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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chandarani1

mina darling! u already how i feel abt ur writing.it's mind blowing!! i actually look forward to ur update more than the actual episode seriously!! so pls hun do update.!!

thanks!!!



Thank you sooo much! 🤗 but I am not as good as the show😳
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very nicely written
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Hey mina, sorry didnt get a chance to read the updates until now.. crzy busy wkend 😔 but ur updates made a gr8 opening to the wk.. followed by today's epi ofcourse....but seriously.. awesome imagination, i luv the way u write.. never feels like am reading it.. tumne itne detailing ke saath, itni khubsurati ke saath pesh kiya hai ki bas meri aankhen padh rahi hai aur mere man me mein dekh rahi hun!! n ofcourse it helps tht we have seen our darlings Karan n Kritz act.. their nautanki-ness makes these scenes so much better in my head 😉 u have a natural flair for this.. keep writing..
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Wow Mina, this is fabulous i love the way u write. Sometime i mistake this to be update. When KMH come on tv and i sit down to watch, i see and think no that not what happen, that not wat i read then it clicked that i read fanfic. sometime i confuse both fanfic and update.
Please contiune. i wud love arjun hug arohi from behind and guari become more angry seeing them hug and explode and blurt out the truth of rashi. lol....
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Originally posted by: Khat2027

Mina i have one question what is the PM list ?



Hey Khat2027 , It stands for personal msg, basically i send you a personal msg to ur IF inbox letting you know that I have updated my fic.
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Waiting buddy 😳😳 😍😍
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Waiting buddy 😍


I kno I will Friday night Toronto, Canada time. It will be worth it.😉
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hi mina

i love your writing you have real talent you should becoe a editor i am eager for the next part .thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago



Dadi's Revenge


Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This fic though is mine. This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

You can read my fics here

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/


Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations


In this fic Dadi will punish Arjun and Aorhi for not behaving properly in front of her friend and ruining there photo shoot, with the help of her grandson Raj!





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"Get your HANDS OFF my husband or else I WILL break them! You luchi kamini, besharam bitch!" Arohi jumped out and pulled Gauri off Arjun and slapped her hard across the face, she slapped her so hard her hand stung like it was on fire. Arohi looked Arjun over.


"Took you long enough women." He muttered under his breath brushing him self off. Arohi stood in front of ready to face Gauri. The hell she was going to put her hands on Arjun again.

"Sorry." Arohi muttered back . She really did feel sorry for him. Gauri was like a leech! No worse then a leech she was a blood sucking mosquito!


Chapter 11



"Arohi! What are you doing here?" Gauri asked one hand covering her red check.


"Don't ask such a stupid question! I was here the WHOLE DAMN TIME!" She shouted, Arohi was so mad she resembled a hurricane.

"I got first row seats to watch you throw your self at my husband. Chee! Tum hari sharam nahi atti? Since when did you become such a tramp? I am ashamed you were ever my friend. But of course you stopped being my friend long time ago, you became my enemy , you fed me lies about Arjun, all the damn time! And I BLIEVED you! If you still loved Arjun why did you marry my uncle!? Why come into our family? Do you know how hurt everyone is going to be?"


"No! Arohi please don't tell them! I beg of you."


"Ha, why do you care, you just called us fools! You should have moved on. You will never get Arjun."

Gauri stopped short of what she was going to say. Arjun and Arohi watched as she went from being frantic, to wicked , a sinister smile blossoming on her face. Her voice was collected and made Arohi shiver.


"What are you going to do Arohi? No one will believe you or Arjun. Your uncle and grandfather are already upset and disappointed with you, they think you are in love with Arjun and want nothing to do with you. They want nothing to do with a disappointment like you. Dada gee left already he couldn't stand the site of you and Arjun together. Rajveer wants to throw up."


Arohi was taken back for a minute. Did her family really want nothing to do with her? She took a step back and leaned back on Arjun chest.

This can't be happening....they can't my family can't...they love me.


Gauri's smiled widened as she saw how quiet and worried Arohi became.


Arjun put his hands on Arohi's shoulders.

"She's lying, don't believe a word she says Arohi. You can find out for your self. Just call or you can go over to your parents house."


Gauri started laughing. "Believe what you will Arohi. But your family is disappointed in you. You have stayed away from your house for so long, and now Rajveer knows you have that kind of a husband and wife relationship, he witnessed it with his own eyes. You have fallen in there eyes. You thought you would be the victor bringing Arjun down. Even if you did you won't have a place to return to!"



"At least I'm not throwing my self at someone else's husband! I'm not the one trying to cheat on my husband! You said Arjun is the enemy right? Well why are you throwing your self at him? I don't care what you say Gauri I will revel your ugly truth! My cha chu will divorce you! He deserves better then a luchi!"


"Ha! My word against yours! No one will believe you. No one trusts you anymore, since you are with the enemy now."


"That's where your wrong you disgusting leech!" Arjun knew Arohi was going to revel the camera that was still recording.


"Get out of my house Gauri." Arjun's voice was dark and intimidating.

"Ha make me Arjun! Lay a hand on me and I file a complaint, my husband will gladly arrest you!"

She looked so smug and confident that Arohi couldn't take it anymore.


"Ya but he won't arrest me!" She ran at Gauri and grabbed her by her hair and unlocked her door and dragged her out.


Arjun quickly grabbed the camera and made sure he saved the the video, he took out the micro SD card and put in his pocket then followed the two ranting women, telling Aorhi to stop.

Arohi managed to slap Gauri once more.




"Arohi!!" Rajveer shouted. He was downstairs and had an eye on Arjun and Arohi's bedroom door, since Gauri disappeared behind it.


He ran up the stairs, he didn't understand why Aorhi and Gauri were fighting each other. Arjun was trying to pull Arohi back but she would struggle free only to try and claw Gauri's eyes out again. Garui equally angry managed to scratch Arohi's bare arms.


"Arohi STOP!" Rajveer ran and grabbed Gauri while Arjun pulled Arohi back and held her with both his arms around her waist.


"Arjun chdore muje! I'm going to rearrange her face!"

"Damn it Arohi control your self." He lifted her up off the ground because kept trying to run her arms and legs flaying madly.


Rajveer held onto Gauri's hands in a tight grip, she wasn't putting up a big fight like Arohi who looked like jungle cat.


"Aorhi what is going on?" Rajveer asked.

"I'll tell you what is going on." Gauri interrupted. "Your niece has lost her mind, she's in love with this criminal and doesn't care about her family reputation."


"You lying cheating bitch! Arjun let me go! I'm going to sew her lying lips shut!" Arohi pushed against Arjun with all her might.


"Arohi no! Rajveer take your wife and leave."

"I will leave but would one of you tell me what happened? Why are these two suddenly fighting?"


"I'll tell you cha chu! This s**t here is still in love with my husband and tried to seduce him in OUR bedroom! In fact she has been trying to for a long time. That time we saw you at the resort, she was the girl that was in the room with him, throwing her self at him!"


Rajveer froze , he let go of Gauri and looked at her like she had the plague.


"Is this true?" He asked looking at Gauri blood gone from his face. He had thought she was over Arjun.


"Arohi is lying! Arjun is the one that has been coming after me, he has been cheating on Arohi! She is just blinded by her love for him, that's why she believes anything he says." Fake tears were falling down her face.


"OHHHH no you DID NOT just say that! You LUCHI!!! I'll kill you! Arjun let me go! I'm going to cut her ever lying tongue and feed it to her!"


"Rajveer take your wife and go HOME." Arjun stated again trying to avoid Arohi's flaying arms.

"Arohi?" Rajveer was torn he didn't know what to do.

Arjun picked up Arohi and threw her over his shoulder, ready to take her back to there room to calm her down.


"Arjun put me down! PUT ME DOWN! I will make sure that cheating witch doesn't see the sun! Cha chu don' t take that witch into our house she will only corrupt it more!"


Rajveer watched as Arjun carried Arohi back to there room and slammed the door shut making the walls shake.



Suddenly they heard a pair of hands clapping. Rajveer and Gauri turned to see Dadi along with Kartar at the bottom of the stairs. They had seen the whole show.


"Vah! I knew there was something wrong with you Gauri. I'm glad Arohi has found the truth about you, along with the rest of us." She then looked at Kartar, "now do you believe me when I say your baho was creating a scene in front of the NGO representative?"


"Rajveer, Gauri, come downstairs we are leaving!" Dadi only grinned as she watched the Allouwhalia's leave in a rush.


~*~


Arjun dropped Arohi onto the bed.


"What the hell Arjun! Why did you stop me?" Arjun ran his hands through his hair trying to keep calm. Aorhi got up, ready to run after Gauri, only to have Arjun grab her around the waist and deposit her back on the bed.


"Arohi calm down."

"Calm? How can I be calm!? That witch! She lied to me! She lied about you! She lied to my cha chu, my entire family! I will never forgive her!" Arjun stepped in front of her ready stopping her from going anywhere.


"We will revel her." He took out the sd card. "I'm going to transfer this into a DVD. Go take a shower and eat something, then we will go to your house and play this in front of everyone."


Arohi face lite up like Christmas tree. "That's a great idea!! Lets go right now!"

"Shower first." He pointed at the washroom.

"Fine fine." Arohi grabbed a change of clothing from the closet while Arjun got his laptop out.


~*~


While in the shower, Arohi couldn't help but thinking.


Damn I have been duped so bad! What has Gauri exactly lied about to me about. Its not like I can say "hey you lieing two timing witch , so what EXACTLY did you lie to me about?" Or I could just ask Arjun. "So Arjun, what kind of things did you tell Gauri?" Bah! I can't do that. It still can't fix that he lied to me about who he was, then kidnapped me, highjacked my wedding, and my family name is ruined!


But to be honest its not like my married life is hell, and there was time when I wanted to marry him. I don't think he would apologize to my family, nor will he leave his line of work. The one time he did, I didn't acknowledge him. How can I trust him now? He's the one that took the seven phera's of nafrath, and hates me probably more then I hate him. Wait, no I hate him more!


Damn I'm running out of my shampoo.

Whatever Arjun and I are good for now, I need to get Gauri out of the Allowhalia house.


Thank you Gauri, because of you I'm now Arjun's slave for the next seven days. I wonder if he forgot about it....Nah. That's too much to hope for.


By the time Arohi had gotten out of the shower, Arjun had already made the DVD. Aorhi took a moment to admire her dear husband, who had showered and was dressed in black slacks and a sky blue business shirt with white buttons.


He does look good. Of course I can look better.

With that in mind she pulled out one of her extra pretty dresses, it was white with little blue flowers, very innocent exactly what she was going for today.


"Your going to take time getting ready aren't you?"

"Maybe."

Arjun rolled his eyes. "Okay is this a code everyday, girl next door, party, or super glam?"

"Girl next door."

"Right, 20 minutes. I'm going to go eat breakfast."

Arjun left Arohi in there room to get ready while he could eat something.


Living with a Arohi, he had learned that she had various "looks" he called them codes because at first she would say. "Today is a party look." He quickly caught on and called them codes.


Code everyday, meant minimal make up (eyeliner, she couldn't live with out), Aorhi took 10 minutes to get ready, including hair.


Code girl next door, took 20 minutes, there was bit of make up and something with her hair, it involved rollers and the blow dryer or the straightener. When he first saw her with rollers, he couldn't stop laughing, she looked so funny! The results though he had to admit, were nice.


Code party, took anywhere between 40-55 minutes. She spent quite a bit of time figuring out exactly what to wear, then would change her mind half way through doing her make up, and of course new dress meant new make-up color matching and all that.


Code super glam was the worst! A nightmare. It took any where from an hour to two hours! He couldn't even describe it.


Personally his favorite was code zero.

That one he made up. It was when Aorhi did absolutely nothing, just combed her hair, face free of any makeup. In his opinion she didn't need it.


Hmm I wonder what she would do if I hid all her rollers, straighteners, hairspray, concealers, and all the other junk.

Now there was an idea worth trying.


"Arjun sir your breakfast is ready." Arjun was taken out of his thoughts by the maid. She motioned for him to eat, the place was only set for two people. Everyone else had eaten there breakfast besides him and Aorhi.

"Hey can you fix me a tray for Aorhi and my self? I'm going to take it to our room."


"Of course sir." Arjun waited for the maid and a few minutes later with the tray full of muffins, bagels, orange juice, milk and fruit, he went back to his room.


Aorhi was dressed. However, she had the big red roller at the front of her head and was blow drying it.


"Oh food! I was getting hungry." she reached out and grabbed a muffin. Arjun raised one eyebrow.

"This is my breakfast, who said you can have any." Arohi laughed and plastered on fake smile

"Dear husband , do you forget? Everything you own is mine," she dropped the smile, and pointed at the tray in his lap as he was sitting, "that includes your food."


Arjun only sighed. What else could he say or do?


He ate his breakfast while watching Aorhi blow dry her hair with one hand and eat with the other. He found it quite entertaining, especially when she got a bit of jam on her hair. She cursed and stomped around like a five year old, washed that bit of jam out and came back to finish.


Arohi took the red roller out of her hair and was placing her hair just the way she liked it. She watched Arjun out of the corner of her eye.


He was chewing his bagel , which he only liked with a little bit of butter, how plain. She liked hers with jam or flavoured cream cheese. He took another bite, then another and he was done. Then he drank his milk.


Like a good little boy.


She really liked watching him eat. He of course had a milk stash. Arjun hadn't shaved clean this morning and his stubble made him look rough around the edges. She liked him like this , and clean shaved, it was good he mixed it up. Arohi could swear she heard background music playing, all soft and nice.


Probably Romit.


Arohi wanted to wipe the milk away and she did just that, before Arjun could pick up a napkin, Arohi did it with her fingers.


Only when Arjun looked at her like she had grown another head, did Arohi realize what she had done.


"Oh um, this is for last night." She cleaned her hand on the napkin and took her glass of orange juice. Arjun watched her drink her juice.


This girl gets stranger by the second.


"Here take the DVD, do what you want with it when we get to your grandfathers house." he handed her the DVD and picked up the tray.

Arohi grabbed her purse. "You will come with me?"


"I don't think I would be appreciated inside your house, I'll wait outside."

"Well that's for sure." Arohi grabbed the tray from him and watched as Arjun locked there room shut.


"Just don't start fighting with Gauri." He advised and took the tray from her hands.

"What? Why not? She deserves a few more of my extra special punches." Arjun laughed, at the bottom of the stairs, he handed the tray to the maid who was standing there.

"Yeah maybe so, but she's one conniving girl, she can press charges against you later."



Dadi was reading the paper when she saw both Arjun and Aorhi come down the stairs.

"Where are you two going?"

"To bust Gauri!"

"Dadi we will be back soon can you make sure my room goes back to the way it was before Aorhi made it pink?" Dadi looked at Arohi, accepting the room keys from him.


Arohi waved her hand, "Its fine Dadi the pink was starting to hurt my eyes." Dadi laughed at the couple. It seemed like things were going right with the two.


Arjun and Aorhi continued there conversation like they weren't interrupted at all.


"She wouldn't press charges against me, even if she did I'm sure cha chu would find a way to excuse them."

"Oh that's not very law abiding of him now is it?" Arjun opened the car door, today he was taking his black BMW.


When Arjun got in and started the car Aorhi replied to his comment.



"Yeah but it concerns me. Its only Dadu who is you know, follow's the book no matter what. Cha chu is more emotional."


"Like a girl." Arjun couldn't resist taking the jab at Rajveer. Although he felt just a tad bit sorry for him, just a bit.

Minuscule.


Aruhi started slapping his arm. "Hey that's my cha chu! You gaandy admi you can't make fun of him."

Arjun pushed her hands away holding on to the steering wheel with the other hand.


"Women I'm driving. Stop hitting me... alright I won't make fun of him...just today." When Arohi stopped hitting him, Arjun continued smile.

"Aorhi can you see if there is a sun glass in that glove compartment?" Aorhi looked around and found a pair and handed it to him.

"Thanks."

"Your wel--" she stopped. Oh no! I just did something nice for him! Get a grip Aorhi! I don't think he even realized, well as long as he doesn't its good.


"Well that was out of character Arohi Allowhalia. I thought you would say something like." his voice took on a high octave , "you can burn your eyes for all I care!"


So much for that thought.

"Ha ha, just keep driving, I didn't want you to be blinded by the sun and kill us, your driving is terrible as it is."


It's also out of character for your grandfather to just hand me the file containing all the evidence against me. If he follows the rules so much, why make an exception for me? If what Aorhi is saying true then this is the first time her grandfather broke the rules, I don't think she even knows about it.



TBC.........


There you go a long chapter. Thank you all for your kind words, 😳and I hope the wait was worth it.😊 I updated early! Its like 1 am Friday here. Can't wait for today's and Saturday's episode. 😉

I know reading fics on the forum can get a little disorganized because its not one page after another, that's why you can go to my fanfic page for better presentation and flow.

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2733044/

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