FF 'Dadi's Revenge' UPdated chapter 16 pg31

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Jannat

@glitter567

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

well no surprise..another mindblowing chapter 👏👏👏👏👏👏

the cat fight was hilarious 🤣🤣

awww arohi taking care of arjun😳...always wanted to see that...thank you Mina 🤗

your FFs bring a huge smile on my face and sends me right off to dreamland 😍😍

now the Alhuwaliya's are indebted to arjun for saving Arohi..so i guess this is how they will be able to forgive him again!!!

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Akshaya

@aksh4IF

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

aah mina, u gave me wat i wanted...now wounded damaad getting positive attention from sasuralwale..

n for me hilarious part was rajvir realizing both his wife n his niece r doh kadam aage than him..ek ne gun liya,dusri ne chaabi.. vardi utaar ke phek de rajvir!! (sorry cudnt resist)

i super duper luved arohi's catfight.. n arjun taking the wound again.. n k u know what there are no words left.. n i like it all in its entirety.. no point quoting ur chapter again.. it was so awesome.. when i read ur FFs..its like baaki ki duniya bhaad me jaaye types.. awesome awesome segment..

i understand ur idea of fusing this FF into the story again..so u can write something fresh later.. the purpose of this FF has been more than accomplished...thank u so much..

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imtiaz

@KMH-NASHA

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

you always go above our expectations how do u manage all this.i love how you go into depth of story you have a really creative mind.i loved the bit where arohi feels arjun's pain and the catfight.reading your story makes me want to see all this on tv not just imagination run wild in my head.

thanks for this and i will be waiting for next part.

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chandarani1

@chandarani1

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Mina thank you so much for giving us those moments of pure entertainment , joy and fun whenver u update.even thogh i lke the fact kmh doesn't drag on but it does leave alot of questions unanswered and wondering if it had eneded with more details...this is where ur ff comes and fills all the gaps cv's leave behind!! GOOD WORK!!! keep rockng! and updating!!!

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roshaniD

@roshaniD

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Mina Darrrrling... awesome as alwayss....... kya scene create kia tu ne... loved loved loved it.... can't comment long... wil come back to edit *fingers crossed*

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Khadhija

@Khat2027

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Minnnnaaaaaaa! Every time i read your FF it blows my mind. Your just fabulous. Love you writing. It makes you feel happy, sad, in love, laugh all at the same time. This honestly made my day.

& about the London chick being the girl tht Jay & Dhoundu are looking for that would be hilarious, the look on all their faces. I think if that happens then Jay-Doundu will become a team and try to get Arjun and Arohi back together so they can get the girl. That would be nice to see. :)

Thank a lot cant wait for the next update. <33333333

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

yaar where did u learn to write? i had a friend over(well she came in my room) whilw i was reading.. poor girl left cuz my eyes would not get off of the computer.. i coiuldn't bare to stop reading and when it ended... it made me sad.. but YES.. pehle arohi arjun ke ghar thi.. aur ab arjun arohi ke.. let see aage hota hai kya.. how will the arrogant alluwalia's react to this and the stupid singhaniyas [minus raj of course..]

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: brainychild92
yaar where did u learn to write? i had a friend over(well she came in my room) whilw i was reading.. poor girl left cuz my eyes would not get off of the computer.. i coiuldn't bare to stop reading and when it ended... it made me sad.. but YES.. pehle arohi arjun ke ghar thi.. aur ab arjun arohi ke.. let see aage hota hai kya.. how will the arrogant alluwalia's react to this and the stupid singhaniyas [minus raj of course..]

I'm glad you liked the chapter 😊
do something nice for your buddy! Beechari was ignored, i'm sorry about that😳

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Mina_T

I'm glad you liked the chapter 😊
do something nice for your buddy! Beechari was ignored, i'm sorry about that😳

lol.. shse lives next door so i went to her and we talked..hota hai.. she thought i was doing some research so i'm gonna let her believe that.. i'd have a hard time explaining to her about fanfics(not a desi friend u see..lol)

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Mina_T

@Mina_T

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Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: brainychild92

lol.. shse lives next door so i went to her and we talked..hota hai.. she thought i was doing some research so i'm gonna let her believe that.. i'd have a hard time explaining to her about fanfics(not a desi friend u see..lol)

That's good to hear. I was introduced to Fanfiction by my Spanish and Jamaican friend, but that was way back in high school, everyone esp gaming and anime watchers know about fanfic.

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