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MEMORY CHRONICLES


Hello Deshians...I am Sunayana, yours Sunzz.Harshiti. Many of you know me as I am currently posting my SS on Premeer "Dil Ko...Tera Intezar Hai which you are reading and many of you don't know. So first let me introduce myself once again.


I am Sunayana, a biiiggg biiiggg biiiggg fan...no...cooler...no no...AC...naaa...a worshipper of Prem&Heer, i.e., Premeer aka Harshiti. I had watched every single episode of KDMHMD since the very first day.Iinitially I was attracted to Heer aka Additi's innocent face that had been shown in the first promo and I thought "wowww...seems intresting. The waiting in Heer's eyes for her Prem was so intense and pure that I instantly fell in love with HEER. At first I watched the show only to see her. After that the name Prem...I didn't know who would be Prem as they didn't reveal it in the promo but the name Prem gave me an unusual feeling...a feeling of restlessness...a feeling of eagerness...may be because I am a hugggeee huggge fan of Salman Khan and he is the Prem of Bollywood. Whatever the reason might be, I was eagerly waiting for Prem and Heer's love story to begin.


Then they had shown Harshad...well practically I recognized him at the very first sight because I had seen his previous works (Not for him but for my mom used to see "MAMTA, I have a twin sister so I saw "AMBER DHARA and I loved Rajiv Khandelwal so "LEFT RIGHT LEFT). So I was kind of hopeful that the show would do well but what I didn't know then was that this show and these two characters PREM & HEER would become a part of my life and the rest is history. For almost 2 years I laughed with them...cried with them...lived almost all the emotions.


Well it has been 10 long years but still the memories of "Kis Desh... and specially Premeer doesn't leave us. In fact it is increasing with each passing day. So I thought of creating this thread called "MEMORY CHRONICLES. In this thread I will write one shots on Premeer on different tracks of the show itself...some of them will be emotional...some of them will be funny and some of them may be a little dramatic but they will always be on Premeer and their eternal, unconditional love for each other. There were so many wonderful, heart touching, emotional and romantic scenes of Premeer so it's kind of difficult to choose on which track or scene will I write so I have decided that I will write randomly...if you want any particular track or scene you are most welcome to give your suggestions.

I am finishing my ramblings here...if you guyz find it worthy to be reading then plzzz do read and share your views.

Love,

Sunayana


Index

Page 1 Promise

Page 2 My Fault

Page 2 You Are The Only One (A Sequel to My Fault)


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Not a single comment 😭😭 ok never mind💔 As I had promised I am back with my new OS on Premeer...I know that I have my already on-going SS which I have to update but since this thought came to my mind I couldn't help penning it down soon. I so wanted a heart-to-heart emotional conversation between Premeer when they got back together after 6 years but the creative's never showed it... so I thought to write my own imagination...here's the OS...enjoy reading.


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PROMISE

A Premeer OS

He stared at her sleeping figure...so calm and serene...just like before...6 years ago. He sighed and thought about the moments spent with his wife...his life. He still couldn't believe that it was actually true that now they were together...he had been doing this since their second marriage, off course with each other, that waking up in the middle of the night and seeing her sleeping figure to make himself sure of her presence in his life...again.

He still couldn't believe he had once doubted her love for him...not that he hadn't been regretting it for the last 6 years...but whenever he saw her face his guilt seemed to have drowned him in the ocean of remorse and pain that he had been going through. But the worst dream that he had been dreaming for last 6 years was of that dreadful night...one night and everything changed...the amount of love and trust that they claimed to have on each other, was gone in a matter of second.

He never wanted it...but he was too puzzled to react to anything. Seeing an another woman with him on the same bed...the way her dress was slightly removed from her shoulder giving a clear view...the way the bed sheets were dissolved...and his headache from last night's drinking...snatched the power of thinking like a sane man from him. He believed what he had been shown on purpose...and he confessed it. He knew it would snatch everything from him...and it happened. He lost everything...so damn everything. She was his everything...his wife...his life.

When first time he heard about his wife having an affair with her childhood best friend, he didn't believe it...it was his mother who began the act of poisoning his son's life...that son whom she claimed to love the most. Off course he didn't knew it...still he doesn't know.

He was always the perfect son, the perfect brother, the perfect lover and tried to be the perfect husband...but in that one relation "HUSBAND, he failed miserably. No...he was a good husband... perfect one...but then the son won and the husband lost the game...the game called "TRUST. He chose to trust his mother over his wife.

"Prem, his chain of thoughts was broken by her gentle sleepy voice.

"What are you thinking in the middle of the night? she asked seeing him looking at her blankly. Worry was visible in her eyes.

He smiled and took her hands...taking those soft fingers near his lips he placed a gentle kiss and softly whispered "Nothing.

"Don't lie, she scolded him lovingly, "You still can't hide things from me because I still can read your eyes.

She cupped his face with the hand which was, till then, captured by his hand. "Did anything happen at work she further asked.

"No he replied shortly though intently looking at her.

"Then? she stroked his hair gently...the very next moment she felt herself being captured in her husband's arms in a very possessive and protective manner.

"I am sorry Heer, he sobbed.

She gently pushed him out of the hug and cupped his face with her both hands...she could clearly see the guilt which was there when they both thought that he had betrayed her...had broken their relationship. Though everyone knew the truth that they had never betrayed one another...never broken each other's trust...though everything had been settled down, still she was unable to remove the guilt which kept coming back to her husband.

Yes there was time when she thought that her husband had betrayed her love and trust by sleeping with another woman...not only another woman but with her cousin, yes there was time when she thought that her husband had wanted to snatch her child, the reason of her only existence, from her...but then also she wasn't totally innocent. She blindly followed her mother-in-law's every words...not even once did she try to ask or talk to her husband. The man, whom she loved all her life...probably from the time when she herself didn't know the meaning of love...could he do such a thing??? She never asked herself. She believed what she had been shown on purpose.

And off course, how could she forget her mother-in-law. She still remembered she was talking of never forgiving Prem for what he had said at the restaurant about Rajveer and her. But it was her mother-in-law who told her to leave the house right then...again it was only because of her that she once again had to leave Prem when she had returned that day after Geet confessed that she already knew everything and that Prem was still waiting for his Heer.

She could feel his pain because she had been sailing in the same ship as his. But there was a difference. She had her child with her...their child...their "Chahat. But he...he had no one, practically no one...he himself distanced himself from everyone to punish himself for betraying his wife.

She couldn't take it anymore and hugged him as tightly as possible...if only she had once asked him about the matter that her mother-in-law was telling her...she so wished she had! But once the damage is done, it's done. You couldn't undo it. And if anything could be done at that moment, it would be to make a "PROMISE to each other that they won't let it happen in the future.

Heer knew that was exactly what she was going to do at that moment. She placed her hands on his hair and caressed it gently to sooth him.

"Don't say sorry Prem...it was never entirely your fault...I was at fault too...mujhe sochna chahiye tha tumhe chhodke jaane se pehle...maa ki baat pe aank band kar ke bharosa karne se pehle...I am sorry too Prem...I am sorry too.

"But Heer I... he couldn't complete as Heer placed her finger on his lips... "Shhh!! Stop blaming yourself Prem...I said we both were at faults, didn't i? and from this moment onwards I don't want to see those tears in your eyes...PROMISE me Prem we won't talk about this... I don't want to talk about our past but about our present and future with you by my side.

Prem nodded. "And now I want to PROMISE you something Prem...I won't let anyone come between us...never ever she further added.

"We won't, Prem immediately replied assuring herself that he won't repeat the same mistake of mistrusting her.

They joined their heads and closed their eyes savouring each other's presence in their life...savouring the moment...because it was their moment...a moment of togetherness which will last for the rest of their lives.

Guyz I have tried to write this on Premeer's feelings when they got back together after 6 long years. I don't know if I did justice to it or not...but plzz do read and share your thoughts...I will be eagerly waiting for your views.

Love,

Sunayana

Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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(Warning - I won't be able to unreserve for a very long time because my exams have started and they'll continue till November)

But I don't want you to me upset, I want you to know that I love your ramblings! I really appreciate them.

Also, thank you for the OS.

It has nicely explained their feelings and the sadness...the regret.
Well written. 👏
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Originally posted by: Shwe-ta-sri

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(Warning - I won't be able to unreserve for a very long time because my exams have started and they'll continue till November)

But I don't want you to me upset, I want you to know that I love your ramblings! I really appreciate them.

Also, thank you for the OS.

It has nicely explained their feelings and the sadness...the regret.
Well written. 👏




Thank you Shwetasri for reading and appreciating it even during your exams😊😊 i can understand that and i have no problm if you can't read right now...you can read after your exams are over...but there are other readers too in IF right???😭😭


P.S.- All the best for your exams...do well👍🏼

Love,
Sunayana
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This is super awosome 👍🏼



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Originally posted by: sadiaharshiti

This is super awosome 👍🏼





Thanks sadia for liking and appreciating it❤️ means a lot😊 soo happy to see you again😃😃


Love,
Sunayana
Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow great os, Prem and Heer really belongs to each other.
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Originally posted by: mijanur

Wow great os, Prem and Heer really belongs to each other.



Thank you for liking and commenting on it😊 so glad to see you back😃
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My Fault

A Premeer OS


This OS is on the track after Veera's death. Here Gayatri openly accuses Nihal and Heer for Veera's death and summons Prem to choose between his mother and wife.

It had been 10 days since Veera had left the world leaving her mother in a false belief that her husband was the root cause of her death or in other words he had killed her. Not only her husband but also her elder sister-in-law Heer was equally responsible for her tragic untimely demise.


It had been 10 days since Gayatri had lived a life full of grief for her youngest child and full of revenge for her daughter-in-law, who, she thought, was the sole reason for the end of her daughter's life.


It had been 10 days since Prem had smiled as the guilt of not being able to save his little sister, whom, he considered his own child, was swallowing him inside.

AND it had been 10 days since Heer had been divided into two selves between her paternal family and the family of her in-laws.

Though the entire Juneja family was drowned in sorrow for the demise of the youngest member of the family, they never blamed Nihal or Heer in that case. But Gayatri was not the old Gayatri...in those 10 days she had changed completely. The motherly love and affection that Heer used to receive from her mother-in-law was somewhere missing and she did feel that.


"Didi...Didi... Meher called Heer. She could easily sense the worry and panic in her younger sister's voice.


"Yes Meher...what happened...you are sounding very tensed, asked Heer.


"Didi..actually...wo..police has arrested Nihal bhiya suspecting him for Veera's death, Meher informed with teary eyes.

"What!!! was the only word that could manage to slip from her mouth. Shock was clearly visible on her face.


Listening the noise other members of the family came out of their rooms and Meher informed them the situation.

"But beta who had filed the complaint against him? asked Lalit.

"Pata nahi bauji...bas unhone kaha k Nihal bhaiya ko arrest kar liya hai, sobbed Meher.


"Tu ro mat Meher...I am going there...everything's gonna ba fine...Nihal bhaiya will soon be released, Heer tried to console Meher.


"But first of all we need to know who had filed the complaint, Kulraj suggested.


"Ji didi...I am going to police station to find out this, Heer informed them.


Prem, Preet and Harman were standing there but none of them was trying to anything about it...Heer cast a glance at Prem silently asking him if he would go with her but he avoided his eye contact.


"Maine kiya complaint a voice came from back before she took her step out of the house. Evryone turned and saw Gayatri was standing there with eyes full of rage.


"Ma aapne? asked Heer not believing her own ears.


"Yes, came her short reply.


"But why maa...Nihal bhaiya didn't do anything...you know that...it was an accident...I know that you are still in shock but... ...she couldn't complete her sentence as Gayatri showed her palm to stop her.


"I very well know Heer what I had done and I don't want anyone to say anything about you, she gave her warning.


Heer knew there was no use of talking to Gayatri...so she went to Prem and held his arm.

"Prem..Prem plzzz tell maa to withdraw the case...you know that bhaiya didn't do anything...didn' you? she pleaded.


Prem looked at her and saw her devastated state...it was true that he was in pain for his sister's death but he also knew that Heer was not in less pain...she loved Veera equally...he did know his mother's changed behavior towards her...and on top of that her brother was in jail in the accusation of his own wife's murder where it was quite clear in the post-mortem report that it was an accident.


He slowly wrapped his hand around her and held her tightly. "Relax Heer...we will save Nihal.


As soon as Heer heard those words from him she looked at him greatfully. That was only the thing that she was wanting...his support...her PREM's support. She knew that it would be difficult because they had to make Gaytri agree for that but she was confident that with Prem by her side, she could do that. But even before their first step there came the sudden blow from her mother-in-law.


"Prem...agar aj tu iss ladki k saath apni behen ke khuni ko chhurane gaya to apni maa ko humesha ke liye kho dega, Gaytri roared.


Prem was shocked at this sudden declaration. He didn't understand what he should do. He came to his mother slowly and held her hands. "Maa what are you saying? he asked in trembling voice.


"I am saying right...if you go with her you will lose me forever, Gayatri replied aggressively.


"No maa...plzz don't say that...you know I can't afford loosing you, he literally cried.


Heer was watching all this...she couldn't see Prem in that state and thought she herself would talk to Gayatri. "Maa, she called.


Gayatri turned towards her but didn't look at her. " Ma...plzz ma try to understand...bhaiya didn't do anything...it was an accident...plzz withdraw the case...plzz ma plzz ma, she begged holding her feet but Gayatri jerked her feet in hatred. As a result Heer stumble and fell on the floor.


"Heeerrr', Prem rushed to her and held her arm to support her. "Are you all right? he asked out of concerned.


Heer nodded her head slowly though everyone could see the blood that was oozing out from the corner of her mouth. Kulraj came to her and touched her shoulder.

"Come you need first aid, she proposed and was about to take her with her but Gayatri's next words stopped them.


"Prem aj iski chhoti si chot tujhe dikhayi de rahi hai but Veera ki maut dikhai nahi de rahi hai...her brother is responsible for your's death and that you can't see, Gayatri spitted venom. "I have decided that Heer will not live in this house anymore. In fact she will not be part of our lives anymore...she is no one to me.

Everyone in the living room stood there shocked...they could never think of Gayatri holding so much hatred against Heer...the one girl she herself had chosen for his son...the one girl for whom she even went against her own husband.


"Ma aap...


"No Prem today you have to choose between me or her...and If you choose her then you can live the house as well, Gayatri gave her verdict leaving all the members in utter disbelief.


"Maa aap janti hai main Heer se bohut pyar karta hun...main kaise uske bina rahnga, Prem tried to convince her.


"Aur mujhse? Don't you love me son? Ohh I can understand I not you real mother only a step mom so how can you choose me over her...I can understand son...they say it right...blood relation is the highest relation...may be I was wrong to think of you as my son...may be I was wrong to love you more than my own children she emotionally blackmailed Prem.


And with that she won her son...yes Prem left Heer's hand and bowed his head down.

"PB plzz don't do this, Preet tried to change his PB's decision.


"Prem what are you doing? asked kulraj completely baffled by Prem's decision. "Plzz think before you make any decision Prem, she further added.


Heer stooped Kulraj by holding her hand from saying anything...she slowly hugged her and Kulraj couldn't help but crying. One by one Heer hugged Preet and Meher, Harman and Maya and last but not the least...her bauji...yes Lalit had always been her father more than father-in-law.


"Plsss forgive me beta...I couldn't complete my promise of taking care of you, Lalit folded his hands and apologized on behalf of his wife.

Heer just hugged him tightly and cried on the shoulder of her father one last time. Finally she stepped out of the house without looking back at the one person who happened to be her reason to smile...reason to live...HER PREM. It's been almost 3 months that she left the house...she left him. Whom was he kidding??? She didn't leave him; he made her leave him only to prove his mother that he was her son...not what other people said...a step son; only to make her mother happy. But was he happy himself?



So this is the end. I don't know what I have written...just tried to show the condition of Prem's heart while saying Heer to leave him and the house. Plzzz do read and share your views and if you liked it then don't forget to hit the like button.

Edited by Sunzz.Harshiti - 6 years ago
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Urgh!! The anguish!!
Poor Heer!! 😭

You made me relive that terrible moment in the show...I don't know who I hated more Gaytri Version 2 or Prem for crumbling before his mother like a house of cards. 😡

This was well written...so good job for that...👍🏼

However...the only person I could feel sorry for was Heer. She was in no way at fault yet she bore the brunt of the blame... 🤔 Her feelings of being stunned and devastated were so well portrayed by you. 👏

As for Prem...he made his bed...and now he has to sleep in it...alone. 😡

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