Socha na tha(V6 pg5) Ash/Preet/Dj dance - Page 4

@ Zai... Zai, thank you soooo much! 🤗

I'm really very very very happy that you liked it!😃 😃I was so afraid that it would not be good but your words are sooo sweet and encouraging!😉 It was particularly difficult to write their thoughts. I mean the scene is intense and to write what they feel is tough. I'm happy if I managed to convey even a tenth of their feelings😊

@ Amrita Hi Amrita! Welcome to the forum. I hope to see you around a lot.. You'll have a blast here😊

@ Salma. Salma!! I'm so glad to see you here again! Your words truly touch me! Hearing good things on my writing puts me in a good mood!😆😉

@ Ouma... Ouma thanks a lot yaar!! I'm happy that you liked it. Seriously, I never thought I would manage to finish it myself. That was how tough I this scene was for me. Well, credit goes to Harshad and Additi for being great actors!😳😊

@ Everyone: Thanks a lot!! To be honest I thought that it wasn't going to be good this time. But if I managed to make you guys smile while reading then you've made my day😊

Hello all! I'm finally back with another update! I know... I know.. Some people are going to bash me up for taking soooo much time to update!😛 But I blame my writer's block. Yesterday's epi with the Biji-Ash scene seriously cracked me up so I decided to try it this time.

22nd May Episode

Biji and Ashleesha scene in the shop.

Preet and Harman had managed to escape but one person was left behind: Ash. Biji was coming towards her, her mind brimming with good intentions which our Mogambo Ash was not likely to understand.

Biji approached Ash and wondered what the girl was doing with that tiny piece of cloth.

Biji: Yeh to takyeh(pillow) ka cover lagta hai... Hai Rabba! Yeh bacche bhi badmaash hai! Mujhe takyeh ki dukhaan mein chodkar kudh kapde dekhne chale gaye! Sare ke sare gadar log mujhe Ashleesha puttar ke saath chodhkar chale gaye... 😆

Biji finally came out of her thoughts and started talking to Ash: ' Are puttar yeh tu ghar ke vaaste takyeh cover kyun khareed rahi hain...'

Ash: Kya? Ash aur takya? Kis angle se yeh strapped top takya lagta hain??

Biji ignored Ash's faces and continued her reverie,' Apne vaaste ke liye kuch kharidna...'

Ash: Is it because of the colour? Or because of the straps? Ash ko samaj nahin aa raha!

' ...Soni soni salwar kameez... Sariyaan...'

Ash(in a screaming voice and putting her hands to her ears in horror): Kya Salwaar Kameez? NAHIN!!! Biji ban gayi Prem No 2!

'...Lambein lambein parangde...'

Ash: Lambein lambein kapde mein ya to mein doop jaoogi ya kuch bhi nahin dikhega bhi... Waise bhi mujhe Preet... Nahin...Prem ko apne clothes dikhana hain.

Finally Biji lost her patience with Ash who wasn't giving her any attention, ' Yeh tum takyeh ke covers kyun dekh rahin hain?'

' Oh come on Biji!' Ash interrupted her, ' Yeh takyeh ki cover nahin hain!'

Biji: Kya... yeh takyeh ka cover nahin hain? To phir bedsheet hoga.. Kher.. jo bhi hain... koi pehne ki cheez to nahin hain

' Yeh Ash ke kapde hain!' Ash finished proudly as she was sure Biji would be impressed with her choice.

Biji: Agar issne yeh pehna to bilkul bhootni ban jaeingi!

Her illusion was broken in a thousand pieces when she heard Biji's laugh sound around her. Biji was, in fact, laughing so hard that her cheeks and ears had gone to a blooming red!

Ashleesha tried to see the positive side of things...

Ash: Shayad mere Hot clothes dekhar wo Shock ho gayi...😛

Biji: Are yeh to bache ke kapde hain!😆😆

' Are...' Biji tried to talk through her giggles, ' Issme to tera haath bhi nahin jaaeyga!'

Biji: Haath kya... isska to kaan bhi nahin jaaeyga!🤡

Hearing that Ash's eyes bulged out, her eyebrows arched upwards so much that it ultimately made her appear like a zombie!

Ash: Haath nahin jaaeyga?! Kya mein moti ho gayi hoon?! Oh God! I'm sure main moti ho gayee hoon kyunki kal itni sari roti khayee ti! Ash ab tum Detective Ash ban jao! Kaun tha jisne Rotiyaan banayi thi? 🤓

Ash kept thinking but Biji's resolve to stop Ash from even considering these clothes strengthened. She took the 'takya cover' and threw it at a pile, ' Oi khotiya yeh tuche kapde tu hi pehan! Meri bahu ko mat dikha!' She grabbed Ash's arm and took her away from there.

There you go! Okay, it was very short! But wait for this weekend! Because I'm doing a PH romantic scene again!😃 But which one do you want me to do? I have a list.

(1) Prem teasing Heer.

(2) Prem and Heer dancing in the party( dream sequence)

(3) Prem dreaming about Heer with ' Pehli Pehli baar baliye' in the background.

(4) Prem trying to tell Heer he loves her when she is serving drinks to the guests.

Do tell me which one you want because I like all of them😉

P.S: Please leave your comments behind on what I wrote today! Thanks!😊

Bhavna

Bhavna Bhavna!!!!!! i see ur also back wid a bang like Nandini wid her VM's n pic's 😆 😆 😆 finally

Ash n Biji are toooooo funny yaar
Ash(in a screaming voice and putting her hands to her ears in horror): Kya Salwaar Kameez? NAHIN!!! Biji ban gayi Prem No 2! 🤣
this part cracked me up, still laufing while im writing this.....

the romantic scenes of Premeer, well i love all of them, up to u but will love to read about all 4!!! 😆 😆 😆
kip it up 😉

Bhavnaaaaaaaaa yipieeeeeeee u r backkk!!!😃😃😃
Misshed u soooooo muchh..🤗
Lovedd the update.. Oh ya the scene really cracked me up but ur take on it.. LOL prem no 2 hehehehe.. Gooddddd work as always.👏.👏

And haye romantic scene.. I loveeeee all of them😳.. So can I choose 'all of the above'😆...
The teasing one is my all time fav... It was a class apart.. And the dance seq was magicallllll😍 And the dream sequence I justttt lubbed with Prem lost in love expressions and Heer's half smile😳...And the way he grabs her and decides to tell her he loves her... Haye what intensity lol..

Okie okie as its clear I cant choose😆.. I would love ur take on each one of them😃

Thanks Salma and Zai!🤗 I just had to do a funny part before doing a romantic one😉

All 4!😆😆 You two are smart...telling me that you like all of them to make me do all 4!😛 Wow! It will take a lot of time to do all those but I'll do them slowly slowly for you guys!😉

thanks Bhavna, will be waiting for them 😉

Okay so who watched the Dj/Preet/Ash scene yesterday?? That was of the most hilarious episodes I ever watched. So here's my take on it. Enjoy😊

3rd June episode... Ash/DJ/Preet scene

Ash's room

It's said that when one is in love, then he or she becomes blind in love. Sometimes people they turn tone deaf and brainless too.

Today, Ash was no more in her griefing state. Instead she was trying to contemplate her life if Preet was the one she was to marry. She was so uplifted by these more agreeable thoughts that she started to dance and sing...

' Preet mere aankhon mein hain,' she twirled around, ' Preet mein dharkan mein hain...'

Ash was so engrossed in her naach-gaana that she didn't even notice her mother, Dj, coming there to watch her. And when she did...

Ash: Haila! Kahaan aankhein aur dharkan... Ab mom aa gayi hain to sab kuch band.

Dj was by nature a very cool mom but when it came to Ash's obsession over Preet things could never go smoothly: ' Jhalan... Galat kyun gaa rahi hain beta?' she said in an excessively sweet voice.

Ash: Ab main mom ko trap karti hoon 😈 Yeh gaana to unne maloom nahin hoga kyunki unki jawaani to 100 saal pehle tha.

'To sahi kya hain mom?' Ash asked.

Dj: Ab main apni beti ko sikhati hoon... Yeh gaana to usse maloom hi nahin hain kyunki wo meri tarah Madonna nahin hain!

' Sahi? Abhi bata thi hoon main tumhe sahi... Sun!'

Somewhere else in the house...

Preet wandered around the house in a desperate search of a mobile signal. In his search he had taken Harman's phone but even then, his task was in vain...

' Are yeh Harman bhai ke mobile se signal kyun nahin aa raha?' he grunted. When he realised he too had a mobile he was dumbstruck,' Mera mobile kahan hain?' He continued to think,' AB(Ash Bhabhi) ke kamare main hoga...'

Preet: Oh no! AB! Agar mein wahan gaya to phas jaooga! Nahin Preet tumhe bahadur hona chaahiye kyunki jo darr gaya samjho mar gaya... Main jaaooga Gabar Singh ke kamare main even if here we have a Gabar Singh who likes mini skirts instead of baroods and hatyaar😆

Back in Ash's room...

Unknown to everybody, Dj had some secret skills and no they did not only include hatching evil plans. Instead it was a skill that could kill anybody who dared to watch her: singing and dancing in Daljeet style. I let you to imagine what it is like.

Thus, Dj, inspired by her jhalan daughter began to teach her the real lyrics of the song and danced too to show her. She twirled, jumped and bowed without any embarassment.

Prem mere aakhon mein hain...

Ash(horrified): ...................................................

Prem mere dharkan mein hain...

Dj continued to twirl and twirl until she reached the room's far end.

Ash(still horrified): Are mom Prem ke dharkan ke bare mein bas karo.. naachte naachte gir mat jaana warna dharkan hamesha ke liye ban ho jaeingi.

Back in the hallway with Preet...

Prem mere saanson mein hain...

Prem mere aankhon mein hain..

Preet heard the song and stopped in his tracks!

'Prem ki deewani?' he had his sweet naughty smile back, ' Kya baat hain... Lagta hain AB prem ke rang mein bilkul rang chuki hain!'

Preet: That's good news... Prem Bhaiya ke rang mein rang jaana aur mere peeche mat aana! Yay!

Finally back in Ash's room

Bani bani bani re bani!

Prem deewani bani!

Dj had now reached the pinnacle of dancing skills. All restraint gone, she was completely lost in her dancing and singing.

Dj: Kareena ko goli maro... Main hoon Bollywood ki asli Best Actress!😍

Bani bani bani re bani!

Prem deewani bani!

Dj: Ab kya Govinda aur Hrithik mere dancing ke barabar hain? Kahhi nahin!

Ab kya karein dil deewana HAI...

Ab kya karein dil deewana

Lagi lagi lagi re lagi re lagi

Prem ki yeh dhoondne lagi

It was at that same moment where all dancing and singing powers were rumbling in their graves that Preet came in. His happiness and cheekiness flew away with the nazara before him.

Preet( Horrified):.......................................

Lagi lagi lagi re lagi re lagi

Prem ki yeh dhoondne lagi

Preet: Bechare PB... Ab Ash Bhabhi ke baad ab Chachi ji! At least, PB and Ash Bhabhi are of the same generation. Now I'll stop complaining about PB and AB's backfire rishta.

Ab kya karein dil deewana hai

Preet: Chachi-ji umar ka liyaaz karo! Kamar vamar toot gaya to??😆😆

Ab kya karein dil deewana

Preet was still shocked when Dj realised who was there and was equally shocked.

Dj tried to explain herself,' Wo main Ashleesha ko gaana sikha rahi thi'

Preet: Wo to main dekh hi raha hoon😎

There you go!😃

P.S: I think I got one line wrong in the song, so apologies.

that was jus toooooo gud
lubb the update
niti

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