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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Shafaq....thanks for the PM...
Great update once again... enjoyed reading it.... but no rain dance ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ acha theek hai doesnt matter..... im sure you will give us one heck of a romantic scene between Premeer soon.... maybe next update ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† lollz Heer wearing a sari and a white one no less.... can imagine she looks amazing... Prem is drooling big time.... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i love the way you wrote about Preet and his character.... Preet is just sooo cool... he saved his PB and Bhabhi... sooooo sweet..... and DJ and her useless husband.... someone really should take them back to their homeland... which is the jungle but atleast no harm was done at the beginning....

enjoyed it.... keep up the brilliant work...
will be waiting for your next update.... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
i really hope daljeet does not create 2 much problems 4 heer and prem
and preet is defiantly one person who prem can rely on hes always at the
right place at the right time.Cant wait 2 read the next part 2 see what
happens between heer and prem
๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ‘
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘



Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š! As for Daljeet.....she was born to create problems ๐Ÿ˜†.
Preet is a true brother and a reliable one indeed ๐Ÿ˜ณ. The next part will be
up soon. I'm just waiting for a couple more comments...I know greedy
right? Waise the part is already complete ๐Ÿ˜›. Oh and an insight into the
future of this fanfic - there will be a lot of new twists in the upcoming
parts in order to keep you guys hooked ๐Ÿ˜†.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: salma_786786

Hey Shafaq....thanks for the PM...
Great update once again... enjoyed reading it.... but no rain dance ๐Ÿ˜ญ
๐Ÿ˜ญ acha theek hai doesnt matter..... im sure you will give us one heck of
a romantic scene between Premeer soon.... maybe next update ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜† lollz Heer wearing a sari and a white one no less.... can imagine she
looks amazing... Prem is drooling big time.... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† i love the way
you wrote about Preet and his character.... Preet is just sooo cool... he
saved his PB and Bhabhi... sooooo sweet..... and DJ and her useless
husband.... someone really should take them back to their homeland...
which is the jungle but atleast no harm was done at the beginning....

enjoyed it.... keep up the brilliant work...
will be waiting for your next update.... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



You're always welcome Salma ๐Ÿ˜Š....I'm glad you enjoyed reading it ๐Ÿ˜ณ.
Thanks a lot!

Sorry for no rain dance....next time I promise k. As for a romantic scene
coming up....there will be one very soon indeed and a lot of romantic
scenes in the next few parts between Premeer ๐Ÿ˜ณ. Yeah I thought as we
couldn't see Heer in a white Sari on the actual show....I might as well
include it in here ๐Ÿ˜†. Preet is one heck of a guy! Jungle mein rehne
waalon ki besti mat karo yaar.....Daljeet and her good for nothing
husband have actually come from no man's land as their so inhumane.

I'll try my best to keep it up ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. Do keep reading!
Edited by shafaq92 - 17 years ago
tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice toooooo good dear

i willl be waiting for next part do it soon dear
๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
OHHH! Shafaq the cliff hanger! Continue oon yaar!!! Lovely part!


komz
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey thanx 4 da beautiful update... it was very nice... I cant wait to kno wat prem will compliment Heer abt her look in Sari.. plz update da next part soon...v
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey shafaq thanx for the pm.
uuff this daljeet she wont budge will she,but then kudos to preet for clearing out everything with the mann.just hope you would have described heer a bit how she looked in sari.,but still love the way you always make prem and heer alone.now what will prem do,
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiya shafaq.....thnx for the PM (i hav been meaning to thnk u when i review but keep forgetting *rolls eyes*)

i luved the part ๐Ÿ˜› .....someone shoudl shove Daljeet down a well and then we ll all be happy; maybe i should do it? wht do u say?

Preet is such a cutie, Lalit probabaly never tries to understand him, we hav seen wht a brainless taklu he is in the show anyway.

ohhhhhhh, prem to drop heer off again, huh? soemthing to happen, right?

see u around! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

very nice toooooo good dear

i willl be waiting for next part do it soon dear
๐Ÿ‘



Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š! The next part will also be up very soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.


Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

OHHH! Shafaq the cliff hanger! Continue oon
yaar!!! Lovely part!


komz



Yep another cliff hanger ๐Ÿ˜† once again.....due to which I'll have to
continue sooner ๐Ÿ˜ณ in order to reduce all this developing suspense.
Thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜Š!


Originally posted by: Sweetxsuga

hey thanx 4 da beautiful update... it was very
nice... I cant wait to kno wat prem will compliment Heer abt her look in
Sari.. plz update da next part soon...v



You're welcome but I should be saying thank you ๐Ÿ˜† to you instead.
Thanks for the idea btw ๐Ÿ˜Š....I'm gonna include it in the next part. As for
when I'll be updating this ff next.....well its going to be very soon ๐Ÿ˜›
indeed.


Originally posted by: fijiana

hey shafaq thanx for the pm.
uuff this daljeet she wont budge will she,but then kudos to preet for
clearing out everything with the mann.just hope you would have
described heer a bit how she looked in sari.,but still love the way you
always make prem and heer alone.now what will prem do,
cant wait for the next update



You're welcome ๐Ÿ˜‰....Daljeet's hopeless anywayz.....what can we expect
from a person like her ๐Ÿ˜•. Preet on the other hand is amazingly nice and
supportive ๐Ÿ˜ณ of his elder brother! I'm sorry for not describing Heer in
the sari....sometimes small things like this just slip my mind but now that
you've reminded me....I'll try my best to include something in the next
part ๐Ÿ˜Š k?

Now that their alone.....there are bound to be some romantic moments
๐Ÿ˜ณ aur kya?

You won't have to wait long for the next update as I'll be continuing very
soon inshallah.




I'm so glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ! Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š!


Originally posted by: moonlightgurl

hiya shafaq.....thnx for the PM (i hav been
meaning to thnk u when i review but keep forgetting *rolls eyes*)

i luved the part ๐Ÿ˜› .....someone shoudl shove Daljeet down a well and
then we ll all be happy; maybe i should do it? wht do u say?

Preet is such a cutie, Lalit probabaly never tries to understand him, we
hav seen wht a brainless taklu he is in the show anyway.

ohhhhhhh, prem to drop heer off again, huh? soemthing to happen,
right?

see u around! ๐Ÿ˜Š



Well I'm going to be totally filmi and say woh to mera farz tha ๐Ÿ˜†....but
you're welcome.

Its great to hear you loved the part ๐Ÿ˜Š and as for shoving Daljeet down a
well...I'd be more than happy to watch that...you have my permission to
do as you please ๐Ÿ˜›.

Preet's great ๐Ÿ˜ณ and Lalit unfortunately doesn't understand him just like
in the show ๐Ÿ˜ญ.

Weather or not something is going to be happening....that's for me to
know and you to find out ๐Ÿ˜† so do keep reading ๐Ÿ˜ณ.

Thanks so much ๐Ÿ˜‰!



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Posted: 17 years ago
wow...your FF is awesome๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘your are such a good writer๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I so wish the show was something like this...but BT
How could I miss something so awesome....maybe I was busy cursing taklu lol but its better late than never lolz.....the FF is awesome๐Ÿ˜›,I just read all the parts and goddd I just lovddd it๐Ÿ˜ณ

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