Premeer ka pyar wid added help of ?????

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I wanted to share this wid you guys.... even tho i am kinna scared tooo.
I made it up while i was day dreaming ... i am not gna go wid the storyline it is right now coz prem is very depressed soo this is goin to be cheery and about love

But the storyline will be the exact same but i thought i'll add a character for prem. A friend that can understand him to some extent, like a best friend that is a girl and a close cousin.

Natasha is Gayatri's older sisters daughter… but her parents died a terrible accident and Gayatri adopted Natasha and since childhood she has been living wid the junega……Natasha is very close to prem, and prem is very close to her... they tell each other everything... but there is a twist.... prem has always been the emotional type dat belives in love however natasha is also a emotional type but does not blieve in love and makes everything into a joke… they both are funny, cheeky and loveable…

This FF will be based on happy moments of love and sadness and also how both Prem, Heer and Natasha learn about love….maybe soon even Preet and Meher learns about what love can do…

watch how the character's support and teach each other about love and the essence of it…. especially see how Prem lives up to his name

it was such a lovely day, the sun was out and there was a beautiful breeze and knowing how the weather has been lately, natasha decided to take advantage and go out for a walk in the park
while natasha was walking down the lane.... she saw a red rose and thought to herself i must have it... as she reaches down to get it... she hears a voice call from behind saying ''oh no i wouldn't do that if i was you'.... she gets up and turns and is shockd to see prem standing there in casual clothes....she 4t to herself 'hmmm dis is a surprise since prem is never out and about at this time of day and is always in that office. Whenever she is able to see prem is at home in the morning o at night time….'
''why not'' she finally say... he goes.. '' kyunki raal rose pyar ka nisan hai''
''dnt b silly it is jus a rose''
he walks towards her and says ''natti have you ever been in love''
utter shock by his questions ''what kind of question is that prem, u know i dnt blive in love''
''haan haan tumne kaha ta''
''soo thn y r u asking''
prem seemd to go into deep 4t, natasha snap her fingers to get his attention... he awakens from his 4ts and says ''sorry''
''kya hua....ohhhh i understand Heer ki yaado mein hai aap... have you told her those three magical words yet''
''abhi tak nahi kaha''
silence and prem knew she was annoyed and he started making those innocent faces that can melt any girls heart..''arre yaar wat shud i do wid you... abhi tak nahni kaha tu bhi kab neways what were u gna say about the rose...
''ohh haa...raal rose pyar ka nisan hota hai''
''how explain''
''jab tum kisi se pyar karoge tab tumne pata chalega''
''prem that is not gna happen anytime soon and dnt start another lecture on love''
''ek question ka sawal chalye .... do u ever get butterflies in your stomach wen ur near sumone that you know very well''
''haan, but why''
''why!!'' he laughs ''kyunki yeh pyar ka pehle step hai''

omg she thought to myself.... 'I only get butterflies only wid one person but can it be love.... noooo way.... the guy is just tooo cute dats why, it can't be love....'

this time Prem snaps his fingers to get her attention....''natti kya hua''
''ahem ahem nothing''
''at first i never understood what love was too, but jab mujhe pehle baar Heer se pyar hua, mujhe pata chala ki pyar kya hota hai, pyar ka matlab kya hota hai... din raat ek insan ki yaado mein bas waqt chala jata hai.... aab Heer mera junnon hai''
''Prem jus tell Heer that u love her''
''yeh kaam itni aasan nahi hai natti.... mein jab bhi uski paas hoti ho... tu janta nahin meraa kya haal hota hai'''
''yeh my dear friend is sed to be love ka side effect ''
they both started laughing but behind that laughter there was something else.... prem was finkin about heer and how he must tell her soon that he loves her and he has to do this before her wedding to manmeet... while natasha was in utter shock over what prem sed about love n the meaning of it…...prem has never spoken to her about love in such a manner....never… they headed home together but in silence
who would of thought that prem would teach her about love... natasha 4t to herself 'guess he is jus living up to his name.... PREM KA MATLAB PYAR....PYAR KA MATLAB DEWANGEE....''

Later in Prem's room……

there is more to come hopfully... plz try ignore my spelling as i am very tired...

let me know what u guys fink....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG Salma That was SIMPLY AWEESOME! 👏
I loved the Plot soooooooooooo much! 😃 😃 You are To good darling...So natural way of writting! 😛 😛

And the way you described The whole plot! It's WONDERFUL....Can't wait to have another part! 😳 😳

I love the Dialouge of Prem...."Heer se milta hoon toh......." 😳 LOVELY!

So it'll be a love Trigle...😉 Vamp nahin banana yaaar....Aur Prem-Heer ko Jaldi milana!😳

Love Raisa

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thanks Rasia.... was sooo scared to post dis but my mate forced me.... glad to liked it.... 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: salma_786786

awww thanks Rasia.... was sooo scared to post dis but my mate forced me.... glad to liked it.... 😳 😳 😳

Wat Thankx yaar.....Dosti mein no thankx! 😳 And Why will you be scared that was soooooooooooooo well written! Thankx to ur Mate for this! 😃 😃

I Liked it???? I LOVED it soooo much! 😳 😳

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