New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 30

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi, it is awesome. loved it very much.
cont.soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
updated on page 37! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
that was awesome. loved the cute scenes between prem and aarav...I love him. premeer scenes were amazing too. continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago



😲

Another update by tuesday if you get 3 pages of comments?!?!?!

I HAVE FINALS THIS WEEK!!!!!!! 😕

Ok, ok....I'll take a study break tomorrow at some pt. and do it.....🤔...ya...thats what I'll do! *determined muh*


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey di! heheh wow she is so cute! and prottective of arnav....but i am sure that all mothers a re like that...my mother is the sme though i am 18...oh well...hehe u had to end at that last part! hai wonder what wil happen...aww prem is so cute..like a kid at the candy store...
thanks for the pm
cnt wait for the next one!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Amazing part...lol, I wonder what Prem is going to do...I laughd out loud, when Heer is like, "did you buy like 40 kinds of pens or what?......YOU DIDN'T!"
Hahaha, that was sooo funny!...amazing job, looking forward to more! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was really really nice to see your update after such a long time... and I am very happy reading it...

Heer and Aarav's part was really good and emotional,, they are really close to one another...

Heer and Prem's part was good too.. finally they are coming close to one another....

eagerly waiting for the next update....
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey jaz!!
i know ive been evil.. but i just caught up with the last 3 updts
ur doing a fab job
i just cant wait to see how this ff is gonna turn out. i mean, usually i know that prem and heer are gonna be together but here there's this doubt cos preet is the sweetest guy on the face of this planet!!
i totally loved the description of heers dream house.
lol prems never bought stationery ..ever???
haha.. boy, staples would have happy that day. must have earned a months worth of income in a day!!
i like how heer is being completely sarcastic towards prem but thats only to keep him annoyed and most importantly away from her. cos they both know that nothing can stop them, not even their crooked history.
now jaldi jaldi updt karo cos i wanna know whats up with prems past and how u deal with prem and preet at the same time!
oh btw aarav is the cutest kid ever!! his comments reminded me of preet from the show....lol lol!!
updt when u can
love
Amana
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Posted: 16 years ago

i'm fallin deeper and deeper for preet.... he is so adorable..... n aarav is super cute......

the last scene was a classic masterpiece......... what a moment... waitin for more....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Firstly, i am soooooooooooooo sorry i forgot to comment on the previous update!!!!!! *kaan pakring* 😊 I managed to read it, but didn't comment as was busy with my assignments!!!! Its a good job i gave in 5 today, an have some free time before the dreaded end of year exams, so you don't have to wait long for my response!!!😉

Anyway back to the update, well the last update. I thought the Prem Heer encounter and deal was really good and i have a feeling its going to get better. Poor Aarav, the last thing he said really touched a soft nerve in my heart !!!!! You are very bad with doing things like that!!!! 🤓 And Preet was great as usual, and you know whats gonna come next 😆 😃....... Please let Heer and Preet be together, the man is going to be devistated if she goes away from him and i wouldn't be able to bare the heartache!!!1 (Preet and Heer all the way, as usual) 😛
Now back to the recent update, i enjoyed it very much, partly due to being relieved of doing some uni work for a little while and partly due to the ';filler ' being very good!!!!! I loved Heers attitude, that is completely the way to do it!!!!! 👏 But i didn't like the ending...... why didn't Preet come to the rescue *dreams* 😍 oh well, if Prem is the next best thing, why not!!!!! 😆 😉 As usual.... left me hanging... as usual...... but as you said please update on tuesday!!!!!! 😊
The Aarav and Heer scene was very nice, i liked Heers reaction and exageration that her son was growing up, it was very sweet... and then Preet comming there was like a gift!!!!!!! He is the all around, find him everywhere when in need man, isn't he???? 😎 I just can't wait for the next part to come up, so that we get to know why Prem is the Prem he is!!!!!!!
Thank you for the update again!!!!!!
p.s. please don't make me wait for the next one... or i won't read it!!!!! 😳 (and you don't have to worry about that, because you know i will deffinately be wiating eagerly to read it, so don't worry about me just worry about when you are going to update!!!!!!😆 👍🏼
p.p.s. ⭐️ for you!!!!! 😆
Edited by zaara006 - 16 years ago

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