FF-(PH)-Dil par likdo Mera naam/NOTE pg33(JUNE6th)

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Dhriti

@Sweetxsuga

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

very gewd update... plz continue soon w/ da romance

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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Wonderful update! I love Prem's broken hindi!

👏

Love,
~Payal

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Balpreet Kaur

@nygirlpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

Aaaawwwww! I love Prem. He is so cute. I loved this update. Even though, it was rather short. I enjoyed it. It was a really funny update. I am serious. I loved the part when Prem was like aaj but it was actually aag. The most hilarious part was when Prem was like "kill, you know like the song mar dala." That was soo funny. You crack me up. I like this Prem better than the one in the actual show. Anyways, enough talking about Prem.
I loved the way you wrote the details of the parts where Heer was sleeping. I could actually imagine those parts. Hoping to see where they land up next. Waiting for the next part with some romantic scenes. Until then have fun but not too much fun. Later!😆

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shraddha

@shradhu

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#54

wow it was beatufull....lovwe love it....................... 😆 thankz uuuuuuuuuu

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Khyati

@khyati_sui

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

LOLLLL! Prem's Hindi! 🤣 😆 😆 But loved it! Will be waiting for ur naext update hun!

Thanks for the PM once again! 😳

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sana

@cool@sify.com

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

hey it aws awesome.......... i think romance will soon take place.............& woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo heer was blushing......... aweeeeeeeee.......... it was so cute

do cont soon........... do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#57

great update! luv the concept of ur ff! very different..i like how prems more out spoken and flirty towards Heer! 😆
can't wait to read where heer and prem end up staying..and how heer gets to prems house! 😳

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

AAAWWWWWWW prem is sho shweet in this ff.loved the whole concept.precap achaa hai.will be looking forward to the next update

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Kavita

@-kavita-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Hai.....mast updt tha 👏 ...waiting for your next 😳

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--Princess--

@--Princess--

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

[quote]Ticket checker-Excuse me…Appka ticket…

Prem looked at Heer…whose head was against the window…She was sleeping…

Prem-Haan..This is my ticket…

Ticket Checker-Okay…Aur inka?

Prem-Actually she's sleeping…um…Let me check her bag…

Prem looked in her purse and found her ticket…

He handed it over to the ticket checker…

TC-Okay…

Prem looked at the ticket…

Prem-(out loud)-Heer…Kya naam hai…

Heer-(hearing her name woke up)-Tum!!Tumhare pass mere ticket??

Prem-VOh actually Heer, TC ayya tha…tho use ticket dikhana tha…

Heer-(snatched the ticket from him)-

Prem-Wasse, Heer…

Heer-(rolling her eyes)-Please…Mujhe akela choor do…Aur mera naam maath loo!!

Prem-Nahi…Really…Maine tumhara naam kahin sunahua hai…But I cant remember where…Kisi paper par dehka tha…

Heer-Please don't stress your brain…

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Time passed by…Prem played games on his cellphone…While Heer dozed off….She feel asleep on Prem's shoulder…

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Now my question is if Heer was leaning aginst the window then how come in the next scene her head came on Prem's shoulder???

And if am not wrong, we were made to think that they were sitting opposite each other and not together !
Toh phir usska sar isske shoulder par kaise aagaya???

Mind explaning???

PM me when you update it.

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