yusra krystu-khushi manuscripts (MEET) ch 2 pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhea_401

Very interesting...welcome to the league n keep up thegood work!!

N Fatima thanks fr d pm!



shukriya rhea :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mou_farah

<font color="#CC6600" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Walakium Assalam Yusra ...
Welcome to Kis Desh forum😃 ... it's really good to see new people joining here😃 ...

I loved the concept of ur story😃 ... I've a weakness on these stories where childhood buddies turn lovers at the end since I have watched Kis Desh😆 ... 1st chapter was really nice😃 ... Loved it </font>❤️




shukriya mou.. i too have that weekness... and all blame to kis desh for it.. i tried not to let the essence of desh die... shukriya for such a great feedback.. keep on reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear! That was super cute!

Waiting for the next part! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so cute,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
especially the payal part.
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi yusra
Welcome to the meet world
Its so good that people are again taking interest in writing about meet
Actually I am a silent reader and hardly comment but good stories always force me to coment and I really liked your start
The story is actually looking very interesting
So I wish you will continue with this story soon
Looking forward for the next update so do pm me
Thanks fatima for the pm for the story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Yusra
Welcome to Kis Desh forum. Nice meeting you.
Ty Faima for link.

Romantic title.
The description of kids in field did make me think about show.
Cute concept. I just thought Meher and Preet are super matured for that age, the words and dialogues made me think like they're adults. I'm sure I wasn't this smart in their age.
I could tell from the way you write, you're very experienced in telling stories.
I like colorful font.
So payal is a link for hero and heroine to find each other huh. Let's see how next part is.
Re : translation I could give an idea.
My other friends write that in different colour. Only suggestion.
Ty for your story. Keep up the writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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How about a special update today Yusra.😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello and welcome
i cant get enough of this couple - the beginnig was just - awww
i bet he will forget her, hahah
looking forward to reading every chapter of this...
and fatima ur the best - thx for letting us know about this :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well aslamalaikum everyone an equal amount of appreciation and criticism aswell... thankyou all for your honest feedback ...

love yusra krystu-khushi






CHAPTER 1

tera mera rishta



18 years back...



meher still waved looking at the sky until
the plane disappeared into the clouds
a long tears skipped through her eyes




" i'll miss you preet, i'll miss you "





she whispered to herself





bg: background



dur kahan tak reh paoo gay
aj nahi toh kal aoo gay...



(how far will you go
today or tomorrow
you ar going to come
back)



18 years later



mocco disc



as everyone shouted preets name , he jumped on the bar
and gave flying kisses to everyone...



"this one is for you, would be mrs heer juneja"



as preet announced his dedication everyone looked towards
heer who was standing across the table.. as everyone
looked at her , she gave a sly smile to all





(song: tera hero idhr hai from moveie mai tera hero)



preet jumped down and sat on his knees infront of heer
forwarding his hand , heer smiled and put his hand
on his hand andpreet kissed on it singing





Dekha hai tujhko jabse
Haay main toh hil gaya
Lagta hai mere seene se dil nikal gaya



(the time i saw you , i am shaken
i feel my heart went out of my body )



preet stood up and twirled heer inside
nudging her shoulder while she covered her face
in embaracement



Mummy se kya Daddy se bhi milaaunga tujhe
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
PALAT...



(ill ltake you to meet my parents
but whatever i say i dont know why
you feel that i am wrong
just turn)




heer moved away from preet
but he blocked her way and stareted to
dance around her



Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat...



(where is your concentration when your hero
is here... turn around )




heer pushed preet away while he hed his collar
and moved his shirt in total hero style




Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
ki tera dhyan kidhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai




(do you even know that your hero is here )




preet started to dance with girls around him
who were trying to woo her.. heer looked back at him and
shooked her head , preet who noticed it left the girls hand who nearly
fell and went back to heer





Ho kehta hai mujhse kyun zamaana..
Arey haan, nahi aasaan hai tujhko paana
Aah.. tere nakhre uthaaun sanam
Mujhko teri kasam




(i dont understand why the world ays so
but i know its hard to get you
but i promise ill take all your moods
and thats a promise)




heer laughed at preet antics




Taang dun chand ko, teri kurti mein
Arey jo bhi main kahun
tujhe lagta hai kyun ghalat
Arey PALAT...




(ill hang up the moon
but whatever i say why you feel it wrong just turn around )





he grabbed both heers arms and started to dance in a funny way
making heer dance aswell



Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat na...

Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
Ke tera dhyan kidhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai
Tera dhyan kidhar hai
Ye tera hero idhar hai




(where are you lost when your hero is here)



as preet and heer danced.. the song finished
everyone clapped for preets performance
preet bow down while heer folded her arms.. preet saw heer
and hugged her




preet: so how was my special dedication for you?

before heer could answer back preet got a whack on his head
he turned around and

preet: ufff pb... why so insecure? i just dedicated a song to my
would be heer bhabi ji and you are already jaleous ahan?


heer laughed while prem looked down embaraced


prem: tu nai sudhray ga na?


(wont you ever get serious preet?)



preet shooked his head...


preet: wow mai ku sudhron? heer bhabi aek project kayliye yahn
canada aein and you got lucky.. veera whan ludhiana crafts course karnay
gai and she got nihaal jiju and you both couples are supposedly are going to get married next month and here i cant even perform for my beautiful bhabi? plus the only good thing would be kay after these 18 long years i am going to meet
my childhood bestie meher who ditched me that badly kay poray 18 saal mai apnay naam kay dost say aek dafa baat bhi nai...




prem: ouch preet i can feel hurt

prem teased preet while preet glared at prem...
heer went and sat on the table preet and prem too joined her... heer smiled to herself thinking of something


prem: kia huwa heer?





flashback
17 years back



heer: meher plzz kab tak wait karay gi? humay is baat ko
samjh jana chai kay wo log canada mai apni life mai
busy hain and probably humay bhool chukar hain
chal na aj hum teray pasand kay cartoons dekhtay hn
chal na uth...



meher who was sitting on the floor infront
of the door huuging her knees


meher: i dont wanna watch cartoons


heer: but teray favourite lagay howay hn .power puff girls chal na



ash came and sat on the sofa changing channels while colouring
on her drawing book...



ash: ab beth kay un junejas ka wait karo
meher thats so filmy



meher looked upset

meher: huh


herer: meher plzz


meher: heer didi i trust preet wo ullo hai
par jhoota nai usnay promise kia hai toh wo
zaror courier bhejay ga


heer: thats blind


the bell rand and meher ran to the door..
she opened the door and saw the post man who handed
her the courier , meher turned around and showed
it to heer and ash as if showing off her trophy and smiled when she
opened the box and found a bead with a chit


" humari dosti ki nishani .. preet"



flashback ends



prem smiled :how sweet
preet who was looking down also smiled
preet: bhabi phir meher nay kabhi contact ku ni kia ? i mean
she always trusted me...

heer: maa ki tabiat kharab hogai and meher didint wanted me to suffer in my
studies isliye usnay maa ka dehan rakhna start kardia.. woi thi jisnay mujhy
prem ky emails ka reply karnay keliye manaya . she is like a positive thing
jo sabki khushi chati hai...



prem: great girl...

preet: aan hmmm bhabi

heer: hmm?

preet: aur btaye na .. i mean hows meher habitually.. i mean... hmm


he stammered


heer looked at preet


heer : meher...



at ludhiana :



teji switched on the song





Zara Phank Jhatak Gai
Dhool Atak Aur Lachak Machak Ke Duur Bhatak

Ud Dagar Dagar Kasbe Kuche Nukkad Basti

Mein Yeah E Yeah E

Itdi Se Mud Ada Ud
Kar Le Puri Dil Ki Tamanna
Hawa Se Jud Ada Se Ud
Purr Bhuur Bhurrr Phuurrr
Tu Hai Hera Panna Ree

Masakali MasaKali
Ud Mataak Kali Mataak Kali



a girl came running towards her room
playing with her dupatta and opened the window



in canada


heer: agar humaray ghar mai suraj ki roshni c sabsay zada kici ko pyar hai toh wo hai meher



in ludhiana:



meher opened the window and as the sun rays fell on her face she looked side ways and then faced the sun again inhaling the light



Aye Masakali MasaKali
UD MataaK Mataak



heer: ghar pay mali toh rakha howa hai papji nay par jab tak meher sab podon ko pani na day day tab tak she wont chill...



as heer laughed preet laughed too...



meher went into the back garden and watered the plants





Udti Ghataye Hai Kajal Mera
Mehki Hawaye Hai Aanchal Mera
Mausam Hai Meri Hasi
Aayi Re Aayi Re Khushi
Khushi Khushi Khushi
Laayi Re Laayi Re Khushi
Khushi Khushi Khushi





meher spinned around making beautiful noises




cham cham cham...



heer: uski pehchan hai uski payal jo tumnay usay di hai



preet put his elbow on the table and listened to heers
discrption dreamily


preet: aur?



heer: aur wo bht sakht hai jab baat ati hai maa aur papji ko dawaiyan dainay mai..



meher : maa paapji ap dawai kha rahay hn ya ni...?


both teji and balraj made a face but dn looking at angry meher they ate their medicines...



prem and preet laughed


prem: such a teacher in house

heer : ya she is kind off


preet: aur bhabi...



heer: preet aur... haan meher loves fields



Chali re.. chali re
Junoon.. ko liye
Katra.. katra
Lamho.. ko diye



meher ran outside in the fields jumping up and down..

her laughter echoed in the fields all her bacha party of friends came and
meher started to play with them



Pinjre se uda
Dil ka shikra
Khudi se maine ishq kiya re hha




meher held a pigeon in her hand and left the pigeon in the air .. and waved to it...




Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re jiya o..ho..



preet: aur au btay na

heer: aur kal bhi uskay best friend tum hi thay aur aj bhi tum hi ho aur haan..
omg preet tumharay is aur bhabi aur bhabi kay chakar mai i forgot kay mujhy
project submit karana tha.. lets go prem chalo na...



she held prems hand and rush out of the disc...


preet rubbed the back of his neck and got up hmself..
he went to his car and was about to open it but saw the moon...




preet : jaisay socha tha waisi hi ho hati kati punjaban..


he smiled...




here in ludhiana meher sat on the rock under the sacriest tree
and looked at the sky...



preet:mujhy pora yakeen hai kay aj bhi tum us darwanay tree ky neechay
zaror bethti hgi haina...





meher played with her payal...





preet: aur i trust kay aj bhi poray din mai tum mujhy yad toh karti hogi





meher: ullo
and she smiled
meher:if you think kay mai aj bhi tumhay miss karti hongi toh






preet shooked his head





meher threw a rock in the river



meher: toh tumhay theek lagta hai...i miss you preet ... i miss you...










here preet took out a box from his pocket and opened it there
were a pair of beautiful chandi ki payals...





meher tapped her payals and heard



cham cham cham ...




Seene Mein Dil Dil Mein Dhadkan
Dhadkan Mein Kya Hain Teri Pyaas Hain
Har Pyaas Mein Dard Hain Sanam
Yeh Dard Tera Ehsaas Hain





preet hugged the box...
and mehr hugged her knees...






the end



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love yusra krystu -khushi







Edited by yusramazhar1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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owww pleasee translation every word in english just want to understand everything about MEET,

preet is soo sweet, how he danced with heer, and the jaleous prem was good😊

im so happy to read that he doesnt forget meher, he has new payals for her,
im dying to read how they will face each other, their reactions everything...

great work thanks for pm

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