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'~Part 8~'


At Juneja Mansion there is a party and the occasion is Harman is going to london to complete his law
studies..DJ her husb vish and prashant are thinking how to separate heer Prem so that Heer can get married to Manmeet in the garden just then Prem and Heer reach the house ...seeing them that gang hides

Prem: Ab tum dekhna Heer jin logon ne hamare saath...tumhare saath itna kuch kiya unhe ab iska bhukdaan karna hi hoga..

Heer: Prem mujhe bahut dar lagraha hai..pata nahi aisa lagraha hai jaise kuch bura hone waala hain..

Prem: Itna sab hone ke baad ab aur kuch bura ho isse pehle main un logon ka parda faash kardoon jin hone tumhe mujhse milakar bhi anjaan rakha...

DJ: OHHH toh inko sab pata chal chuka hain... khair koi baat nahi DJ ko apna daaw khelna bahut achi tarah ata hai... ab tum dono mera aakhri natak dekte jaana Heer ki bachi tujhe toh main ab ZINDA NAHI CHODONGI... AAJ tu RAHEGI YA MAIN RAHOONGI..

Heer: PRem tum andar jao main zara Meher ko saath lekar aati hoon...aur suno ghabrao nahi main jaanti hoon bauji thoda gusse mein hain par woh tumhari baat zaroor sunenge..aakhir woh mere bauji ke dost hain...agar woh tumhe daante toh chup chap sun lena woh hamare bade hain..unka haak hai ham pe naraaz hona.. magar main jaanti hoon Tum unhe mana lo ge usi tarah jis tarah aaj mujhe mana liya tumne..

Prem: (Prem looks at her with immense love in his eyes...he puts his hand on her cheek and says...) Heer sambhal ke jaana..aur jaldi aana

Prem enters the house...everyone is busy in the party..except DJ and her gang...atlast everybody sees him

Lallit: Excuse me may I help you aap shayad rasta bhatak gaye hain..main abhi watchman ko kehta hoon woh aapko rasta bata dega... WATCHMAN WATCHMAN...

Prem:Bauji meri baat suniye aap mujhe bahut zaroori baat karni hai aapse..

Lallit: Gentleman main aapse tameez se baat karraha hoon toh aap mere sar par chad rahe hain..main ne kahan na main aapko nahi jaanta... WATCHMAN ISE BAHR PHEKU.. AJKAL KE NAUJAWAAN BAHUT CHALAAK SAMJHTE HAIN APNE AAP KO..

The watch man tries to take Prem away but prem is still shouting..

Prem: Bauji please bauji... suniye Ma...Ma tum samjhao na bauji ko..BAUJI


Prem somehow fres himself and holds Lalit's leg..

Prem: Bauji main janta hoon ke maine bahut ghalat kiya... magar woh ek tarah se sahi tha... please bauji meri baat suniye..wih Daljeet chachi..

Lallit: BAS!!!! BAHUT HO GAYI TUMHARI BAKWAAS (HE GRABS PREM'S COLLAR AND THROWS HIM OUTSIDE BY DRAGGING HIM)

GAYATHRI IS ALL FURIOUS AND RUNS UPSTAIRS..

Lallit: Ab agar tumne is chowkhat par kadam rakha to kasam hai us bhagwaan ki main woh kar baithoonga jo shayad teri maa ko uske bete se hamesha ke liye juda kardega..

Prem gets hurt when he is thrown by his dad and his head is bleading very badly..

then comes PRASHANT...

PRASHANT: BAHUT BURA LAG RAHA HAIN MUJHE TUMHE AISE DEKH KAR..ghar choot gaya Pariwaar chutgaya.. rishte nate sab ke sab chut gaye aur ab... ab toh sirf ek pyar ka rishte baaki tha aur woh bhi....

Prem: HEY PRASHANT!! APNI GANDI ZUBAN SE PYAR KE RISHTE KO KHARAAB MAT KARNA..
Bahut dekhe hain tere jaise tujhe toh main..

PRASHANT: aa aa aaan..Prem kuch bhi karne se pehle zara daljeet chachi se toh baat kar lo woh keh rahi thi ke Heer tumhara naam lekar bahut chillarahi thi..tum usse baat hi karlo...

Prem is shocked!!!!
Prem takes the phone from Prashant

Prem: Hello Heer kahan ho tum..hello...

DJ: Itni bhi kya jaldi hain Prem beta main tumhari baat karwaati hoon na Heer se.. pehle usse tayyar toh hone do.. are bhai uski shaadi jo hai Manmeet se...dekho na kitni samjhdar hai woh apne bauji ke bataye hue rishte ko kasie aank baand kar sweekar liya usne..Tum bhi aana use milne...use shubkamnaye dene ke liye... theek 2 ghante ke baad ka mahoorat hain kaha hain woh to bata nahi sakti.. magar phere hote hi main tumhe inform zaroor kardoongi theek hain...aana zaroor haan..

Prem: (PREM IS TOTALLY ANGRY AT THIS MOMENT THE INTENSITY OF HIS ANGER COULD BE SEEN IN HIS RED EYES) DALJEET CHACHI!!! MAIN TUMHE ZINDA NAHI CHODOONGA

DJ: PEHLE MUJHE PAKAD TO LE BACHOO...PHIR MUJHE CHOD bhi DENA..

Prem is shattered to hear the news of heer's kidnapping..and shouts HEER in the air...and cries his heart out...by kneeling down


suddenly he gets up... blood still coming out of his head..he GOES towards Juneja Mansion and storms inside shouting Mr. LALLIT JUNEJA!!!!

Prem: BAHAR NIKLIYE MR. JUNEJA KAHAN HAIN AAP..


TO BE CONTD... 😳 I KNOW U GUYS WILL KILL ME FOR ENDING AT THIS MOMENT BUT HAVE PATIENCE..SABR KA PHAL MEETHA HOTA HAIN.. EXTREMELY INTENSE PART COMING UP BY NEXT WEEK.. 😊

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~: Part 9:~

The party is all over when Prem reaches his house...He starts shouting his father's name...Every body comes out of their rooms Lallit is tremendously shocked to see his adarshvadi beta all changed!!!!

Gayathri:Prem beta kya hua sab theek hai na...aur yeh khoon ..itna khoon kaise nikal raha...
beta kya hua bata naa...

Prem slightly moves gayathri...and goes near Lallit

Prem: Mr. lallit juneja ...woh insaan jo apni dosti ke liye saare ambala mein mashoor tha... woh insaan jiski dosti ka charcha saara zamaana karta hain.. woh insaan jo sirf aur sirf apne APNO ke liye jeeta hain woh insaaan kitnakhudgarz hai yeh aaj maine jaana hain...
yun to bade guroor se kaha karte the na aap ke aapka dost apke liye bhagwaan hain... YEH HAI... WOH HAI...AAJ AAJ JAB USI DOST KIAAKHRI NISHAANI KO SAMBHAL NE WAQT AAYA TO AAPKO AAPKA GHAMAND NAHI CHODTA AAPKI ANAA NAHI CHODTI HAIN NAA...???

(Lallit is staring prem in amazement he has no clue what prem is talking about..).

Preet: Bhai saaf saaf kaho na aap kya kehna chah rahe ho.. aise paheliyan kyun bujha rahe ho????

Prem: Paheli... huh (slightly smiliing)paheli to meri zindagi ban chuki hai prem..kaise suljhaoisko..

Gayathri: Prem bata na beta kya baat hai.. aur Heer.. Heer kaha hain..?

Prem: Heer... ko kidnap kar liya ma un logon ne..kidnap kar liya usko...(tears falling down from his eyes)

Lallit: Kya BAKWAAS kar rahe ho tum. tu kya samajhta hain.. teri in betuki baataon me main aise hi aajaunga..tu kitni bhi koshish kar le..kitne bhi jhoot bol le magar main tujhe ghar wapas nahi bulaunga... tu MERE LIYE MAR CHUKA HAI...

Prem's anger is on top of his head now .. he closes his fist tightly to control his anger...

Prem: Janta hoon bahut achi tarah janta hoon ke aap kya sonchte hain...par pata nahi Heer ko aisa kyun lagta tha ki aap aur uske bauji bilkul ek jaise hain... aaj sirf usi ke kehne par main yahaan aapke ke paas aaaya tha..par mujhe kya pata tha ke aaj mere saath saath apne apni DOSTI KE RISHTE KA BHI KHOON KARDIYA ...APNI DOST KI AKHRI NISHAANI KO NAHI PEHCHAAN SAKE.... USKI HIFAZAT NAHI KAR SAKE ...PATA NHAI APNE APNI DOSTI KAISE NIIBHAI HOGI AAJ bALRAAJ UNCLE JAHAAN BHI HAIN UNHE BAHUT DUKH HO RAHA HOGA KE AP UNKI AAKHRI NISHAANIYA...UNKI BETIYAAN HEER AUR MEHER KO NAHI PEHCHAAN SAKE...MUJHE AAP PAR TARAS ARAHA HAIN MR. LALLIT JUNEJA..TARAS ARAHA HAIN....!!!!!!

lALLIT: yeh ...yeh tu kya kehrara hain prem...heer meher zinda hain...(lallit's voice is staggering...and he is mumbling in himself...heer meher balrj ki betyan ...zinda hain....)

Prem: JEE HAAAN WOH DONO ZINDA HAIN... APSE MUJHSE JHOOT BOLA GAYA THA...AUR IS SAB KE PEECHE US DALJEET CHACHI KA HAATH HAIN...!!!! apni beti ki shaadi mujhse karaane ke liye woh is had dakh gir gayi ke woh heer ki shaadi manmeet se kara rahi thi aur meri ashlesha se..

Gayathri: kya yeh sach hain.. prem..heer woh hi hai jisse tu pyar kart hain.. woh balraj bhaisaab ki beti hain...

Prem: haan ma yeh sach hain..heer woh hi hai...daljeet chachi ne na jaane aaj tak kitne zulm kiye us bichari par...magar woh chup hap sehti rahi taki inhe aapke pati ko koi dukh koi takleef na pahunche...aur woh shaadi bhi karne ko tayar thi us pagal manmeet ke saath... aur aaj shayd WOH YEH BHI KAR LEGI...
SIRF ISLIYE KYUNKI WOH MUJHE AUR BAUJI KO DUKHI NAHI DEKH SAKTI...aUR EK BAUJI HAIN JO USE ZALIL KARNE KA EK MAUKHA NAHI CHODTE..

pREM: Lekin aaj aaj ek waada main bhi leta hoon aap sab ke saamne..AGAR HEER KE SAATH KUCH BHI....KUCH BHI BURA HUA TOH KASAM HAIN MUJHE APKE USI BHAGWAAN KI...AAP CHAHE BHI TOH APNE BETE KA CHAHRA ZINDAGI BHAR NAHI DEKH PAYENGE...KABHI NAHI...(pointing his finger to lallit)

Lallit: (is taklu ki halat bayan karne ke liye mere paas shabd nahi hain.. i am leaving it upon u guys...create him with ur own IMAGINATION.....😆😆😉)

(PREM GOES OUTSIDE LEAVING EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE SHOCKED ...HE SEES PRASHANT AND VISHAKHA TALKING TO EACH OTHER AND THEN HE HIDES..)

Prashant: ab tum dekh ti jana vishakha kaise hamri mushkile door hoti hain ab sirf 1 ghanta bacha hain..un dono ki shaadi hone uske baad sab jaydaad hamare kabze mein hogi...ha ha ha... phone rings and he picks up ) ji chachi.. haa sab intezaam theek se hogaya naa..kya.. pandit theek main abhi kisi pandit ko pakad kar lata hoon...ap fikar mat kijiye...

Prashan leaves and Prem follows him...and reaches the mandir..

Prem: Mai agaya Heer mai agaya ab tumhe kuch nahi hoga..

he tries to find heer and enters the mandir stealthily...finally she sees heer all dressed up in a bridal dress...sitting with manmeet on the mandap she is crying...and meher is tied..

Prem: climbs the steps of the mandir with fierceful eyes and anger..he yells PRASHANT.... RUKH.!!!!..

dj and prashant are all shocked ...PREM GOES NEAR WHERE MANMEET AND HEER ARE SITTING... AND GRABS HEER'S HAND, MAKES HER STAND UP...AND UNTIES MEHER..

pREM: KAHA THA TUM LOGO KO KE PYAR KE RISHTE KO APNE GANDE IRADO SE MAILA MAT KARNA...PREM HITS PRASHANT THEN HE FALLS DOWN...(IN ONE BLOW) AND GRABS DJ'S NECK..

PREM: SUNA THA EK DAYAN BHI 7 GHAR CHODKAR WAAR KARTI HAIN MAGAR TUM TUM TOH USSE BHI GAYI GUZRI NIKLI...tumhe main zinda nahi chodoonga..
lallit and family reahces the mandir wih vishakha.. and police..


Lallit: Prem rukh ja beta apne hath gande mat kar.. ise apne kiye ki saza zaroor milegi...Inspector sahab giraftaar kar lijiye inhe in logon ne hame dhoka diya hain...hamare vishwaas ke saath khilwaad kiya hain..

Preet: Aakir sacha pyar jeet hi gaya na bhaiyya...aur is zamane ko jhukna hi pada...
jaiye bhaiya bhabhi apka intezaar kar rahi hain..

Heer is standing with meher.she is happy as well as looking very ill she is trying to go near Prem but her legs are not moving... still she is struggling...hard Prem and everyone is confused.. at her behavior at lst she is about to fall when Prem grabs her in her arms...

Prem: heer ...Heer kya hua heer uthoo..

prem tries to hold her by her head he is shocked to see BLOOD COMING OUT OF HER MOUTH...

PREM: HEEER!!!! YEH TUMNE KYA KIYA.....HEER ...HEER TUM...TUMNE YEH...prem is terified and he is not able to understand what to do...Lallit is shocked and stands still by taking support to the wall and gayathri comes and sits beside heer and prem...just then a bottle drops from heer's hand...and meher sees it and shouts...ZEHER!!!!!!

PREM AND EVERYONE ARE SHOCKED... HEER CLOSES HER EYES...