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Sunaina

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Posted: 17 years ago

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I wrote this short poem...hope you guys like it...
Its from Prem to Heer..

Dekha jo tumhari ankhon mein
ek nagma zindagi mein pyaar ka
kuch pal ke liye hi sahi
hamari ankhoin mein khili ek assha

Naam benam hi sahi,
pahchaan anjaan bhi nahi
rishta gumnaam hi sahi
par janamoin ka badhan thi kabhi

Aaj ankhon mein, har pal
ek tum hi sirf basti ho,
sansoin mein har pal
lafsoin mein sirf tum bahti ho

Julf udte huye,payal chanakte huye
Heer, tum aogi jab,
Hum to loot jayenge,
Hamein apnaogi jab...

~~ Naina

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Posted: 17 years ago

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That's beautiful,Naina!!Very-well wirtten;and no doubt,it's just written for PH and their love!!😳😳

Thanks for sharing,dear!!!😳

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Parth Garewal

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Posted: 17 years ago

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its too gud yaar keep it up.. 👏 👏

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dollyandpinky

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wah wah that is superb yaar keep it up I wish Prem says this to heer.. 😍 😍 😍

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Sunaina

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Posted: 17 years ago

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^^ Thank you so much guys! 😊 😊 😊

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Jwalamukhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Naina, this is beautiful, suits Prem -Heer 👏 Beautifully written 👏

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Shaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

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That was beautifully written!👏👏

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-Faith-

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wowww Nainaaa👏 Thats was simply beautiful.. Loved it😳
So nicely written and perfect for Premeer😃

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Afreen

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Posted: 17 years ago

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That was just awesome...just like the jodi and love of prem and heer 😛

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Sunaina

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Posted: 17 years ago

^^ aww guys....you motivate me so much... 😃 😃 😃 thank u 😳 😳

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