Another One-Shot by Shabo!!

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

👏 👏 👏 Loved it Shabo Jaan!! Well written!!

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@shabo24

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~
👏 👏 👏 Loved it Shabo Jaan!! Well written!!

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Thank you di! That means a lot!

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emmiewemmie

@emmiewemmie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

that was so realistic and amazing!!!!

wish it happened in real life

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@shabo24

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: emmiewemmie
that was so realistic and amazing!!!!

wish it happened in real life

Thanks dear! If this didn't happen, something equally good will! Keep hoping!

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-Faith-

@-Faith-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Awww Shabo bacha ur One Shots are too good!!
Bery well written!
The dialogues and everything was apt👏
And as shonu said loved the Lallu begging part..
Ya u seriously need to start a FF..After the exams ofcourse
Lubbed it😳.. want more😆

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@shabo24

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

^^LOL Zai di!
My exams are done...finished like 30 miniutes ago 😆
might start one*thinking*
Thanks for the comment! 🤗

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

aww...that was cute and too the point...nice job...👏...glad that lallu found out the truth...chalo..show mein nahin toh ff mein sahi 😉😉
JAZ

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Rinki

@~Rinki~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

aaah this is long over-due isn't it? 😆 anywayz im here to comment now!! first of all...thank you! finally gayetri stood up against taklu chacha!! hehe now...yay meher spoke up! though im not liking her now-a-days im still glad to know that she finally grew a backbone which was well overdue like my comment!! 😆😉 and another thing i have to say this ILY!!!! thank you shooooo much! ha u made the taklu beg! uff he really should've begged but no the creatives let him off to make us angry at his stupidity nd dumb dialogues nd course the expressions 🤢 hn im shoooo happy at that

i started dancing in my chair lolz

hehe anyway it was awesome!!

i wanna read more like this...😳 so u HAVE to write more fast!

rinkz