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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

continue sooooooooooon................😳

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Payal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

Loving it! Lets get Heer to the hospital and pump her stomach, ASAP!

LOL...as you can see, I'm Eagerly waiting for the next installment. =)

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~Payal

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dollyandpinky

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Posted: 17 years ago

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~Part 10~

Prem: Heer utho heer tum ne aise kyun kiya ???? bolo heer boo utho...

Preet: Bhai hame bhabhi ko hospital le jana chahiye...chalo bhai jaldi chalo

Gaya3: chal bete prem jaldi chal hamein ise jaldi lejaane chahiye...

Prem: Haan Ma.... main heer ko kuch nahi hone doonga...kuch nahi...chalo..

Prem holds heer and they take her in the car and reach hospital...

Prem: Doctor.... doctor please dekhiye naa meri heer ko please.... usne zeher khaliya hain...doctor use kuch nahi hona chaiye...
Prem is holding heer's hand while they are taking her towards the OT by now heer is choking and blood is oozing out from her mouth...

Every one is waiting outside and prem is all worried Lallit is crying... and gaya3 consoles him...

Lallit: Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hain....gaya3 agar use kuch ho gaya naa.. toh main zinda nahi reh paonga...

Doctor: Dekhiye patient ki halth bahut nazuk hai... abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkiil hain... unhone jo zeher khaya tha woh slow poison hain jiska asar bhale hi der se ho magar woh insaan ke system ko function karne se band kar deta hain...hamne zehr ko toh nikal diya hain..magar unke saare systems jawaab de chuke hain... woh kisi bh dawaaa ko react nahi kar rahi hain...aaplogon ko main jhooti tasalli nahi dena chahta.. magar "she is sinking...." ab toh sirf koi chamatkar hi unhe bacha sakta hain...

Prem: Nahi Doctor meri saanse chalrahi hain iska yahi matlab hain ki heer ko kuch nahi hua hai...aur na aage kuch hoga...agar use kuch hua...toh mai iss dharti aur aasmaan ko ek kar doonga...MAGAR MERI HEER KO MUJHSE DOOR NAHI JAANE DOONGA..

SAYING THIS HE WALKS OFF FROM THERE...PREM IS WALKING OUTSIDE THE HOSPITAL JUST THEN HE LISTENS SOMEONE SAYING THAT KALI GHAAT KE MANDIR PAR AGAR NANGE PAIR CHALKAR JAO TO KOI BHI MANNAT PURI HOTI HAIN...

Prem: Main tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga heer...hum dono ek doosre ki takat hain..hamari prem kahani aise to bilkul apna dum nahi todegi..pyar mein jaan deene wale toh bahut dekhe hain maine magar main woh ranjha hoon jise haraana khud bhagwaan ke liye bhi mushkil hoga...

Prem takes off his shoes and starts walking.... he ingored every kankar every piece of glass or pointed thing that came in his way... he passed thorugh many roads and the whole jungle to reach to kali ghaat mandir...blood is still coming out of his head and by now his feet are all pricked with stones glass thorns... and his feet are coverd with blood.. finally he reaches the mandir...

Prem: Mujhe sab ki tarah tumhare liye kuch nahi laaya hoon kyunki mere paas tumhe dene ke liye kuch bh nahi hai...sab kuch toh hai tumhare paas...PAR IS WAQT MUJHE TUMSE KUCH CHAHIYE... MUJHE MERI HEER CHAHIYE... PYAR MEIN TOH BAHUT IMTEHAAN DIYE MAINE...MAGAR MERE PYAR KA IMTEHAAN MAT LO BHAGWAAN KUCH BHI KARO MAGAR HEER KO MUJHE WAPAS DE DO..wapas de doo..

Prem reaches hospital once again...and is looking form the glass with everyone...
HEER IS SHIFTED TO ICU and is surrounded by some doctors...she is breathing hard...finally doctors give her some injection she calms down...

Doctor: congratulations ...its a miralcle woh ab theek hain...magar khatra abhi tala nahi hain...us zehr ka asar unki body mein kuch waqt tak aur rahega..woh bahu weak hain is waqt...

Prem is very happy and hugs gaya3

Preet: (Hugging prem) chalo Bhai ab toh apni patti karwa lo...dekhiye na kitna khoon beh raha hain...

Prem: Nahi jab tak heer puri tarah theek nahi ho jati main kuch nahi karwaonga...

Prem goes into the room and sits beside heer...he holds her hand and says...

Prem: Kya soncha tha tumne mujhe is tarah akela chod kar chali jaogi..tum agar chaho bhi na tab bhi tum mujhse door nahi ho sakti mera pyar itna kamzor nahhi ke koi tufaan mujhe tumse juda karde...agar tum ho to main hoon agar tum nahi to kuch bhi nahi...

heer gains consiousness and coughs...she smiles seeing prem sitting besdie her... and tries to talk but due to the weakness she couldn't so prem kept hand o her mouth...

days passed heer was getting better but she was very weak..prem was with her all day and night...after 3 days she was able to talk

Heer: Pre..m tum tumhare sar par yeh chot kaisi...she tries to reach his head but prem holds her hand...

Prem: kuch nahi he kissed her hand...and keeps holding it.. ek baat puchoon heer...heer slighly nods her head tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi hain na heer...

Heer: Nahi Prem aisi koi baat nahi....

Prem: phir tumne aisa kyun kiya heer...aisa karne se pehle tumne ek baar bhi mere baare mein nahi soncha...kaha tha maine ke khud heer bhi agar chahe to woh meri heer ko dukhi nahi karegi....phir bhi tumne...saying this prem turned his face away from heer

Heer: Prem...idhar dekho... DEKHO MERI TARF turning his face with her hand...mere paas tumhare is sawaal ka sirf ek jawaab hain...AGAR TUM MERI JAGAH HOTE TO TUM KYA KARTE..?

Heer: Prem main nahi jaanti ke mujhe kya karna chahiye tha...bas itna janti thi ke tumhare ilawa kisi aur ke saath main apni zindagi ke bare mein sonch bhi nahi sakti...aur mujhe meri uljhan se nikal ne ka rasta sirf maut hi dikhi... main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon prem bahut...tumse door rehna mere liye maut ke barabar hain...

Prem: khabrdaar...ab tumne ek aur bar marne ki baat kahi toh hum dono ko koi bhi juda nahi kar sakta...koi bhi nahi..

and....
they both hug each other..

o k guys bahut neend arahi hain,,,😊😊😉will update the next part soon take care and do leave ur comments...😳