yusra krystu-khushi manuscripts (MEET) ch 2 pg 4

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Aslamalaikum everyone.. let me introduce myself i am yusra krystu-khushi...
call me with whatever you wish... i wont mind...



i have always been a fan of desh and meet...
as in preet and meher... loved the uniqueness in them...
the were different yet still hold a place in my heart...
they played cupid.. and cupid are always cute and special..






welcome to my manuscripts...
i have written on many other couples but never tried my hand on meet...
the idea of this story just popped in my head and i knew which couple it would suit to...
the answer was pretty clear.. MEET who else...
you all will know once you'll start to read my story...


I WOULD REALLY BE THANKFULL if one of you forward about this story to all the
meetians so they would also read my work...




*who ever wish to get a pm.. kindly buddy me and hit the like button...


i hope i would be successful in providing you all pleasure with my meet story...
fingers crossed...



thankyou...


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MEET FF : SEENE MAIN DIL...









"prologue"





A seven year preet ran for his life into the fields of ludhiana
in the hotness of the sun which was on its peak...
he really didn't care for anything right now.. he
was running for the one thing which mattered to him
the most.. he ran not looking her and there while shouting


"meherrr"

he ran as fastly as he can..

"meherrr tu kahan hai"

preet was running when he saw eght year old heer standing accross the feld crying...


preet went to her... "heer dii.. "
he panted... "heer dii ap yahan ho? ap bhi ro rai ho?"
heer wiped her tears and shooked her head on preet question..
she was the calm the sorted one...
"acha dii btao na apnay meher ko dekha"
heer nodded and signaled him the way.. preet smiled and ran again
just to stop as he realized something, he came back to heer
and hugged her...
"dii ako na prem bhai dhondh rahy hain, jakay mil toh lo"

heer nodded while patting his cheek... both preet and heer ran in opposite direction...



preet was running when he saw her sitting on the big rock
under the scarist and the oldest tree of ludhiana

"iso bethnay keliye yahi jaga milti hai"
preet said to himself as he was scared to
this place... he went to meher and sat beside her,
preet put his arm around meher , giving her a side hug
meher looked at preet and that was it she burst into crying...

"preet mat jao" meher cried...


"meher... shhh ro mat" preet calmed her..


"tum ja rahy ho aur chahty ho kay mai ro bhi na?" meher answered
while crying...


preet cupped her face and wiped her tears.. she was just 4 and a half
and he was seven still they were best of friends but now just because of his
father he along with his full family have to move to canada for
business purpose...

"meher hum hamesha dost rahein gay paka..." preet said



"tum mujhy bhool jao gay preet... tum badal jao gay..
aisa hi hota hai... sab kehtay hain.." meher said


"dosti rishtay natay sab sath rehnay say hi nai hoti meri jhalli" preet answered
he has just heard his mom saying that to teji chachi...

meher smacked his arm...

"ouchhh meher... meri hatti kati punjaban" preet said..

"preet plsss na... mazak na karo" meher cribbed



"acha chalo nai karta.. ab chup hojao aur paon upar rakho..." preet ordered


meher made a wierd face...

"paon ku upar rakho?" she questioned



" phir sawal.. jo kaha wo kar nai sakti?" replied preet..


"acha baba yehlo" meher said while she stood up and put her foot on the rock...
preet smiled and took a beautiful payal from his pocket and tied it
around mehers foot...



"yeh kitni pyari hai" meher exclaimed dreamily

preet admired her beautiful face...

"yeh humarai dosti ki nishani hai meher.. vada karo
kay tum isko kabhi ni utaro gi? "



"mai toh isko kabhi ni utaro gi preet par budho ullo jaisay jaisay mai bari hongi
waisay waisay mera paon bhi toh bara hoga aur ye payal
itni c hi rahay gi " she pouted ...


"sai naam dia hai mainy tumhay jhalli.. acaha suno mai har saal isi date par aek moti bheja karo ga tum wo is payal mai lagati rehna" preet said smiling



meher nodded "par yeh aek hi paon ki ku? dosray ki ku ni?"



"jab agli dafa hum milein gay na dosray paon ki tab du ga" preet said ..


"paka?" questioned meher cutely


preet put his hand on her head " haan paka "


meher hugged preet... " main apnay is ullo juneja ko bht yad karo gi"


preet laughed " mai bhi apni is jhand maan ko bht yad karo ga"


"chalo ab chalo bauji nay mujhy mar dalna hai agar mai wakt pay na phonch chalo" preet said hysterically remebering about his bauji and held mehers hand while both of them
ran back ... with mehers payals sounds



cham cham cham cham cham...



the airplane flew away while meher waved her hand looking at the airplane
jumping up and down .. her payal were dancing tooo..



"ill miss you preet .. ill miss you" she said loudly...



19 years later...





mocco disc





everyone were cheering shouting just one name

preet
preet
preet
preet
preet




a man jumped on the bar ...



precap: about preet meher and others...





thankyou.. leave comments and do press the like button




regards yusra krystu-khushi
Edited by yusramazhar1 - 11 years ago
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index



prologue : page 1





chapter 1 : pg 3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3949756&PID=103062139&#p103062139





chapter 2 : pg 4

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3949756&TPN=4&#p104100549



chapter 3 : pg 6
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3949756&TPN=6&#p110804150

Edited by yusramazhar1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wa'Alaikum Assalaam Yusra.

Welcome to the Desh forum. Nice to see another Deshia/Meetian here. 😃 Especially one who is also a writer 😃 😃

I'll post the link to your story on the Meet AT # 3, you can post links to updates there in the future.

I'll also go and PM a few buddies and then be back to comment on what you've written so far. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aleykm selam ...😊
a new MEET story, great👏

but pleaseee write in english, i cant understand hindi😔

and pm me pleasee...

im so happy right now to find another MEET story, thanks fatima🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EEEKKK!!! Yusra this is such a cute concept...I love it!!! 😃 😃 😃
I have to say Preet and Meher were a little wise for a 4 and 7 year old though...😆

Awww...I bet Heer was crying because Prem was leaving too ... how adorable is that 😃

And when Preet put that payal on her ankle..I was also thinking that she's going to outgrow it...and I read further and Meher asked the same question...we're so in synch Meher and I...Ha! 😆

Ooo...a leap of 19 years...so now Preet is 26 and Meher 23...and we wind up in a bar 😲

This is such a wonderful start...please update soon...waiting for your PM. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting...welcome to the league n keep up thegood work!!
N Fatima thanks fr d pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Walakium Assalam Yusra ...
Welcome to Kis Desh forum😃 ... it's really good to see new people joining here😃 ...

I loved the concept of ur story😃 ... I've a weakness on these stories where childhood buddies turn lovers at the end since I have watched Kis Desh😆 ... 1st chapter was really nice😃 ... Loved it
❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hangok

aleykm selam ...😊
a new MEET story, great👏

but pleaseee write in english, i cant understand hindi😔

and pm me pleasee...

im so happy right now to find another MEET story, thanks fatima🤗





my pleaaure sweety. i would really try to give updates in english but if you dont understand some stuff which will involve urdu u can always pm me :)
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Originally posted by: ummesulaiman

EEEKKK!!! Yusra this is such a cute concept...I love it!!!😃😃😃

I have to say Preet and Meher were a little wise for a 4 and 7 year old though...😆

Awww...I bet Heer was crying because Prem was leaving too ... how adorable is that😃

And when Preet put that payal on her ankle..I was also thinking that she's going to outgrow it...and I read further and Meher asked the same question...we're so in synch Meher and I...Ha!😆

Ooo...a leap of 19 years...so now Preet is 26 and Meher 23...and we wind up in a bar😲

This is such a wonderful start...please update soon...waiting for your PM.🤗



shukriya for such a great feedback and shukriya for all the help you did with sending pm to others posting links etc etc feels touched a big hug fatima for that. and ya payal plays a very pivotal part here in my story .. i tried not to let the essence of desh die..

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