FF 'Dadi's Revenge' UPdated chapter 16 pg31 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woww...awesome.. like it..:) kash ki aisa kuch show me bhi dikhate..
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awww Mina,🤗 it was soooo gud n soooo dreamy.. i just woke up..n now i wanna go back to sleep n spend eternity in arjuhi dreamland..😍

aah, shirtless Arjun, softy-less Arohi, handcuffed on single bed!!! such a beautiful besharam thought!! 😉 n i luv it that both went to sleep wearing a smile. they deserve that n they deserve it from each other..hmm.. trouble tomorrow morning eh? will wait..😊
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u no i kept checking yesterday t to see if u updated..lol

very nince (addicting).. so there is attraction.lol

continue soon!!
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honestly mina, ONLY you cud come up with such an AWESOME idea!!! hats off to u girl!!! pls update SOONNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!👏u rock big time!!! loved every word of it!!!
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Originally posted by: chandarani1

honestly mina, ONLY you cud come up with such an AWESOME idea!!! hats off to u girl!!! pls update SOONNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!👏u rock big time!!! loved every word of it!!!



ahh thank you!!!!!!😳
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Hey Mina great update , u made my day n pls dont say sorry its worth to wait.............i like the last part so cute ............i cant believe finally they sleep togather on single bed wo be shirtless arjun kia bat hay, hehe......good improvment .....thanx buddy for such a sweet update , waiting for next part..................
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Your Amazing no matter how many times i say it its not enough !
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hey mina rlly nice update 2day keep it up👍🏼....nd update soon cnt w8 4 da nxt part....
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Originally posted by: aksh4IF

awww Mina,🤗 it was soooo gud n soooo dreamy.. i just woke up..n now i wanna go back to sleep n spend eternity in arjuhi dreamland..😍


aah, shirtless Arjun, softy-less Arohi, handcuffed on single bed!!! such a beautiful besharam thought!! 😉 n i luv it that both went to sleep wearing a smile. they deserve that n they deserve it from each other..hmm.. trouble tomorrow morning eh? will wait..😊



hehe thank you, trust me you will like the trouble 😉
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Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations

In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/Mina_T

( I encourage all fanfic writers to post there work on fanfiction.net)




Chapter 7


Gauri sat in the car and couldn't believe her luck. Karter had gotten the women activist NGO group leader to go once again and visit Arohi and Arjun, unannounced. Not only that they had included her in the trip along with Rajveer, to support Aorhi.


Karter was convinced Arohi was scared last time and wasn't able to talk because no one of her own was there to support her. That was all going to change, she would make sure of it. As there car pulled into the Singahnia driveway, she had to bite the inside of her cheek to keep her grin hidden. She was positive Arohi was hating it at her in-laws house and that Arjun was hating it equally if not more.


They must be sleeping in separate rooms, on the opposite end of the hallway, farthest from each other.


Garui got out of the car and followed her husband inside. Takeing note of all the guards with rifals. Clearly the Singahnias were wealthy, much more then her in-laws. The gardens were so well kept and sparkling like green jewels and flowers of different colors. She would love to be the baho of this house.


~*~


Dadi laughed with Raj as they both ate there breakfast. Mikahle, Jignesh and Rudra were already gone to work for the day. Romit had just come down the stairs still dressed in his pj's and Kumod was out in the back garden getting her nails done.


"Dadi look guests!" When Dadi looked up her smile left. Karter was back with the NGO , his son and daughter in-law.


The more the merrier. This was not going to end well she just knew it.

"Rab help me, only you know what this old turtle has planned now. Every time those two kids get close something happens." She muttered under breath as she made her way to great her guests, with Raj on her tail.


"Sasrikal Kartar gee."

"Sasrikal. I'm sorry to disturb you once again, but this is not a family visit, I'm here one last time to have the representative and Gauri speak to Arohi. Last time I felt like Arohi was not acting like her self."

"No problem Kartar gee. I will go wake the kids up, you all take a seat the maids will serve you refreshments. They will be down shortly."


"If you don't mind, I would like Gauri and the representative to go along with you?" Karter asked. The representative rolled her eyes, her assistant smirked. They were both convinced Aorhi and Arjun were two young people who cared about each other very much.


Dadi kept a straight face and smiled.

"Sure, no problem." As she led the ladies away and they were climbing the stairs. Dadi decided to give them a warning. "I just want to let you know, they both are cranky in the morning and do not really like being disturbed in there room. If you know what I mean." She winked and the representative and her assistant both giggled.

Gauri was pissed.

"They share a room?" She asked.

"Of course they do you bewacouf child, they are husband and wife. Do you not share a room with your husband?"

Gauri only nodded her head in response, she knew Dadi had a sharp tongue and now experienced it first hand.


Romit watched the female entourage head up the stairs. He then looked at Karter and Rajveer who were talking amongst themselves.

"Hey Raj, come here and play with me."

He didn't want Raj to say something stupid. Like the fact that his parents fought like cats and dogs. He knew his brother still loved Arohi. And he was sure Arohi was still in love with his brother.


~*~

Arjun woke up because he felt something tickle his nose. That and the pink curtains didn't hide the sun's rays as well as the deep blue curtains his room used to have.


He had to have serious talk with Arohi and get his room back to the blue white and black. There room looked like a six year old girls room!

He moved Arohi's hair back and his hand ran over her hair as he held her to him.


He had never slept so peacefully. Arjun couldn't stop smiling.


Today is going to be a good day I can feel it. Maybe Arohi and he would fight less? Nah, that's not going to happen. Fighting with her is too much fun...sometimes.


Arjun shifted a little,only to have Arohi grab on to him tighter.

"Stop moving." she mumbled.

Arjun rolled his eyes. He Shifted so that he was leaning back against the headboard with Arohi still cradled to his chest.


"Arohi, Its morning you should wake up." He said softly. Moving a strand of hair away from her face.

"I know, but five minutes longer. Please?" He knew she was still half asleep. Aorhi most likely forgot about there mishaps of yesterday.


But he had to get to work soon thus, needed out from the handcuffs. He tugged on her shoulder lightly. Only to have Arohi turn her face into his chest, and was that spit he felt? Was she drooling on him?


"What the hell Arohi? Get up you slobbering women." When he moved her a little he could see the liquid, her spit, all over his color bone. Arohi moved, back to her spot.

"Shut up monster." She mumbled.


Arjun froze for a second. Remembering how the name had a world of significance for them.

He was pulled back from his memories by a sharp knock on there door.


"Arjun putar? Are you awake?"

"Shit!" he cursed softly, Arohi was still asleep. But hey Dadi already knew about there predicament, and they had embarrassed themselves plenty of times in front of her. So what if she saw them like this.

"Yes Dadi, just give me a second." He had to try and cover him self at least. For that he needed to wake Arohi up.



~*~

Out side Ajurn and Arohi's bedroom door


"Let's go inside." Gauri grabbed the door handle ready to open it. Dadi quickly pulled her away.

"You sure are in a rush. Give my kids sometime." The representative also gave Gauri a curious look. She was being rather rude.

"Fine just a few more moments." Gauri had to be careful she didn't slip up.



~*~

"Arohi." Ajun whispered so Dadi couldn't hear him. "Arohi, get up." He shook her a little harder

"No!" She shouted then stuck her head back into his neck.

"Women if you keep acting like this, I'm gonna start to think you want me."

"Never. In your dreams you jahill." She mumbled.

Alright so she was coherent. Just un-agreeable.

"Okay Arohi fun's over wake up."


~*~

"Why are they taking so long."

"Gauri, why are you in such a rush. Husband and wife take time to get up." Dadi then turned to the representative, "there newlyweds you know."

"Of course I understand, lets give them some more time."

"I think something is wrong." Gauri stated. She didn't want Arohi and and Arjun alone any longer!


~*~


When a few seconds went by and Arohi didn't wake up Arjun pinched the spot between her neck and shoulder, hard.


"ARJUN!"

The whole house heard her.



~*~


"See what I mean Arjun is probably hurting Arohi. She couldn't scream like that." Now Gauri had a valid reason, both of the older women realized it too.


~*~

In retaliation Arohi bit Arjun on the most accessible spot, his chest and she didn't do it softly.

"SHIT WOMEN!"

The whole house also heard Arjun.


Just then there bedroom door was thrown open in came Dadi, Garui , the representative and her assistant into the room. Only to stop short at the sight that greeted them.


Arjun topless with a bright red mark on his chest teeth marks visible from far, that even a 10 year old child would know was from a love bite/hickey and Arohi with a matching red mark on her neck, Arohi and Arjuns hair was all messed, clothing wrinkled like Arohi just put it on, with the blanket tangled around there legs. Both had the, I-got-caught-doing-the-naughty-look on there face.


"What the hell are you doing here in my bedroom?" Arjun roared.

Arohi's reaction was not as coherent as her husbands, she flat out screamed when she saw Rajveer ran into the room.


"Aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!"



TBC.................................



You know I realized we have not have any romantic scenes in KMH2 like we did in season (which was epic!) like the elevator scene! Or the office scenes. I just re-watched it like five times. I re-watch some scenes it and motivates me to write. Like the scene where they take there 7 phera's. The love is like pouring out in those scenes it completely downs you. 😍

Thank you all for your support! Here is is something to get thorough the weekend. I Will update soon! How would you like to see Gauri get in trouble or her truth relived by Arohi? I have my version written, I want to hear yours 😉


Edited by Mina_T - 14 years ago

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