~FF Doh Ajnabee Milte Hain Part 2 pg.8~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

very nice nazara
its my request to u to make it little bit long so we can stick to it
thx

ok will do so

Originally posted by: Nazara

ok will do so

thx dear for agreing todo it for me

tanku so much

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

thx dear for agreing todo it for me

tanku so much

your welcome and no problem and it is updated for now!

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

thx
may god bless u

your welcome by the way let me know if you like it so far or not! I want to know your opinions on this guys! Since this is my 1st FF. Please let me know guys! I would really appreciate it alot.

yes dear ur story is going good way till now but we can't judge it right now bec its to small to be judge sotill now its nice interesting lets see more wat happens 😊

Originally posted by: salma_786786

Hey Nazara.... ur starting a FF tooo.... nice.... sorry im late..... but this sound very good.... lets see how our Premeer meet here

it is ok. I understand. I hope you like it. let me know what you think? ok? Take care and keep in touch.

Originally posted by: ::Prem$_Priya::

Nazuuu Jaan!!!!!!!!! Awesomeeee FF...just saw it😃....I loveedd it..but just some some tips...choti behen...to badi behen...make it a lil longer...like if u check the other FF's..and try to seperate the paragraphs so ppl can read it easier...just trying to make ur FF #1!!😆😳.......but I lovedd the namess..Janki...Simran..Raj...really good choice...and I loveee the way you made the chacha have a special bond with Heer..........veryyy well written..and I thought it was awesomee!!👏

thanks Priya! You are the best isi liye tho mein tumse ek behan ki tara pyar karti hoon. Thanks again.

Originally posted by: Nazara

thanks Priya! You are the best isi liye tho mein tumse ek behan ki tara pyar karti hoon. Thanks again.

Awww...and ur my sweet Di🤗 🤗as well..hope you didn't mind my comments...😳😉