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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
You bring the BIGGEST smile on my face!
Your FABULOUS!
**nazar na lagey** ;)

loved it
Cant wait for the next chapter i knw its gonna be spectacular !

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMg loved it
It was awesome dear plzz update more asap

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

You can read my fics here

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!

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"Deal, if I win your my servant for seven days and the room stays pink, forever!"


"Deal!" Arjun agreed so quickly it made Arohi pause. Maybe she was being to hasty? "Lets go downstairs already." Arjun tugged her out of there bedroom.


Chapter 9

As soon as they were out of there bedroom and out in the hallway all eyes were on them. Arohi subconsciously moved closer to Arjun. She was thankful for holding his hand. She needed all the support she could get. If only Arjun had a shirt on, or better yet if only there hands weren't cuffed.

Raj was so going to get it from her.


"Why is everyone looking at us?" Arjun asked while the walked down the stairs.

"I don't know, maybe cause you don't have a shirt on? Or because we are holding hands?"

"Well its not my fault." He leaned down to whisper.

"So then its my fault? Is that what you are saying?"


Karter was talking to his son Rajveer when he spotted his only granddaughter walking down the stairs with the criminal. He didn't know what was the biggest surprise was. That Arjun was topless, Arohi was holding his hand, or that they were quietly whispering to each other with out an animosity between them.


"Hai rab ye kaya hora ha hai?"

He looked at his son, who was looking at them with narrowed eyes. He had been in discussion with the NGO leader. Who was now sitting at the dinning table with Arjun's dadi talking like they were the best of friends. Gauri was sitting in a corner with no expression on her face, she hadn't said anything since she had come down the stairs.

Rajveer had told him that Arjun and Arohi seemed to have patched things up between them and now were living truly as husband and wife. Which he could now see with his own eyes.


What kind of brainwashing had his innocent granddaughter gone through?


"Ah look they came." The NGO leader having spotted the couple got up and met them at the stair landing and the rest of the party joined them including Gauri.

Arohi shrank back into Arjun. Why was everyone walking towards them like they wanted a piece of her, expect for Dadi. She came and stood beside Arohi and gave her a loving smile.


"Don't worry beta." Arohi only nodded. She then looked at her grandfather.

"Hi Dadu. You didn't tell me you were going to visit. Is there something wrong?"


"Nahi beta, we just came to see how you were." he was surprised she hadn't let go of Arjun hand to come and hug him. He then looked at Arjun's state of dress or more like undress.

Arohi knew her dadu was going to say something about Arjun so she beat him to it.


"Um Dadu before you say anything, Arjun doesn't have a shirt because , um see I washed them all and they have yet to dry. My mistake."

Arjun looked down at his wife. Was that the best excuse she could come up with?

The representative laughed.


"Its okay dear, being a new wife takes time to get used to it all. You will learn. You have such a wonderful husband, I'm sure he will teach you." She then lost her smile when looking at Kartar. "You and I have to have a serious talk, about how happy your granddaughter is at her new in laws.

"Yes , that we will. Arohi can I speak to you alone for a few moments?" Arohi looked Arjun.


Now what Arjun?

I don't know Arohi, we will think of something.





TBC..........................

Thank you everyone for your great comments. I love them all! 🤗Thank you to everyone that updated there fics! One more day till KMH!!!!! I just want to let you guys know this fic will end really soon. Like my sister says , after this there will be another episode which I feel is incomplete and I will write about it, just like the Honeymoon retake and now Dadi's revenge.

Edited by Mina_T - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

lmao! they came down..y r gauri rajveer n co stil der???? oh oh wa r they gona do now..??

continue soon..cant wait 2 see wat hapenz next.x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
that was small but wonderful....now they are caught😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Love14

that was small but wonderful....now they are caught😛



I know its small, sorry!!! I will update in a few hours, and it will be longer Just had guests come over and i couldn't edit the rest....😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
heyyyy mina sorry buddy for late reply, its long weekend naa thats why busyy....i just read last two parts, omg awsome yaar u made my day, arohi kiss arjun wo be guari kay samnay yeyeeeeeeeeee me so happy, arjun came downstairs holding her hand n shirtless hehehe....i just close my eyes n i can see it....u r too good Mina....i really love ur ff....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mina_T



I know its small, sorry!!! I will update in a few hours, and it will be longer Just had guests come over and i couldn't edit the rest....😔

Thats okk take ur time we'll wait😳😳 abhi kay liye tu ye small dose be enough hay😆😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
you leave me SPEECHLESS!
your writing is amazing, if you ever make a book message me and i will go and buy it!
Love your work
cant waitt for the update :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it Mina . jo epi mein nahi dekh paaye yaha par mil gaya , thx. 👏

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