FF: Ek Paal...Epilogue pg45 Oct 8 09 - Page 4

its nice tht they r going to meet again plsssssss do its fast again bec now it will be more interesting pls 👏 👏 👏

omg, this is all so definitely real.....
at first, i thot tht heer wouldnt be married to tht 🤢 manmeet, but now! ill kill him when/if i see him.
continue soon! 😛

👏 jaz you continue to amaze me and everyone with your brilliant writing 👍🏼 .hai.what can i say;bahut khoob likhti ho.and yeah i am going to hold on to the idea about you dedicating your book to me 😉 😃
okay back to the ff someone find me a gun.i am realyy in a mood to shoot someone;aur woh someone koi aur nahi manmeet hai.first i thought heer never married but when she dashed for the door and the way she crept inside i knew something was amiss
anyways another superb update aur haan one more thing why dont you just publish this ff.yeh toh instant bestseller ban jaayega 😉 😛 😊

Omg
you know how to desribe anything VERY WELL
awesome job
plz post the next part ASAP
i love all the charachters exept MM all of us hate him, even in the show.
WELL done 👏

Great!You are a brilliant writer.
I have never read your writings before but I bet they were also as good as this!
Keep it up! 👏

Jaz di!!

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I worte a REALLY long comment....but it didnt let me post it!*kicks comuter* I dont have the himaath to write it out again!! It was absolutly fab! do continue!!

hey well i just want to say nnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo i just hate manmeet.n well the storyline is goin grt u r amazin n plz cont soon am in love with ur ff bye

Originally posted by: shabo24

Jaz di!!

😭 😭 😭

I worte a REALLY long comment....but it didnt let me post it!*kicks comuter* I dont have the himaath to write it out again!! It was absolutly fab! do continue!!

Same problem here!!!!!!!.......But *Mwahhhh* here's a kiss for a lovely laddyyy and her lovely FF!!!!!!🤗👏

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=973479&TPN=1 &#16921596

Jaz di, if you read this, it would mean a lot! 😳

Originally posted by: salma_786786

OMG Manmeet 😡 ..... someone get me a gun.... he r***d Heer....that is soooo sad.... at first i thought Heer wasnt married coz of her parent's accident but this is sooo bad and sad...

Jaz im really liking the storyline... and the concept seems soo real as it does happen to many women....

Prem is back and now nothing will happen to Heer right??......

i have no words about the mention of love.... soo powerful and 'home was where his Heera was.'.... the heart belongs there it got lost right 😆

great update yaar... 👏 👏 👏
hopefully your next one, wont have me reaching for tissues 😆😉

hey yaar...yeah...manmeet is and a*s in this ff...but dont worry he will get what he deserves...but sorry to say...the next few updates my have you reaching for tissues...not just yet maybe...but i had to get things out properly to give you all the correct feel...next part coming soon...and oh yeah...premeer love is the best...isnt it 😳

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Hey

I just caught up with Part 2 and 3. They were both fantastic 😊. The story-
line is just so smooth and as Salma pointed out to a great extent realistic
as well. As for Manmeet 🤢....I believe we all hate him enough in the
show 😆 but now I have one more reason to hate him...how dare he
touch our Heer 😕. Anyhow....they were both beautifully written making
it very easy to imagine. You definitely are naturally a writer and that's
clearly evident. Great updates...I'll be eagerly waiting for the next part.
Hopefully by then Prem and Heer would have met each other. I'd like to
thank you for writing this fanfic once again. Its an absolute delight to
read. It would actually make a fantastic serial 😆. Do update soon! Take
Care!

Shafaq

im glad that you all see that the ff is based on very realistic things that happen day in and day out with so many women......dont worry...aab prem aagaya hai naa...only one small problem...my heer is a bit head strong...but she comes around 😉😉😉...glad that you caught up...next part soon 😳😳😳...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😛

Originally posted by: ami_princess

plz yaar continue karo na! it is duch an awesome story!...
poor heer! such bad thing happened to her!
plz continue soon!!!!!!!

aare baba...continue kaar rahi hoon...thodi dehr mein next part will be posted...glad that u are reading the ff 😃

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Hey I just read ur FF. Amazing yaar! You should be an author. You'd definitely be on the best sellers list! It was amazing!!! Too good~~~~ I honestly have no words to describe how many emotions I went through reading this. Hats off yaar!!!


Komz

hey yaar...welcome to the ff 😃😃😃...im glad that you like it...and omg 😳😳😳...you r awesome for even thinking i can make it as an author...im just glad that my readers like it ...emotional roller coaster huh...mission accomplished 😛😛😛...next part soon 😃

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

its nice tht they r going to meet again plsssssss do its fast again bec now it will be more interesting pls 👏 👏 👏

are the meeting...i dont know...😉😉😉...just stay tuned...next update soon 😳

JAZ