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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankx for liking it noor and nihalfan

more replies plzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Your fanfic is different I like it 👏
I hope Heer falls in love with Prem soon 😳 How can she not??? 😆
Please continue soon

May
Edited by May1902 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 yaar kya baat tum toh ek se badkar ek acche acche ff likh rahi ho.please do continue,make the marriage happen,and yeah you added jai as well
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Posted: 17 years ago
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preet-"accha pb shaadi ke turant baad mein delhi chala jaunga aur kal shaam tak pahunch jaunga..aapke reception mein shaayad nahi rahunga"
prem-"par preet.."
preet-"bhaiya woh actually mere dost ki reception par jaa raha hoon"
prem-"k.."



How can a friend's reception be more important than your own brother's???..
And the more weirder things is no-one is telling preet this thing, not even the "DULHA" !!!

The Dulha is like.."OK"..!..

This is stupid !..

Anyway,thanx for the pm and continue soon. Do let me know when you update.
Edited by princess_rulz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3
The baraat had started of from Prem's home..Everyone was happy and dancing..Preet and Harman were at their best..Veera was extremely gud and kulraaj too danced…Lalit was happy that his most worthy son was getting a gud bride..GAyatri was happy too..But the surprise package was Biji..She was at her best after all it was her pota's marriage..
Deep inside his heart Prem was very happy and he promised to himself that he wud always look after Here's happiness before his and wud try to keep her happy through out their life and wud never betray her or her trust..There was actually no necessity of this promise b'coz he was the most eligible dulha any parent cud hav asked for..
At Heer's home,Heer looked for a last time at Adi's photo..She didn't know wat to do..HER best frend Nisha came to her
N-"tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho Heer..Adi sirf tumhare liye pardes gaya hai aaki who tumhare layak ban jaaye…tum use dhoka deke apni duniya basaane jaa rahi ho..Adi tumhare bina mar jaayega Heer..Prem accha ladka hai Heer par tum"
H-"Bas Nisha bas…ab chup karo..maine zindagi mein sirf Adi se pyaar kiya ha aur apne akri dum tak karungi par mein apne parivaar ke hathon majboor hoon..tum hi bataao main kya karo..tum toh janti hona ki papaji ko dil ki beemari hai.."
N-"par Heer.."
H-"maine apni zindagi kismat ke haathon saup di hai..jab adi aayega tab mein uske saath jaungi..mein prem ko sab baa dungi..mujhe yakeen hai who mujhe zaroor samjhega"
N-"tum teen zindagiyan barbaad kar rahi ho Heer"
Nisha was in love wid Adi but wen she came to know abt Adi-Heer she kiled her love…And tody her heart too pained to know that Adi wud ……
***
At Delhi
1 week back
Isha-"Par dad mein is ghonchu se shaadi kaise karun"
Jr-"mujhe kuch nahi pata ishu tum isise shaadi karogi and that's final..no behes"
Isha-"par dad"
To herslf-"ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga"
Jr-"isha tum karthikeyan ke saath theek ek ghante baad i.e6pm ko disco jaaogi"
isha-"but Papa u know i hate discos wahan smoking,drinking aur itna loud muzic plus who mad naach..urggh"
Jr-"tum london se aayi ho ya Haridwaar se"
Isha-"papa aako pata haina mujhe yeh sab accha nahi lagta.."
Jr-"don worry mein tumhare saath nikki,minu aur vik ko bhi bhej raha hoon.."
Isha-"but..arggh"
***
The baraat was at the footsteps
The baraat was welcomed by Teji MaanAnd DJ
Ash was looking constantly at Preet..
Veera-"preet who dekho ash tumhe kaise dekh rahi hai"
Preet-"ughh.not again mein toh sagai aur sangeet mein iske bak-bak se thak chuka hoon"
Veera-"way to go bro aap ka kuch nahi ho sakta"
Ash cuming over to them
Ash-"hi preet aaj mein kaisi lag rahi ho"
Preet-"jee behenji aapne mujse kuch kaha"
Ash-"behenji!!!"
And she fainted
Preet went to PRem
Preet-"kyon PB wedding bells ringing"
prem-"is duniyan mein kuch bhi ho jaaye tu nahi sudrega.."
Preet-"PB who dekhiye bhabhi"
Prem-"kahaan"
Preet-"caught u"
Prem-"preet"
Preet-"mein bhagwaanse hamesha prarthna karunga ki mera bhai haesha khush rahe aur haan agar bhabhi ne apko tang kiya toh…"
Prem-"toh kya karega"
Preet-"mien kya karunga..aapki biwi hai"
And they had a gud laugh
love niti
***thanks for replying
princess_rulz..preet wants to buy a gift for them which he had ordered and so going to delhi..prem knows that preet wud never miss the reception even if he tells he may no cum ..b'coz he knows that nothing is more imp than PB for preet..so he knows preet is upto sumthng
Edited by liya16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow gr8 part update soon dear cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: liya16

princess_rulz..preet wants to buy a gift for them which he had ordered and so going to delhi..prem knows that preet wud never miss the reception even if he tells he may no cum ..b'coz he knows that nothing is more imp than PB for preet..so he knows preet is upto sumthng



Toh behan meri, wahan likho toh sahi ke yeh baat hai !

atleast readers ko poori info toh dey !!!

Anyway, good episode so far. Thanx for the pm, and make sure you do it again when u update it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please continue I love it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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why would any one not want to marry prem? *thud!*
actually i kinda love the storyline and i love u for writing it and i would love u even more if u updated soon! 😆
u can make prachi n neev marry 😉 (adi n nisha)
n there can be awkwards moments b/w heer n prem but they will fall in love and we'll be all fainting over their cutoooo romantic moments! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
i liked it, post the new part. i am waiting.
iqra

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