Socha na tha(V6 pg5) Ash/Preet/Dj dance - Page 3

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

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Faith, I hope too that they don't change her into a second Dj! Ash is funny the way she is with her mannerisms and all. 😆

Oh yaa aik DJ hi kaafi hai...more than enough actually....Ya her mannerisms and her dialogues bhi...are funny...hope they stay that way...
And I agree with lively gal..u deserve all that applause😃👏👏

Just read it........it was awesomeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Thanks everyone for your encouragements!🤗

Today I wanted to do something different. We were all floored by last Thursday's episode where Prem protects Heer with the song O re Piya in the background. I really wanted to try do their thoughts but given the scene it was quite difficult. So I've done a mixture of thoughts and prose.

Heer's Point of View(POV)

How did I end up in this mess? Dressed in these bridal clothes, how did everything turn out so badly? Why did I have to help that girl? But then she was so pained.

Pain. A feeling that I couldn't ignore even if I wished to. Her eyes were filled with pain and fear. Fear of losing her chance to have her share of joy with the one she loved. Somehow I felt connected to her in that moment... I would have wanted help if I was in love. Ma always said that God has made us in jodis. That wherever we are, there is someone who with his imperfections is perfect for us. That girl had found her soulmate. Yes.. that's why I helped her. By helping her, I was making Ma's wish come true.

But what was I to do now? These people surrounded me, their questioning glances piercing through me while searching for answers which I didn't have. Their anger ambushed me and I found my courage flood away.

I stepped backwards and I don't even know why. It seeemed the most logical thing to do. As much as I tried, my mouth opened but no words could come out to save myself. I was trapped... At least I was until someone grabbed my wrist and dragged me with him in the room behind me.

Who could it be? Whoever it was, I was strangely safe with my hand locked with his. We hid behind a pillar and I finally looked at him. It was the one I had tried so much to avoid. Prem.

Prem's POV

Lost. That was the word. I am lost. Where? I have absolutely no idea. What is happening to me? How did she manage to make me feel like this?

I was still lost in my thoughts when I heard exclamations from our reception hall. I had carefully organised everything for the wedding and I rushed to see what was happening. Everyone was surrounding the bride and questioning her quite violently. I was briefly confused as to why people would be ruining her day when I saw her. It was her. The one who had been haunting me for days. But here she was gathered among people who clearly had no wish of letting her go. Her fear reached me in strong waves. I don't what went through my mind except that I just wanted to draw her pain away. I rushed to the party avoiding everyone until I reached the office where she was standing. I was so close and I grabbed her hand and took her with me in the room. It was locked so no one could come in. But I was not satisfied so I hid us behind a pillar. In all that mayhem I didn't really have time to look at her. And when she finally met my gaze, I knew that I was again lost.

The Oh re Piya scene

' No, I yearn upward and touch you close. Then, I stand away, I kiss your cheek. Catching your soul's warmth, I pluck the rose and love it more than can say. Then the good minute goes and I stand away. '

-Robert Browning

It's said that when soulmates are together, the rest of the world fades away. Chaos is a distant past and the only real truth is the link between the two.

At that moment, Prem and Heer were lost in the simplicity of the instant. Their hands were still joined together and though none would admit it, they had no intention of letting go.

Heer could not understand what was happening to her. Here she was with the one she was to marry. After all that happened she had forgotten the hope she had kept in her heart of meeting him at least once. And now, when everyone was against her it was Prem who stood by her side. His presence, his eyes, the emotion in them. She kept staring at the man in front of her. He barely knew her and yet he was looking at her as if she was his very soul. Tears streamed along her cheeks as his emotions touched her.

She's so beautiful, Prem kept thinking. So beautiful. The dupatta covering her head dropped on her forehead; the red colour making her beauty glow more strongly than ever. It was surely his fate that he had to see her today as a bride... his bride? It couldn't have been a coincidence. What was it that drew him to her? Sometimes he thought that it was the pain in her eyes, then maybe her shyness... or rather the simplicity of their relationship.

He stared at her and when he realised she was trying to explain herself he just knew that he didn't need them. He trusted her... that was all that he needed to know. The innocent creature in front of him was unable to hurt someone. She was probably trying to help someone even if it was a crazy way of doing it. So he stopped her. His hand covered her rosy lips.

Heer remained stunned when he stopped her from giving justifications. Her heart skipped a beat. Why did he have to trust her that much?

Someone well said that words are not necessary when soulmates are together. In those beautiful moments, Prem and Heer understood each other.

Lost... indeed they were.

There you go... It's the first time I'm doing a mix like that and with pictures on top of that. I'm not too convinced myself but I posted it anyways😆 What did you think of it?

Also a big thanks to Nandini for the pictures!😊

Hi all... Just in case you were wondering, I changed the topic's name for the simple reason that I needed more space in the title to indicate which scene I'm doing.😊

Thanks!

Originally posted by: jedi_girl

Hello everybody!😊

Well I've had an idea in my mind for quite a while now and it's about the thoughts of our dear characters in the show. I've been finally inspired enough( also gathered enough courage) to do it. This will be a collection of what they were thinking in those scenes which I felt are the most memorable. I'm aiming at romantic, dramatic and mainly funny stuff😆 This is just to have some fun so I mean no offence.😊

( note: what is written in pink is what happened in the episode. What is in blue is my interpretation of what the characters could have been thinking. I just realised that I hadn't mentionned this😉)

15th April episode...

In Prem's room- The Prem-Heer scene.

There she was... trying to escape from him in the darkness of the night. She moved stealthily and quickly as her instincts took over.

Prem ko mujhe dekhna nahin chaahiye! Heer kept chanting in her head until she felt a strong hand grab her slender wrist. He caught her and pushed her against the wall, locking her.

'Kaun ho tum?' he said in a low yet decided whisper. He repeated the question even if she covered her face with her arm.

Prem: Yeh kya ho raha hain? Pehle to mandir mein wo thi... aur ab yeh ladki! Yahaan to ajeb ladkiyoon ka mela hain! Sab apna chehra chupati hain...

Heer: Arara!! Main to phas gayi! Kahan hain mera 5m duppata....

Prem: Chorni kahin ki!

Heer: Koi hawa bhi nahin hain....

Prem: Abhi iska chehra dikhega.

He looked for the lighter in his pocket but his eyes never left her.

Heer: Hawa hota to apne dupatta se apna chehra chupa deti... warna mere bal bhi hain! Hmm... Pehle mulaquat ki tarahwo mujhe nahin pehchanega...to kya huwa agar tab mein bhootni lagi... Prem to bhag jaega.

Just as Heer's eyes were getting used to the darkness the lighter threw a jet of spark on her. Slowly he approached her and moved her hand away with utmost easiness.

He had expected to see a chorni but what he had in front of him blew his wits away. Those same dark eyes full of pain. He could have recognised them anywhere and at any time. They were so expressive that he could distinguish every bit of suffering they held. But? How could the mandir girl be here? She was so beautiful. As beautiful as a blooming flower in the rising sunshine. What else could he have done except to stare at her and feel that her pain was his own?

Prem: Kitna dard hain ine aakhon mein? Kya hua isse ke wo itni takleef mein hain?

Heer: Wo mujhe iss tara se kyun dekh raha hain jaise wo mere saare dard apne saath lejaeyga? Kitne masoom hain yeh chehra.. Kya yeh wohi hain jo chachiji ne humse kaha tha?

Lost amidst their thoughts and the moment, they stayed that way until someone swiched on the light. It was Preet.

Heer: Main yahaan nahin reh sakti!

And off she ran as if her whole life depended upon it. Her dupatta dragged along the endless corridors but Prem wouldn't stop running after.

Heer: Bhag Dhano Bhag!!!

Prem: Are yeh hamesha bhagti kyon hain?

Heer: Yeh ghar bhi! Kitna bara hain? Kitna bhagoogi main? Agli baar to Prem ko bhagna parega!

Prem: Usne kya khaya hain morning mein ke yeh itni tezi se bhag rahi hain?? Main to thakne laga! Oi bhagne-wali, yeh koi rajdhani race nahin hain!

They finally reached the hall where everybody was gathered. Heer rushed down the stairs her dupatta flowing behind her....

Prem: Ab yeh dupatta?! Yeh kaise hota hain ke har waqt yeh 5m dupatta mere chehre se chipak jata hain? Aise to main choking se mar jaaooga!

They both pushed their way around the people to reach the door...

Heer: Log kab iss sentence, ' Mere raaste se hat jao!' , samjhegey?

Back on the road, they continued running until Heer saw an open car and decided to use to escape from Prem. She got into it and left Prem behind. She looked at him one last time. In the meanwhile, Prem had written down the car's plate number.

Prem and Heer: Kab hoga agla amna samna?

You like it? You hate it? Please comment! Thanks!😊

Bhavna

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what did i think???? OMMMMGG u r unbelievably wicked... my god dis was sooo touching n intense... wooow i am actually speechless which i never am!!!

loved da mix.... plz do carry on
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hey Amrita, welcum to IF... as u can see its very fun ere... hope u enjoy urself n need ne help jus PM me... hope u lykd Bhavna scenes 😆 😆 😆

OMG!! I'm totally amazed!! That was so beautifully written, words can't do justice, I'm serious here, this whole idea was simply beautiful, each word prepresented PH so much, fitted each character beauitfully. The way the pictures, blended to nicely with what you had writte, I nearly got into a trance, it was juuts too good hun!!👏👏 Fab work!

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