FF - Kuch Ankahe Rishte updtd pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow......u continued huh....well gurl...everytime u updt just updt ur topic name as of where u;ve posted teh next i mean in which pg and which part.....lols......am waiting for more...yu know naa...i've read more than this....hehe....so cont soon plss......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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A very brief update to the fan fic since I am at work…
(in my original fan fic, I have shown the inspectors as being fake ones, here I am showing a slightly different track with the police being genuine ones and arresting her)

Mean while, Heer enters the room and is shocked to see no one is there. She sees some powdery stuff on the table and picks it up. She enters prems cabin and is about to leave when the police see her and tell the manager – whose that girl, we have come looking for her. The police then approach heer and tell her that she is arrested and has to come to the police station. A helpless heer says that she has not done anything but the manager will not listen. The police arrest her and just as they leave, prem's car reaches.
Prem reaches the hotel and is shocked to learn that the police have arrested heer. He asks the manager what happened and the manager narrates the incident to her. Prem blasts the manager for letting the police enter without a search warrant and he leaves for ambala police station where heer has been taken.
Heer is pleading with the police officer saying she has done nothing and knows nothing and the police officers are being lecherous and harassing her.
Prem enters the police station and demands to know under what pretext she has been put in jail. He goes to heer, who is trembling and is behind the bars, he takes his hand and slowly raises her head , looks into her eyes and tells her, mujhe pura barosa hai tum par. Main janta hoon ki tumne kuch nahin kiya aur main hi tumhain yahan se likaloonga.
Their eyes meet and are locked in a moment to be savoured for eternity.
Prem ties to call his lawyer but is not able to get through. He then calls up Harman wanting to speak to his boss and see if they can help him. Prem goes to the police officer and is shocked to see Harman there with his boss with whom he is interning. They want to press charges against heer and prem would have nothing of it.
Prem : I don't wabnt to press charges. I am taking these so called charges back.
Harman – Bhai, you cant do this. She is a druggie and is tarnishing the name of the hotel. Aap isse bacchana chahte hain. Aapko aone naam aur hotel ki badnaami ki koi chinta nahin hai.
Prem – Arte you with me in this or not Harman.
Harman – Sorry bhai. I am not with you. My profession is far above this and my profession teaches be ki saath uska do jo sahi na ki jo galat hai aur aap galat hai bhai.
Prem doesn't heed to this and withdraws the charges put forth by his manager.
Harman is upset and his boss tells him to keep cool, saying they will handle this matter in a separate way.
Heer is released and Prem goes and put forth his hand to take heer. They both are rather silent and keep glancing at each other.
On a lonely road, the car tyres get punctured. Prem gets out to fix the puncture and heer helps him change it. Both looking at each other and prem gets hurt while removing the bolt. Heer immediately catches hold of his hand and puts his fingers in her mouth so as to stop bleeding. Prem continues looking at her when realizes what she is doing and immediateky holds back.
Prem smiles to himself. Tyre fixed, they both go home, prem walks in holding heers hands and everyonr in the family is shocked as they enter.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww u updated......Bery nice part👏... Finally we get to see a Preet Meher track bhi hehe... Niceee yaar and awwwwww the whole part where Prem gets her out of the jail... and the tyre punctured at the right time lol...
Looking forward to the next part!!😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 lovely please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow omg omg plz do continue yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent.. too many characters.. just caught up reading all.. and i felt like i finished race or something ..
honestly, awesome work.. continue writing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waaaaaaaaaaat????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yu chnged the story??!!!...but not bad yaaar....i loved it..and now am loving preet-meher toooo....lols..it was sooo cute yaaar...cont sooon kkk......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update.....Prem saving Heer was too good...I hope he does something fast in the show too lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Just as they are at the door, In walks in Manmeet. He brushes past them in such a way that prem and heer have to let go of each other hands.

Heer walks ahead and looks behind and keeps on looking at each other. Just as she is about to step inside, Harman tells her to stop and says tumhare liye is ghar main koi jagah nahin hai.

Prem - harman.
Harman - kuch nap kuch nahin kahenge,. Aaj aapko malum hai aapne kara bhi kya hai. Is ladki ke saath dekar, aapne apne naaam shaurat ka dhyan nahin diya. Yahan tak ki aapne mujhe apne boss ke samne neecha dikha diya. Why Bhai.

Heer is about to leave when prem catches hold of her hand and tells her tum yahan se kahin nahin jayoge. Is ghar main, maine abhi tak kisse ko yeh haq nahjin diya, ki woh tumhe mere se, is ghar se door rakhe. aur harman tere har sawaal ka jawab mere paas hai.

Kyun bachaya main isse, kyunki main manta hoon ki yeh sach hai. main jaanta hoon ki isne kuch nahin kiya. to kya hua agar saboot iske kalaf the, kya main isskee aaknhon ki sachai se mooh modta. Dekh isse harmasn, kya tujhe sachchi lagta hai ki isne kuch kiya hai.

Harman - I think yu have gone mad. Mera career, uska kya bhai. This could have been my first case. first case that i would have been working on.

Prem - first case, haan harman but you know we would have been a great team together. Tum jaanne chahte ho ki maine isse kyun bachaya.

Jab main hotel pahuncha to...Flashback Mode:

to be continued.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow....prem's hand holding was just..iiisssshhhhh......aahhh...i can already see tht......lols..tht was sooo cutee........wow...am loving it totally....i think ekta shud cal yu up for the story...

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