ZINDAGI:The FF about LIFE-Part 15 on pg 54!!!!!!!! - Page 41

Promo for d 15^th part….

Every1 is busy in d decorations for the marriage…as its d wedding of preet n prem both, they both r strictly advised that they r NOT going to meet the brides…but ye kahan manne wale the,….pahunch gaye milne heer aur mansi se…n then what happened…lets see…

Plz wait for next part to noe more…on Friday…

Wid love

PARTH😊

Originally posted by: pm rocks

Alright so just finished reading your lovely update bhai.what can I say its still the best I loveeeeeed it. soory for not replying last time but i did this time..a lill late but i did

i loved this part.....figthing made me a lill impress on prem's behabiour.....he fights like a monster... i loved the way you described everything...

ahhhh so it was arnav who was planning all these things.....wow...thats very nice of him....i am glad only tapish is evil...finally he is gone!!!! yeppie👏 so premeer scenes starts again???...and now its even preet and mansi...2 wedding at same time...very glad....already thinking the future😆

I loved both of your update...i read the last one too...cuz i got a lill confused when i was reading it😆 so went back and read ur other update and speaking to that i didnt even comment...oops sorry😳 by the time i read it you put this part also so....lol😆

Keep up the good work bhai...i liked it...especially muscluar prem fighting....ahhhh that was shooo cute...anywho...continue soon...will be waiting for the next part😃

Originally posted by: angel82

Hey Parth,

Awesome update....Tapish reminded me of an old hindi film villian...Amrish puri style..tying the family members to the pillars..

Originally posted by: zenia

very nice part bro.. waiting 4 the happy moments.. shadi..wow... cont soon...

Originally posted by: DMGanuthika

Amazing update. Iliked how u finished the sad part in one update without dragging it. Really looking forward to the next part with alot of premeer scenes.

Karthika

Part 15

The preparations for the wedding were in full swing…prem n preet were specially warned that they ll NOT meet heer n mansi till they get married n only 2 days were left for d marriage…but this two young boys were very eager to meet there love…

in d nite they made a plan n walked out of the door…n they tried to climb d pipe again to get into d house by windows…coz there were so many pplz at the door…they then came infront of heer's room n stood there seeing left n rite…then preet quikly found the pipe too…he started to climb up while prem waz already up….prem saw heer sleeping..he remembered the day when he came here for d first tym…he quikly sat next to heer n caught her hands in his…feeling sum1 catching her hands she woke up…but b4 she cud shout prem covered her mouth wid his hand…she saw prem n calmed down…they were talking in light volume so that no1 else listens…

Prem: shhhhhhhh…mai hu prem…

Heer: oh tum…tum yahan kyun aaye ho…

Prem: arre itni mushkill se pipe chadh ke aaya hu…aur tum puch rahiho kyun aaye ho…

Heer: ok baba sorry…ab to batao kyun aaye ho…ma(gaya3) ne to mana kiya tha na aane ko…

Prem: arre achhi biwi ho tum…tumse Milne se mujhe koi nahi rok sakta…

Heer: achha…abhi biwi bani nahi hu…

Prem: usme sirf do din hi reh gaye hain…then u ll b HEER PREM JUNEJA…

Heer: achha Mr. prem Juneja…agar koi aa gaya to …

Prem: kon aayega…

Heer: umm…ma..

Prem: mom…nahi aa sakti…

Heer: kyun…

Prem: kyunki who so gayin hain…

Heer: umm to preet aa jayega…

Prem: nahi aayega…

Heer: kyun…

Prem: who bhi mere sath aaya hai…

Heer: KYA?? (wid full shock)

Prem: haan …who mansi se milne aaya hai…

Heer: achha to tum dono ek sath aaye ho…aur agar kisi ne tum dono ke room me ja ke dekh liya to…

Prem: arre yaar mai tumhare liye pipe chadh ke aaya hu aur tum ho ki mera interview lene baith gayi ho…(wid disappointment)

Heer: achha batao kya karun to…

Prem: umm…bas mere paas baithi raho…

Heer: how sweet…koi aajayega to….

Prem: arre yaar tumhe sirf dusron ke aane ki padi hai…uski fikar karo jo aa chukka hai..(indicating himself)

Heer: achha achha thik hia…batao kya Karun…

Prem: jo mai bolunga wo karogi…

Heer: haan..bolo…

Prem: achha…relee…(he had sum naughtyness filled in his eyes…)

Heer: aise kya dekh rahe ho…

Prem: jo mai bolunga …sab kuch…

Heer: (understood his intensions) no no..

Prem: kyun nahi…ab to hum shadi karne wale hain na…

Heer: but still…

Prem: not fair…tumne kaha tha sab kuch…(he folded his hands n turned away)

Heer: achha ok gussa mat ho..Batao…(she waz afraid that he ll get angry now, so she agreed)

Prem: heer ……..(he pulled her towards him self)

Heer: haan…

Prem: haan kya??

Heer: plz prem jane do na…(trying to get out of his grip)

Prem: nahi pehle kaho ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho…

Heer: arre isme koi shak nahi hai…ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu

Prem: to kaho na…

Heer: kya?

Prem: uffo !!! yehi ki u love me…

Heer: nahi…

Prem: no say it that u love me..plz…

Heer: ok "u love me" fine…ab jane do..

Prem: nahi… say I love u…

Heer: arre yahi to kaha…u love me…

Prem: no no no…ok…mere sath kaho…

Heer: ok

Prem: I love u…

Heer: I love u…fine ab chodo…

Prem: nahi…(he came closer)

Heer: prem?? Plz….

Prem: (he whispered in her ear) heer…

Heer: prem…

Prem: (hugged her)

Heer: I love u prem…

Prem: I love u heer…mai ab kisi bhi tarah tumse dur nahi jana chahta…mai mar…

Heer: (heer suddenly keeps her hand on his lip..)

Prem: kya hua..

Heer: aisi baat phir na kehna prem...marne ki nahi prem jine ki baat karo ab…mai jina chahti hu tumhare sath…abhi se marne ki baat mat karo plz…

Prem: ok I m sorry…(he wraps his hands around her neck)

Heer: ok…

Prem: (hugs her again)

While they were hugging each odr they heard sum1 cuming…prem quikly got out n caught who waz he…he waz preet…

Prem: preet??tu …

Preet: haan pb mai kya karun..

Prem: kyun kya ho gaya…

Preet: pb mujhe mansi ka room nahi mil raha hai..

Prem: (smiled) arre tujhe ab tak uska room nahi mila… woh to saamne wala room hai…(he points out the room to him)

Preet: achha mai jata hu..

Prem: (stops him) kyun…

Preet: arre ye aap puch rahe ho..Aap…

Prem: haan mai…(proudly)

Preet: kyun…

Prem: kyun kya…ek ladki ke room me aadhi raat ko jana achhi baat hai kya…chhi chhi…(makes fun)

Preet: achha to ye batao…aap itni der raat ko…heer bhabhi ke room se kaise nikle… hmm…tell tell…

Prem: arre meri baat alag hai…

Preet: kyun…aapki baat kyun alag hai…aap karo to raasleela hum karein to character dheela…aisa kyun huh…

Prem: nahi …nahi jana hai…ghar ja warna…

Preet: warna? Warna kya…

Prem: warna mai ma-bauji ko bata dunga…ki tu yahan aaya tha…

Preet: kya aap bhi to aaye ho…

Prem: par mai bada hu isliye wo log mera yakin karenge..samjhe..isliye jao…

Preet: ok..

Preet started to move towards mansi's room…

Prem: arre wahan nahi GHAR ja…

Preet: par pb…

Prem: par war nahi…ghar ja…bola na…

Preet: ok (wid a long face)

Prem came home from the window only…he waz supposed to cum from door but noeing his bro he came from window…n when he entered he saw every1 of the family awake n heard preet telling them that prem is in heer's house…he knew that preet ll do sumthing like this only…as preet n naughtyness are the pair made in heaven…no1 can make preet serious…but prem waz smarter… he tip toed towards the kitchen room n took one glass of water n came out as a innocent child who waz sleeping but waz awake due to noise…

Every1 waz facing back at him n preet waz behind every1 n waz waiting eagerly to the door to be open…he placed his hand on preet's shoulder n preet waz shocked seeing him IN…

Prem: kya hua..(keeping his hand on his shoulder)

Preet: (turned) PB AAP!!!!!!(every1 faced towards him) aap yahaan..is ghar me…

Prem: haan aur nahi to kya heer ke ghar rahunga…(making a innocent face but naughty eyes)

Preet: haan aap to…yahan nahi the…

Prem: kya bakwaas hai…(facing towards every1) aap log kisi ka wait kar rahe ho…koi aane wala hai kya?? (he acted most innocently as he can)

Preet: haan aap to…

Prem: tu chup kar..mai bauji se puch raha hu…

Lallit: haan beta…preet keh raha tha ki tu heer se milne gaya tha…

Prem: WHAT????

Preet: yes…aap gaye the na…

Prem: nahi to…na…mai nahi gaya…mai to abhi ander se aa raha hu…pani leke…mai kahin nahi gaya…

Preet: JHOTH!! Dad ye jhuth bol rahe hain…ye gaye the…maine khud dekha tha inhe heer bhabhi ke room se nikalte hue…

Prem: dad dehka ye khud gaya tha aur mera naam le raha hai…mai to abhi ander se aa raha hu…pani leke …dekho (he shows the glass of water…)

Preet: nahi dad pb bhi gaye the…

Prem: preet…gandi baat…jab ma-bauji ne mana kiya tha to tum kyun gaye…not gud…(scolding him in a childish way)

Preet: arre dad mera yakin kijiye…mai bhi gaya tha but…pb bhi the wahan…mera yakin kijiye….plz…

Gaya3 cums n holds his ears…

Gaya3: tu nahi sudhrega na preet…tu jhuth bolna kab bandh karega huh…(she holds it tightly)

Preet: arre ma…aahhhh…chodo na…dukh raha hai…

Gaya3: haan… tu kyun prem ka naam laga raha hai…badmashhhh….

Lallit: haan dekho to prem ka naam laga raha hai…ye bechara to ander so raha tha…

Prem: haan bauji..

Preet: (thinks) koi bechare-vechare nahi hain ye…mere bhi baap hain shaitani me..

Every1 left scolding preet only…he waz sad that no1 believed him…n every1 belived prem…he saw prem…

Prem: kyun preet kaisi rahi…

Preet: kya bhai poora plan ulta kar diya…

Prem: arre yaar tu jis school ki nursery me padh raha hai na abhi….us school ka principal hu mai…(teasing him)

Preet: achha…

Prem: hann…

Then they both went to sleep…

THE SHAADI DAY- the big day …

The preparations r done…the house has been decorated wid candles, lights, bulbs, flowers, ribbons etc…but only one thing waz missing in d house…the brides…the house waz waiting for its dulhanns…the marriage waz to take place at noon so every1 at morning got up n got ready for d pooja that has to be done…gaya3 woke up n saw prem already sitting on the sofa n having his coffee….he waz in his own world…he waz holding the coffee but waz wondering sumthing else…gaya3 went towards him n said…

Gaya3: prem..

Prem: (still in his own thots)

Gaya3: PREM…

Prem: haan….haan ma kya hua…

Gaya3: kahan khoya hai re tu…

Prem: kahin nahi ma…coffee pi raha hu…

Gaya3: coffee? Coffee to ekdum thandi ho gayi…

Prem: koi baat nahi mai thandi hi pita hu…(covering his fault of being lost)

Gaya3: achha kal tak to tu…ek dum hot coffee pina pasand kar ta tha na….

Prem: haan but ab…ab thik hai…(he wanted to be in his thots but gaya3 interrupted )

Gaya3: oh ok…ek baat puchhu…

Prem: haan mom plz…

Gaya3: heer ko bhi thandi coffee pasand hai kya…

Prem: (he didn't noe) um..haan usko thandi hi pasand hai…(but answered unnoeingly so that gaya3 ll leave soon)

Gaya3: (smiled) oh tabhi…

Prem: (prem didn't get y gaya3 said "tabhi"… he gave her a confusing look)

Gaya3: (left smiling)

Prem: (thinks) ye mom ko kya hua…aise kyun chali gayi muskara ke…

Then at his room… prem wore his sherwani n got ready for the shadi…preet also got ready…every1 were waiting for the grooms to arrive but these grooms were taking too much tym in getting ready…lallu waz getting irritated that how much tym they were using to get ready…he yelled…

Lallit: PREM…PREET….chalo…shadi aaj dopahar (noon) me hai..raat ko nahi…cum on…lets go…

HEER's HOME

Heer waz being decorated by mansi…she wore her shadi ka joda n sum heavy jewelry n a light makeup…n at last tym seeing at mirror she asked mansi that waz she looking gud or not… mansi told her that she waz looking awsum…heer got ready but seeing that mansi was tensed she asked…

Heer: kya hua mansi…

Mansi: kuch nahi…

Heer: mansi tu mujhe aur mai tujhe achhi tarah se jante hain…koi to baat hai jo tujhe pareshaan kar rahihai…bata kya hai…

Mansi: heer…

Heer: hmm…

Mansi: heer maine tere kanyadaan karne ki responsibility li thi but mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri bhi shadi hogi aaj to…

Heer: to prob shadi ki hai ya kanyadaan ki…

Mansi: ofcourse kanyadaan ki…mai kaise tera…

Heer: tu fikar mat kar sab ho jayega…

Mansi: par kaise..kon karega sab thik…

"MAIN" …a voice came in…they both turned towards door n saw Arnav…

Arnav: main karunga tum dono ka kanyaadaan…

Mansi: tum???

Heer: arnav?? Tum karo ge…

Mansi: par kaise…

Arnav: par war nahi…dekho jab main nahi tha tab tum kar rahi thi na…dost hone ke naate…but ab mai aa gaya hu to don't worry…

Mansi: but kaise hoga ye sab…tum kya kya sambhaloge…tumhe to decorations, food, n aur bhi sab kuch sambhalna hai but tum kaise…

Arnav: mai sab kuch dekh loonga…tum mujhpe bharosa rakho…ok…

Heer: arnav thik keh raha hai mansi…

Arnav: haan…dekha heer bhi maan gayi..

Mansi: par…

Arnav: par-var nahi maine kaha na…ab jao aur ready ho jao..baraat aati hi hogi..

Mansi: ok… (she leaves)

Heer: arnav r u sure tum ye sab kar loge…

Arnav: ya heer I m sure…(he tries to leave but heer stops him by speaking)

Heer: tum mansi se pyaar karte ho na…

Arnav: (his eyes were wide open but he acted as if its nothing)

Heer: kaho arnav..pyaar karte ho na tum mansi se…

Arnav: heer tum ye…ye kya keh rahiho…

Heer: sach...sach keh rahi hu…tum mansi ko…

Arnav: nahi…mai nahi …

Heer: jhuth mat bolo arnav…jab tum tapish se mansi ke bare me baat kar rahe the to maine tumhari aankho me sacchai dekhi thi….

Arnav: nahi heer….woh sab natak tha…mai tum logo ko bachana chahta tha..thats all…

Heer keeps his hand on her head n asks…

Heer: khao mere sar ki kasam ki tum mansi se pyaar nahi karte…

Arnav: heer plz…(he snatches his hands..)

Heer: achha to tum mansi se pyaar nahi karte…

Arnav: nahi…

Heer: to mere sar ki kasam khane me kya hai…

Arnav: heer mera yakin karo aisa kuch nahi hai….

Heer: to khao meri kasam aur yakin dila do mujhe…

Arnav: haan haan…karta hu…karta hu mai pyaar mansi se…

Heer: kya…

Arnav: haan par mai khush hu uske liye…uski shadi ussi insaan se ho rahi hai jisse WOH pyaar karti hai…n that's all I noe…mujhe uski khushiyon ko chhinne ki koshish nahi karni chahiye…mera yakin karo…mai khush rahunga agar mansi khush hogi to…agar mansi mere sath nahi preet ke sath khush rahegi to uski shadi mujhse nahi preet se hi hogi…

Heer: oh arnav I m sorry…mai tumhe dukh nahi pahuchana chahti thi but…

Arnav: its ok heer…its fine…

Heer: but…

Arnav: koi but nahi just get ready baraat aati hi hogi…

Heer: ok…but jis ladki se tum pyaar karte ho ussika kanya daan kar paoge kissi aur ko…

Arnav: heer tum chinta mat karo mai thik hu…(he leaves)

JUNEJA MANSION

Here prem n preet came down n took aashirwaad of their parents n gaya3 putted one tika on prem's forehead n tied the 'sehra'…n same did wid preet too…they both were happy as well as nervous too but there waz a satisfaction that they r getting married to d gals they noe..they love…

Baraat reaches the heer's home as it waz nearby…then prem n heer both sit on the mandap n preet n mansi on d mandap besides them…seeing mansi sitting gaya3 asks mansi that who is going to do the kanya daan then mansi tells that arnav is going to do it…

Pandit calls arnav to do the kanyadaan of heer first a then mansi…he did it…but when it waz the turn of mansi…arnav waz very sad…his tears were uncontrollable but still he waz quite …he did the kanyadaan of mansi too…n then the both couples took the sath pheras n took the aashirwaad of the old pplz…after sum photo shoots the tym of bidaai came near…heer waz having tears n so as mansi.. this waz seen by preet…he told prem that heer is crying…n prem saw sum tears in her eyes..he wanted to wipe them but cant coz lots of pplz were there…but he didn't care…he went towards her…he waz going to touch her cheeks then sudden ly pandit said that the tym for bidaai has cum…n they shud leave..prem whispered in heer's ears so that she laughs…

Prem: iss pandit ki to mai…ek baar ghar pahunch jaun sabse pehle isse bahar nikaloonga…phir dekhta hu kya tym hua hota hai…

Hearing this heer smiled n prem saw her…he waz happy that this pandit waz useful in one work atleast.. he helped to make heer smile…gaya3 came n took both brides while prem n preet were walking forward…

Arnav waz standing at the door folding his hands in d form of 'namaste'…when prem n preet came he hugged them n told to take care of heer n mansi…heer saw him telling prem to take care of her n she again bcame emotional…she cried n hugged arnav n said thanku for everything he did…

Arnav: (to prem) heer ka khyal rakhna prem…bahut achhi hai wo…usske hisse ke dukh tum mujhe de dena but plz heer ko koi dukh nahi dena…

Prem: to tum chinta mat karo…tum humesha khush rehne wale ho…tumhari 'dost' heer ko mai apni 'patni' bana ke le jar aha hu…koi dukh nahi hoga usse…

Heer: (hugged arnav) tum thik to ho na arnav…

Arnav: ya I m fine…

n mansi also hugged him but she waz rele going to miss arnav…then they both went to prem n preet who were seeing them hugging…heer went to prem n sat on d car…but mansi saw arnav standing alone at the door, she again ran towards him n hugged him tightly…arnav did d same but told her that…

Arnav: mansi…tum ek nayi zindagi shuru karne ja rahi ho…uski shuruat aansuon se nahi khushiyon se karo…(wipes her tears) dekho tumhara pyaar tumhara intezaar kar raha hai…(she turned n saw preet smiling behind)aur apne pyaar ko zyada intezaar nahi karwana chahiye…bahut kismet walo ko hi unka pyaar milta hai…jao…

Mansi went away n arnav saw her going…she went to preet n they also sat in d car…he gave a flying kiss to both the couples n returned in his life to Mumbai…

JUNEJA MANSION….(evening)

Here gaya3 n all family mmbrs were waiting for the couples…even they came in two mins only…gaya3 got the aarti ki thali n did the aarti…but when it waz the tym to hit the kalash of rice then the both brides hitted it together as in d house both sons were equal…they both hit it n steped into the house…

NIGHT….

After playing the games of rasams n all, d rasams were done then prem n preet were eager to go in the room n see their 'married' love…then after the teasings of sum cousins they finally went in d rooms…prem entered in his room n saw that d bed waz empty…there waz no heer…then he looked here n there n saw her seeing out of the window n staring at the moon…prem went near her n kept his hand on her shoulder…

Prem: chand ko dekh rahi ho…(keeping his hand on her shoulder)

Heer: nahi apne chand ko soch rahi hu…

Prem: kya matlab..

Heer: matlab ki tumhare bare me soch rahi hu…tumhare samne ye chand kuch nahi…

Prem: achha kya soch rahi thi…

Heer: prem tum humesha se mere paas rahe ho..even jab tum mujhe nahi mile the tab bhi…

Prem: achaa wo kaise..

Heer: tum meri dhadkan ho prem…tum meri zindagi ki wajah ho…tumhare intezaar me hi to mai aaj tak ji rahi thi…aur aaj tum mujhe mil gaye…aaj mai poori ho gayi…aaj mai 'heer prem Juneja' ban gayi…

Prem saw this n hugged her tightly…he felt that she is a bit emotional today…he took her face in his hands…heer saw in his passionate eyes..it waz only heer in his eyes…she can see her clear picture…as prem waz staring at her she waz staring his eyes…she cant deny the fact that she waz feeling weak on her knees…seeing prem's passionate gaze she just closed her eyes…seeing this prem wraped his arms on her waist n bought her more closer…today heer cant stop him coz he is her husband now…n she also didn't stop him…prem came more close to her n kissed her on her lips..as their lips met, heer fell in his arms…heer wraped her arms around his neck n supported him…n then seeing heer weak he took her in his arms n made her sleep on d bed…they were looking truly eternal…that nite prem n heer became real premeer…they bcame one of two…not even their names bcame one but their soul also made a way to heaven…the haven which they found in one another…

Seeing the gr8 love, moon also closed his eyes.. "unke pyaar ko dekh ke chand ne bhi apni aakhein band kar li…usse darr tha ki agar wo is prem kahani ko poora hote dekh leta to shayad premeer ko uski nazar lag jayegi"..aur issi tarah ye prem kahani poori hui…do log jo ek dusre ke bina adhure the…ek dusre se milkar poore ho gaye…do zindagiyaan ek hogai…isse hi zindagi kehte hai…everything u get in this life is precious…no worries if u get a stone or a diamond…if u worth it…u ll get it…now or after…

THE END????

No, this is the end of this FF…the love stories are eternal wid no end…kyunki end to tab hota hai, jab HUM maan lein ki end ho gaya…if we still have hope, we still have life…so no end of love stories just the end of FF….

ZINDAGI……..by ~ Parth….hope u all liked it….

Don't get sad ..i m not stopping here…the new ff is waiting for u all…

The name of my new ff is…. "THE HIDDEN CINDERELLA" …hope u all like this too…

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1039909&PID=18325376&#18325376

Wid lots of love n best wishes to u all…

PARTH