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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
ok..reading all the posts made me post few things too..so..the scene begins where it ended today..i.e.,Prem drinking the whole khaada..

Prem finishes his medicines and begins to cough a little..Heer standing nearby runs to him with a glass of water and offers to him..slightly patting on his head..and runs her palm on his forehead to feel his temperature..all this while Prem just stares at Heer..and when Heer starts to go from him..he holds her hand gently..gesturing her not to go for a while.Heer says..let me go..I've to cook dinner..Prem says..koi baat nahi agar khana nahi bhi milta hai toh..Heer just stammers few broken words and stands by him quietly..Prem tells her that she is there with him and he can face any problem now..he just wants her to trust him and be with him like this always..Heer says..tum par vishwas hai isiliye toh tumhare saath chali aayi..balki mein tumse ek vaada chahti hun..and prem says..bolo..Heer:mujhse vaada karo ki tum mera haath kabhi nahi chodoge

Prem:mein vaada karta hoon

Heer:just smiles and a small eye locking..she stands up to leave

Prem:stil holding her hand

Heer:mera haath chodo

Prem:tumhineto kaha..haath mat chodna

Heer:blushes..and runs little farther from him

Prem:arre itna sharmaogi toh baatein kaise karenge

Heer:just gives him a cute smile:)
Edited by ranrags - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
awwww so cuteeeee . 😊 😉😊
Edited by Nikita Devi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
All the sceans Are best....Damn cute! 👏 Will try to write some! 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Another scene 😃 its really a short scene but can b happen on the serial.

Scene 2:Prem,Heer&Meher went out togather for some work,when they will b returning to Home rains fall heavily&Our Heer's sandle torn,she wont walk normaly she ll try 2 walk but lost her balance when prem will come&catch Her,then they ll b eye-lockes for some while then Prem ll pick her up&take her home on his arms.Heers eyes will b lowered but Prem will gazed Her contiuenesly.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
ok another flick..

it starts from where today's episode ended i.e.,prem talking to some of the hotel employees..

Prem:kya baat hai aap log yahan hotel ke bahaar kya kar rahe hain..aap sab ko toh andar hona chahyita..ek client aane wale the na?

Employees:yes sir..par woh ab nahi aayenge..kyunki tender hamare haath se chala gaya

Lalit:to preet and harmaan..dekha tumhare so called bhai ne humare saath itna bada dagaa kiya..ghar se baahar khadam rakhte hi..usne apna rang dikha hidiya..maine kya socha that uske baare mein aur kya nikla

Preet and Harmaan:Dad aap Prem bhai ke baare mein is tarah soch bhi kaise sakte hain..Prem bhaiyya ko to humne bulaaya tha

Lalit:head bowed down

Outside in the rain..Heer still searching for Prem with file in her hand..finally she comes near a intersection of the road where Prem is talking to the employees..she tries to call out for him..but in vain..finally she decides to cross the road without even looking at the on coming vehicles..there is a ditch in middle of the road and because of the rain..she cannot see it..and her foot gets stuck into it..while there is an oncoming car..in the meantime Prem who is talking catches a glimpse of Heer and knows that she is in trouble..he starts running towards her and manages to remove her from that place..all this is witnessed by Lalit and party i.e.,Preet and Harmaan..when Preet tries to get down..he is scolded by his dad..but Preet being Preet ignores his father and rushes towards his bhai and honewali bhabhi..Prem is scolding Heer for being so irresponsible..

Prem:yeh kya kar rahi thi tum Heer..tumhe itna bada car nahi dikha..

Heer:mein woh yeh file..

Prem:file gayi bhaad mein..agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh kya karta mein

Heer:mein teek hoon..

Prem:haan ab teek ho..agar kisi na dekha hota toh..toh kya hota?socha tumne..itni baarish mein baahar aane ki kya zaroorat thi..

Heer:ab jaane bhi do..sab log dekh rahe hain

Prem:arre logon ki parwa nahi hai mujhe Heer..mujhe parwa hai toh sirf tumhara..samjhi tum..ab chalo..ghar chalo..

Heer:magar tumhara meeting..

Prem:meeting aaj nahi toh kal ho jaayega.. pehle tum ghar chalo..

Preet is ther just like a statue looking at his bhaai..how he has changed after falling in love with Heer..

Preet:bhaai aao mein aapko ghar chod doonga..

Prem:nahi Preet..is waqt babuji ko tumhari aur Harmaan ki sakt zarrorat hai..tum ghar jao..mein hoon Heer ko sambhalne ke liye..aur haan suno..meine workers se baat kar li hai woh log dobara hotel join karlenge..tension lene ki koi baat nahi..

Preet:teek hai bhaai..kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe bulaalena..

Prem:teek hai

Prem looking angrily(love anger) at heer..

Prem:ab chalo ghar..

Heer:hmm

they reach home..Meher is worried seeing heer in dirty clothes..she asks what happened and Prem narrates her everything..

Meher:didi..agar aap ko kuch ho jata toh mein kya karti..aap rukiye mein aapke liye saaf kapde laati hoon..she leaves..

Heer:I'm sorry..

Prem:dubaara aisa karne se pehle mujhe yaad karlena..aur..I'm sorry..tumhe itna kuch kehne ke liye..

Heer:koi baat nahi..mein samaj sakti hoon..

she is about to leave..and Prem holds her hand and moves closer to her and says..tumhe pata nahi Heer..tum mere liye kya ho..mein tumhe luvzon mein keh nahi sakta..sirf itna ki mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon..aur tumhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakta..

Heer:blushing*mein bhi

Prem:mein bhi kya?

Heer:mein bhi..

Prem:mein bhi kya?

Meher:didi yeh lijiye aapke kapde..(she leaves after giving her clothes)

Heer:walking away from Prem..she walks a bit and then says..mein bhi tumsese bahut pyaar karti hoon..aur tumse door nahi reh sakti..

Prem:all smiles 😃

I can't believe I typed all this..huh??

do tell me how u liked it?
Edited by ranrags - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
it wass sooooo gud loved it u did a great job 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
all of u are crazy, did u know that.
Seriously u guys need to get a life.

I couldn't stop lauging when i was reading all this. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: ranrags

ok another flick..

it starts from where today's episode ended i.e.,prem talking to some of the hotel employees..

Prem:kya baat hai aap log yahan hotel ke bahaar kya kar rahe hain..aap sab ko toh andar hona chahyita..ek client aane wale the na?

Employees:yes sir..par woh ab nahi aayenge..kyunki tender hamare haath se chala gaya

Lalit:to preet and harmaan..dekha tumhare so called bhai ne humare saath itna bada dagaa kiya..ghar se baahar khadam rakhte hi..usne apna rang dikha hidiya..maine kya socha that uske baare mein aur kya nikla

Preet and Harmaan:Dad aap Prem bhai ke baare mein is tarah soch bhi kaise sakte hain..Prem bhaiyya ko to humne bulaaya tha

Lalit:head bowed down

Outside in the rain..Heer still searching for Prem with file in her hand..finally she comes near a intersection of the road where Prem is talking to the employees..she tries to call out for him..but in vain..finally she decides to cross the road without even looking at the on coming vehicles..there is a ditch in middle of the road and because of the rain..she cannot see it..and her foot gets stuck into it..while there is an oncoming car..in the meantime Prem who is talking catches a glimpse of Heer and knows that she is in trouble..he starts running towards her and manages to remove her from that place..all this is witnessed by Lalit and party i.e.,Preet and Harmaan..when Preet tries to get down..he is scolded by his dad..but Preet being Preet ignores his father and rushes towards his bhai and honewali bhabhi..Prem is scolding Heer for being so irresponsible..

Prem:yeh kya kar rahi thi tum Heer..tumhe itna bada car nahi dikha..

Heer:mein woh yeh file..

Prem:file gayi bhaad mein..agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh kya karta mein

Heer:mein teek hoon..

Prem:haan ab teek ho..agar kisi na dekha hota toh..toh kya hota?socha tumne..itni baarish mein baahar aane ki kya zaroorat thi..

Heer:ab jaane bhi do..sab log dekh rahe hain

Prem:arre logon ki parwa nahi hai mujhe Heer..mujhe parwa hai toh sirf tumhara..samjhi tum..ab chalo..ghar chalo..

Heer:magar tumhara meeting..

Prem:meeting aaj nahi toh kal ho jaayega.. pehle tum ghar chalo..

Preet is ther just like a statue looking at his bhaai..how he has changed after falling in love with Heer..

Preet:bhaai aao mein aapko ghar chod doonga..

Prem:nahi Preet..is waqt babuji ko tumhari aur Harmaan ki sakt zarrorat hai..tum ghar jao..mein hoon Heer ko sambhalne ke liye..aur haan suno..meine workers se baat kar li hai woh log dobara hotel join karlenge..tension lene ki koi baat nahi..

Preet:teek hai bhaai..kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe bulaalena..

Prem:teek hai

Prem looking angrily(love anger) at heer..

Prem:ab chalo ghar..

Heer:hmm

they reach home..Meher is worried seeing heer in dirty clothes..she asks what happened and Prem narrates her everything..

Meher:didi..agar aap ko kuch ho jata toh mein kya karti..aap rukiye mein aapke liye saaf kapde laati hoon..she leaves..

Heer:I'm sorry..

Prem:dubaara aisa karne se pehle mujhe yaad karlena..aur..I'm sorry..tumhe itna kuch kehne ke liye..

Heer:koi baat nahi..mein samaj sakti hoon..

she is about to leave..and Prem holds her hand and moves closer to her and says..tumhe pata nahi Heer..tum mere liye kya ho..mein tumhe luvzon mein keh nahi sakta..sirf itna ki mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon..aur tumhe takleef mein nahi dekh sakta..

Heer:blushing*mein bhi

Prem:mein bhi kya?

Heer:mein bhi..

Prem:mein bhi kya?

Meher:didi yeh lijiye aapke kapde..(she leaves after giving her clothes)

Heer:walking away from Prem..she walks a bit and then says..mein bhi tumsese bahut pyaar karti hoon..aur tumse door nahi reh sakti..

Prem:all smiles 😃

I can't believe I typed all this..huh??

do tell me how u liked it?

AWOSOMW!!!!!!!!!!!!👏MindBlowing what a scene!!!!!!!Kash ye sach ho then we ll see that 2 love birds 😍in love

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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Now that our Prem is getting more bold and naughty with his romance and Heer responding back well..would love to see a romantic scene of them on the terrace with the song Mujhe HAq hai( from vivah)..

am totally blank today after watching yesterdays episode...can some come up with a beautiful terrace scene with romantic dialogues...pleasssssssssssssssseeeeee...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Hmmm.....Well said😳,thier should b a lovely terrace scene.Let's try2make.Hope u ll like it.😊 at present there is lacks of idea in my mind.But i had tried my best.😃
Scene 3:

The sky is clean 2day.There is no rain sweet&cool air is blowing all around.Its a moon lit night.Prem cant sleep,i ll b missing his parents&family.He ll go 2 the terrace,Heer ll noticed it&will follow him.Prem is watching on the sky.Heer come&put her hand on his shoulder.Prem ll b shocked&turnd,it ll b Heer standing over there.
Heer:Aap is waqt yaha?Abhi tak soye nehi?
Prem:Nind nehi arahi hai.
Heer:Maa Bauji ki yaad a rahi hai?
Prem:Par tumhe kaise pata chala k mujhe Maa/bauji ki yad arahi hai.
Heer:Prem,kia mujhe inta bhi pata nehi chalega k apki khushi&udasi kis me hai.Apki is udasi ki waja mai hu,mere wajase apko apne parivar se alag hona para.
Prem:Heer!Bhul k bhi khudko meri udasi ka waja mat samajhna,tumto mere jine ki waja ho,mera wajood ho tumhara pyar meri ibadat hai.
Heer's eyes bcom wet.Prem wipe it wid his lips.&then both hugged.
Heer:prem,mai bhi tumhare bina adhuri hu,tum hoto mai hu tum nehi to mai kuch v nehi.This ll b a night when entire sky,stars&the moon ll b witness of thier pure love.Hope u all ll like it.

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