cha? Our bed...well you see." Aorhi quickly looked at Dadi, who gave her the look.

Great Dadi' will kill me if I say the truth. Please god save me! Arohi prayed with all her might.


"We broke it."

What the hell Arjun. Wait that's not a bad idea!


Arohi noticed that Rajveer grew only more angry.

Are they really having that kind of a relationship? It seems like it, they break beds wherever they go. What is this Arjun doing to my innocent niece? If I ever get him alone...


"Yes, we broke it! Right Dadi?" She looked at Dadi begging for support with her eyes.


The representative blushed. Who said these two were having marriage problems, they seemed fine!


Dadi coughed trying to hide her laughter. She turned to the representative and Aorohi's family.

"Yes, they did, in fact there new bed should be coming later today. Its just for last night, on such short notice we had to get them something. Right putar?" She looked back at Arjun and Arohi.


Arohi smiled her 100 watt smile and nodded her head so quickly, Arjun thought she might pull a neck muscle. Arjun slowly nodded. His Dadi was devious!


"Why is your room pink?" Rajveer couldn't get over that fact, it was so pink it was hurting his eyes. "Its so damn pink it hurts my eyes, how can you as a man, tolerate it? It looks like six year old girls room."


"Well Rajveer cha chu." Rajveer's felt a muscle in his forehead tick at Arjun calling him uncle.

Arjun said the rest looking at the representative."It was Arohi's idea, and being the understanding husband I am I let her decorate our room to her liking, what is mine is hers. Right Arohi?"


She has GOT to believe that I am in love with this crazy psychotic pink loving girl now.


"Yes, Arjun is really a great husband, no man would let there wife do this to there room. He has been so agreeable, its been pink like this for the past few days." Arohi smiled patting Arjun bare chest.


"You know for valentines day. See how much they love each other." Dadi put in.


Rajveer didn't say anything he left, the smug look on Arjun's face was driving him mad. He couldn't understand why Arohi was just sitting there in his arms. She didn't even look like she wanted to get up. The pink room was evidence enough that Arohi was in love with Arjun again, he knew his niece and how much she did like that color. Nothing was making sense. The big question was, what are Arjun's intentions towards his niece?


Gauri was so angry. She didn't even register Rajveer leaving. She couldn't take her eyes off the disgusting sight infront of her.


Arohi noticed how Gauri was starring at arjun.


What the hell is her problem? Why is she looking at us like that? Wait is she staring at Arjun? OMG is she checking him out? I mean I know he has a nice body, why would I ever go for a flabby guy? But she's married and I thought she was over him? She better NOT be checking my husband out!


Arohi pulled the blanket free from there legs and covered Arjun's chest.


"Thank you darling." he hid his surprise with a sweet smile directed to Arohi. Asking if she was sane with his eyes.


"I wouldn't want to embarrass our guests dear husband. I'm sorry Arjun doesn't like sleeping with his shirt on at night." She looked at Gauri while saying this. Gauri caught Arohi eyes and looked down, around the room, anywhere but at Arohi.


Arjun quickly caught on. He knew Gauri was checking him out, infront of her husband and now even more that Rajveer was gone.

"I hope I'm not making anyone feel uncomfortable."


The representative put her hands up in surrender. "Oh no son, your like my grandson's age. I know how it is with young couples."


"Yes, yes. My munda is quite pleasing to the eyes. Rab kare koi buri nazer na lage." Dadi made a point to look at Gauri. This girl was fishy she could feel it in her bones!


"Oh thank you Dadi. But you and I both know what Arohi would do to another girl if she tried to get close to me. She's so possessive you see." He wrapped his arm around and hugged her to him making sure everyone noticed.


Arohi nodded her head. "Hehe, what can I say my husband is too handsome for his own good."

"I know darling, even some married women are after me." Gauri looked up sharply at Arjun's words.


"But I don't need to worry, not with a wife like you around." He even kissed her forehead. Arjun knew he was taking it far, when he felt Arohi pinch him under the covers.

"Ah, those questions auntie-gee?" Arjun asked.


The representative suddenly looked taken back. She had forgotten why she was here. However, after seeing all this she knew her first assumption was right. These two were madly in love with each other. There family, well Arohi's just didn't want her married to Ajrun.


"No beta I don't have any more questions."

"Yes you do!" Gauri intervened. This was not how she planned. Arohi was supposed to cry and run into her arms and say how much of a horrible time she was having. However, it was the opposite. She looked so happy in Arjun's arms like she never wanted to leave.


"Gauri what the hell is wrong with you?" Arohi asked, she wasn't making any sense.


You finally noticed there is something wrong with this crazy bitch? Arohi I will treat you later.


Arjun rested his chin on Arohi's head. "Yes, anything wrong?" He asked looking at Gauri.

"Arohi are you happy with him?" Gauri asked taking a step forward closer to the bed.


"Of course I am happy." Arohi looked over at the representative. "Why wouldn't I be?" She looked at Garui like she was insane.


Garui came closer to the bed and leaned over the couple.

"Arohi you can tell me the truth, I'm your friend. If you want to leave him you can come home with me today, right now. I know you want to come home. Remember you told me you would never forgive him."


"Okay girl I have had enough of you." Dadi moved forward ready to pull Gauri away.

"No!" Shouted Gauri. "There is something wrong Arohi doesn't like him!" She pointed at Arjun.


"You are trying to break them up! What do you have against these two being together?" Dadi shouted back. She was furious now.


Arohi noticed that the situation was getting out of hand. She had to do something, why the hell was Garui being such an idiot? Oh well she would deal with it later. She couldn't really do anything with Dadi's friend present.


"Gauri, Arjun and I have our fights like all couples do but," she turned around and looked at Arjun, " we worked our differences out, he's my husband."


Gauri couldn't believe her ears.

"Do you love him again?" She demanded.


You crazy bitch, you don't know when to give up do you? Arjun was about to say something, but Arohi beat him to it.


"Yes I do. Now go home, we will talk later."


"No!" Gauri looked crazed. Everyone in the room looked at her like she was an alien. "Prove that you love him! Kiss him NOW in front of everyone."


"What the hell is wrong with you!?" Arohi shouted, she had enough.

"Gauri I think you should leave." Arjun stated in a firm voice.


"See you don't love him, and he doesn't love you, do you Arjun?"


Dadi moved forward and grabbed Gauri by the arm. "That's it your leaving, I have had it with your attitude."

"See you know it too, they don't love each other its just fake! They just want revenge on each other!"


The representative looked shocked. Talk about family drama. Poor Arjun and Arohi it seemed Arohi's family was really against her marriage. She would make sure the young couple was never torn apart by any law!


"Gauri what do you know about love? Arohi is the ONLY girl I have ever loved. So shut up and go back to your husband. I have had it with you." Arohi was too shocked at Arjun's words to say anything.


"Then prove it Arjun! Once and for all infront of us! Show us how much you love your wife!" Dadi was still tugging her out of the room.


"You really don't know when to give up do you? I am going to tell Kartar sab about your disgusting display!" Dadi turned to leave.


Arohi did NOT want her dadu to see her like this. "Dadi wait! Stop for a minute."


Arohi then looked at Gauri and narrowed her eyes. " You really want to see how much we love each other?" Aorhi knew Arjun was under all his tricks was a decent guy. He would never do anything like this with out her consent.


Arohi turned back to Arjun and grabbed his head with her free arm and kissed him square on the lips.

Dadi, the representative and her assistant all gasped in shock and embarrassment.


Arjun was shell shocked.

He couldn't move.

Was this real?


I mean it was like fifth grader kiss, just a press of the there lips but still, Arohi was doing this? What she mad? Should he take her to a shrink...yeah she definitely needed to go to a shrink, get her head checked, throw out Mr. Softy too.





Gauri was so shocked. She couldn't say anything.

It was Dadi who broke the spell.


"There do you have your proof? Oye you two, stop it! You can carry on after we leave." Arohi quickly pulled back and her face blazing red. Arjun simply starred at her.


She just kissed me! Yeah we definitely need to get her head checked.


"Yes I think we should leave them alone." The representative turned and left with her assistant following her. Gauri huffed and left in a rage. Dadi waited until there room was cleared before she spoke up.

"I will have your bed sent up soon." Was all dadi said and she closed the door behind her.


Arjun let out a sigh of relief. Finally the drama was done, if only he knew it was just the beginning.


"It didn't mean anything." She was obviously talking about the kiss.

"I know." This didn't seem like a good time to tease her. Arohi looked really disturbed.


Arjun waited for a few moments. Whatever was bothering Arohi she would tell him sooner or later.


"At least we get our bed back."

"Hmm hehe," Arohi let out a nervous giggle. "Yeah one good thing that came out of this mess. This never happened." Arohi stated looking him in the eye. Arjun only nodded his face serious, trying not to smirk. She was so bothered it was almost cute.


"Do you want to go down stairs?" Arjun asked.

"Should we?"

"Yeah I think so, to make sure Gauri doesn't cause too much trouble."

Arjun got up off the bed and helped Arohi up.


"Can you walk?" He asked as he toed her while flip flops to her.

"I think so." She put her shoes on and took a step. Arjun was ready to catch her if she faltered.


Arohi took a few trial steps. She was limping a little but nothing major.

"I'm good. Here lets wrap the handcuffs in my duppatta. We will have to hold hands..."


"I think I can survive Arohi. If I can sleep with you half on top of me the whole night. I can deal with hand holding."

"Hmm I will have to wash my hand thoroughly." Arohi muttered. She tugged Arjun over to the vanity mirror, and started brushing her hair.


The shock of kissing Arjun hit her.

OMG I kissed Arjun! OMG I kissed Arjun! Girl get a hold of your self, you can freak out later! My first kiss was with this janwar! It wasn't even in a beautiful setting it was infront of people. He has all my first, first love, first kiss, first marriage, even my first child! Aruggg I hate you for this Gauri! What was wrong with her anyways? She's so sweet, now...?


"What the hell is wrong with Gauri. She seemed a bit crazed you know?"


Arjun looked at her Aorhi like she was born yesterday. "You JUST noticed? That girl is insane."

Arohi smacked Arjun with the back of her brush. "Don't be rude."


"I'm not being rude. She's more insane then her husband. I think she still has a thing for me."

Aorhi rolled her eyes. "Please, what does she see in you? AND she's married, she even told me she was over you before she got married. Not all girls are crazy about you."

If only you knew the truth. Should I tell her? Will she believe me?


"Aorhi." Arjun voice was suddenly serious and so was his expression. It made her put her brush down.

"Its the truth she's not over me. She threw her self at me at our honeymoon. I know you don't believe me. But its the truth. She was ready to beg at my feet to not reveal to her husband that she was in that room with me."


Arohi didn't say anything. It didn't make sense. Was Gauri still in love with Arjun? Arjun didn't seem like he was lying. But how would she find out the truth?

I'm going to need Arjun's help on reveling the truth.


"Prove it."

"What?"

"Prove to me that Gauri still likes you." She poked his chest with her index finger to prove her point.


"Why should I? I told you the truth. You can believe it or not that's up to you to decide."

"If you were telling the truth proving it would be easy. Hai na?"


"Oh really?" He wanted to here this, then once and for all he could get rid of Gauri, because he was sure no one was more capable then Aorhi in helping him get rid of Gauri for good.


"Yeah, just make sure you and her are alone talk about divorcing me and hooking up with her. You know tum hari cheap lines maro. See what her reaction is. Of course I will be hidden somewhere recording this. BAM proof!"


"Heh, I won't have to SAY anything she will be all over me. Guaranteed."

"Yeah right." Arohi rolled her eyes. He could be so full of him self sometimes it was disgusting.

"Yeah, wanna bet?"


"Fine." Arohi agreed.

She has no idea what she is getting her self into. He wanted to cackle with evil laughter like dracula, but stopped him self. Arhoi would be suspicious.


"Okay Aorhi Alluwahlia, if I win you will be my servant for seven days do everything I say and I get my room back the way it was before you vandalized it."


"Deal, if I win your my servant for seven days and the room stays pink, forever!"


"Deal!" Arjun agreed so quickly it made Arohi pause. Maybe she was being to hasty? "Lets go downstairs already." Arjun tugged her out of there bedroom.



TBC.............



Alright here it is as promised the next chapter. This is usually the time when I watch KMH-2 two more days.....aww the wait it kill me, update your fics ppl. Thank you everyone for your kind words, love em! 🤗


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Thanks so much. i was waiting for the next scene
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thnks dear... was really bored ...ur update was really awesome
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OMG i can't believe i am the first one!!! u see after waking the first thing i did was to open my comp and there i see the update😃 the best way to start my weekend! kaash kuch aur maanga hota! mina thank you darling! u r one talented soul god bless!absolutely loved it.....
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woww...awesome part....luvd it..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
gauri to ab pta nhi kya kregi...😆😆😆
update nxt prt soon coz weekend is so boring widout KMH....🤔🤔
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Hi Mina.....thankyou soooooo much for the update...........it was wonderful...very very exciting........my GOD......arohi kissed arjun.........😉😉😉😉.....i had goose bumps...........its graet that now arohi will know gauris truth........

once again thanx for such a wonderful update especially today.......waiting for the next part😛
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hey thnx mina 4 da updates....it was a gr8 scene luved it....👍🏼
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hey mina jus read all ur chapters of ff n girl der amazing!! luv ur writing style n ur sens of humour!! can u plz pm me wen u update next chpr...x

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