Shabo, right now I am wondering why this Nivedeta Basu is the creative head and not you, because you are the one with the creativity!!! 😆 😆 The dialogues and everything was perfect!!! 👏 I loved how Meher finally opened her mouth, I think this show needs stronger characters!! 😆
Second of all, loved how you made Lallu beg!! 😆 I would love to see that happen, and I hope they never forgive him!! 😆 The part where Dj became all nervous was hilarious, would like to see Dj scared more often!! 😆 I think it would be a wonderful change 😆 I hope that you are going to continue this, and do make the next part have Dj in trouble and Lallu begging 😆 Oh, and add some Prem-Heer scenes too 😳 😆
Thank you so much for dedicating this to me!! 🤗 ILY too!! 😃 I am now declaring myself the co-owner of this post 😆 Btw, the only problem with the story is that, I wasn't mentioned as Prem's wife 😆 If you are going to continue, do make sure to include me!! 😆 😆 LOL, just kidding 😳 😆 You have to continue though, because I will not let you got that easily!! 😈 😆
Sonia 😳 😆
WOW! What a lamba comment!!😆 No, there are people like Jaz di and Shifu di that are better writers! They deserve to be the creative heads! I just like writing! Yea, I though this show as too degradng for women and girls so I made Meher really strong! I can imagien that completly!
You are such a pematisitc! I would like to see Lallu beg but i want him forgiven at the end! DJ at the othe hand should be burned alive!😡😆 I don't think I will continue this, I like writing one-shot's better. I might start a FF though this summer! Hunny, you are co-owner of every post I make! I will incldude you in a story soon enough! Maybe as his sister!😆LOL no that's mean! Thanks for the comment hun! ILY too!🤗
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