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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 37

In The morning.. heer Open up her eyes and finds Her alone in the Place. She quickly gets up and sees she is still in Piece of shirt covered with Blanket. She gets up wrapping the Kambal on her lower part and start searching Prem Here and There.

Heer- Prem…!! Prem.. !! Kaha chala gaya.. Mujhe yaha aakela chod kar.!!

Then she search for her sari but couldn't see that as well..

Heer to her self- Meri sari kaha gayi? Yehi toh change kiya tha.. Kaha..??

Heer started getting tensed and Again starts calling Prem Prem.. but she is all alone in the den.

She sits in the corner by being scared..!! and starts Crying. After almost an Hour she hears some one stepping in the place. She hides herself in the corner and dark place getting scared.

After few mins she hears HEER HEEER.. HEEER Heer….

Heer thinking to herself- Yeh toh Prem ki awaz hai… (she gets up and quickly runs towards the Voice and sees Prem in White t-shirt and Blue Jens who is in tension Looking here and There for Her shouting HEEr HEER..!!

Prem Sees Heer and stops calling and quickly moves towards her.

Goes Near and Cups her face- Heer tum kaha gayi thi.. mein kitna parisan ho gaya

Heer- mein toh yehi thi.. Tum kaha gaye thy mujhe yesi jag ape aakela Chod ke (in tears and anger).

Prem- Woh Mein ( bt stops saying anything when heer started crying ) prem hUgs Heer and makes Her sit in clean place of Den

Prem- Roona band karo please.. aacha I m sorry… (holding eards) SORRY..!!

Heer looks at him and prem wipes Her tear.

Heer- Kaha Gaye Thyy..??

Prem – Mein woh tumare liye dress lene gaya tha.. aur khud ke liye vi.. waha thoda durr market hai.. so I went in the morning.. tum so rahi thii toh disturb nai kiya.. I checked ur sari.. who bohut dirty and Geele ho chuke thyyy .. so soch tumre liye kapde laa du.. jana hai na yaha se.. abb.. iss shirt mein toh ja sakti bahar na..

Heer is looking at prem listening to him clamly.

Prem wipes her tears and gives the packet of Dress and says to go and change..!!

Heer takes it and Goes far in dark area to change. She comes after changing shirt to the Blue salwar suit. She smile looking at Prem's beautiful choice of Dress. She comes where Prem is sitting. Prem sees Heer and smiles..

Prem- Come yaha aawo.. kuch Khate hai…

Heer (excitedly|) – Khana vi laye ho..!! I was hungry. ( goes and sits near Prem)

Prem- hmmm.. (takes out the food from the Box…)

Heer- sandwich.. wow.. Kaha mila..

Prem –wohi market mein… Lo kahalo

Heer takes the sandwich.

Both of them have it.

Prem gets up after finishing.. and says chale…

Heer looking at him – KAHA?

Prem smiles at this question- Ghar nai jana hai kya? Yehi ruukana hai aaj raat ko vi?

Heer too smiles at her stupid question and gets up with Smile.

They Both are in bus stand waiting for Bus. The Bus comes.. Bus is full of crowds.

Heer- chalo…

Prem Not moving- Iiss mein jayenge..?? Jaga kaha hai..??

Heer – Mr.Prem Juneja.. This is Life. Sayad Tumne yeh peheli baar dekha hai.. lekin meine yese hii bus mein sawar hoke yaha tak aayi hu.. SAMJHE…

Prem Looks at her in confusion and not willing to go in Bus..

Prem- rukte hai na thodi deer… Taxi mein jayenge?

Heer- Taxi ke liye Paise Hai aap ke pass..?? Purse toh pura khali karke aaye Ho? Chalo isse mein ( Drags him to the Bus)

They Both enters to crowd after so much of dhakam dhaka..!!

Bus starts Running.. Prem is absolutely not liking where as heer is facing Prem catching the handle.. She is laughing seeing Prem's CUTE expression which he is giving in irritation..!!

Prem (looking at Heer ) HA HA HA..!! Bohu maza aa raha hai… tumko?

Heer (controlling her laugh) – Umm.. bohut…!!! Kyun tumko maza nai aa raha..|??

Prem- Heer Please..?? kitni garmi hai yaha.. Uff.. and This man beside me… (Slowly) his breath is YUUKSSS..!! (makes face )

Heer again laughs.

Prem seeing ppl around.. and sees One man Opposite heer is staring at Her chest without blinking. Prem looks at Heer and sees Her chest is not covered with her dupatta and its on her neck. Heer is Busy in Laughing and teasing Prem

Prem Now angrily and slowly – will u please Stop laughing and put ur dupatta Down…???

Heer's smiles fade away in sec hearing that and confusingly she asks – Kyaa???

Prem- For god shake aapna dupata niche karo.. woh Neck cover karne ke liye nai hai…??? Yaha pe sab ke aakhe Tumri chest pe hai..?? put it down (making strict eyes)

Heer looks around and sees that man staring at her so she drags her dupatta down and covers her chest and looks at Prem getting scared.

Prem is fuming in anger and staring tht man angrily.

Finally their stop comes and Premeer gets down. Prem takes the breath of Releif.

Prem- AAJJ ke baad tum Bus mein suffer nau karo gi….!! Samjhi..

Heer Nods Her head and says- Thik hai.. lekin tum aapna mood kharab kyun kar rahe hai.. (catching his Arms) Yesa Hota hai.. bohut common hai?

Prem (angrily, setting his arm free from her)- Hota hai? What do u mean By Hota???? How can u say its common? How can u take this thing so lightly?

Heer- prem relax.. Mujhe ese aadmi ko sambhala ache se aata… Dekhuu kaise..??? (smiling)

Prem looks at Her angrily.

Heer – TAAannanaaa…!!(takes our Pepper spray from her Bag. ) Issko uunpe spry karne ke baad Kya haal hota hai.. pata hai/… ( laughs)

Prem (now in pained expression)- tumne yeh.. pepper spray Party bag mein rakha? I mean kal raat ko iisko leke aayi thii sath mein…

Heer- (normally not looking towards him and putting the spray back on bag)- haa.. woh ..(prem cuts in bet)

Prem- Taki agar meien kuch batameezzi na kar saku……tumare sath kal raat party mein ya phir uuske baad ..!!!( tears rolls down )

Heer looks at Prem in shock and little bit guilt but tries to explain- Nai.. prem .. woh .!1 meine

Prem Looks next side with all pain in face and wipes His tears.. Heer sees this and feels too bad.

Heer- prem Please Tum..

Prem – TAXIii!!!!!!!!!!!

Heer stop saying…

Prem- Taxi..!!!

Taxi comes , Heer sits inside but prem goes infront beside driver to sit leaving Heer alone Behind.

Taxi starts Moving. Heer is seeing Prem's hurt face in the mirror in front.He had closed his eyes in pain.. and Heer looks down feeling Too guilty and she is in tears now.

Taxi stops in a place.. and heer gets Out. Prem Gives His watch to driver as He don't have money.

Heer Looks around and finds she is infront of Hospital

Heer (confused)- Hum Yaha…?? (ask prem)

Prem- chalo andar

Heer – lekin …

Prem Moves without listening and heer follows Him.

Prem on reception

Prem- heer Juneja Ka appointment hai.. with Dr. POROMA.

Reception- Ya.. u wait till ur number comes..

Prem- Hmmm.. Goes and sit and Heer sits Besides Him.

Prem gets up and Goes to water place and brings a glass of water to heer and Gives .

Heer Drinks the water.. Prem again goes and after few mins comes back with cup of tea.

Both are having tea without saying anything. Heer is looking Prem continuosly but Prem isn't

Reception calls- HEER JUNEJa

Prem Gets Up.. Ya..

Reception- u may go in.

Prem Heer both goes inside Dr.Poroma Cabin.

Dr.Poroma – Welcome Mr. mrs Juneja..

Prem- hello doctor..!!

Dr.Poroma- pleas be seated..

Both of them sits and heer makes Face seeing Dr.Poroma, thinking.. – aaj jo hamare bech yeh duriya hai.. srif Is ski waje se…

Heer don't even exchanged smile to Dr.Poroma when she Greeted Heer.

Prem and Dr.Poroma are talking and laughing bt Heer is sitting there with irritation.

Dr.Poroma Looks towards heer who isn't even smiling

Dr.Poroma- are u ok.. MRs Juneja..

Heer- Hmm.. ya.. m fine…

Dr.Poroma- shall we go in… I need to see How fine u are..??

Heer Nods Her head and Goes Inside next room where as Prem keeps waiting outside.

After 15 mins Both Heer and Dr.Poroma Comes Out.

They sit on their respective place..

Prem- is she fine

Dr.Poroma- hmm..!! she is…!! But must be still careful on… (twist the eyes to prem) Hope u understand Mr.Juneja what I m talking about?

Heer Looks at Dr,. Poroma Angrily.. !!

Prem- Umm.. yaa.. I will take care.. Thank u doctor.

Dr.Poroma- my pleasure.

Premeer Moves out of the cabin , when a man comes and says,

Man- sir.. !!

Pren- u are here mr.khanna…

Man- yes, Here is the amount of money u asked..

Prem- Thanks..

Prem heer moves out of the Hospital .

Prem – taxiii

Taxi comes..

Prem- yeh paise loh.. n ghar jawo

Heer- aur tum

Prem- mien office jata hu.. u go home

Heer keeps silent n goes inside the taxi .

The taxi moves.. heer is sad.. , she takes out her cell from bag n makes a call…

Lady picks up..- hello

Heer- me heer.. thank u.. thank u.. Dr. Poroma. Thanks for the Help

Dr.Poroma- My pleasure.. No need to thank Heer.

Heer smiles and cuts the call.

The camera is Fcused on Dr.POROMA cutting the call and smiling,,!!

Why Heer said Thank u to Her? Is it Heer who is making DR.POROMA to say prem Stay away from Heer..?? To find out read the next and probably 2nd last chapter if EKTA KAPOOR AATMa didnt get into me..to drag story ..!! hehehehhee

Muuhaa. Love U all

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



do u need to hold dress while wearing.. nd she fought with hand not with Leg with him. se was only throwing balnket with HAND... LEg toh sidhe thyy na.. 😆

I was enjoying my visualization...you poured water on my imaginatn 😡 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago


i updated just now sweta...

when r u updating ur SS>../ and FF 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
sanju this cant be last but 1😡 😡 😡 😡 😡...heer wantedly did all these😭 😭...enough is enough...ekta really entered u...im very happy for that saree...finally the saree is destroyed🥳...beware of sanju...ekta stolen sanju's passwod😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Neha12345xxx

sanju this cant be last but 1😡 😡 😡 😡 😡...heer wantedly did all these😭 😭...enough is enough...ekta really entered u...im very happy for that saree...finally the saree is destroyed🥳...beware of sanju...ekta stolen sanju's passwod😆 😆



tum ko usss sari se kya problem thiii???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



tum ko usss sari se kya problem thiii???

saree se problem😡 😡...u forgot ur creation 😕😆😆...that was gifted by that stupid...hamesha mere bhai pagal ban jata...aabhi bhi wahi hua...prem loves heer na...does she knows that🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
😲 Heer is doing every thing on purpose, needs someone like jia to make heer deep fry in jeaously as she is getting annoying typical ekta style lead.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phr se kahani mae twist..now wat is between heer nd dr poroma???
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wts going on here??? i was waiting for some premeer romance
n here u made prem all angry 😔
something is going on heer's mind.bt wt???
reveal it soon sanju..cant wait

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