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Posted: 12 years ago
yess it was with my name but now i ve change...
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Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



Aree Aree.. No no Priya..?? why misunderstanding and angry.

Neha had Pmed me saying she wont be able to read update for tow-three days as now she have evening classes.. , and she have to bunk to read the update,,, abb yeh thodi hone deti..

thats why i said.. i updated for her...

not meant that..

lagta hai tumko EX- JIJU ki i ki hawa lag gayi hai.. haas baat pe ulta soch ti ho 😆


aree..i was teasing both f u..aur tum serious hogaya? 😆




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Posted: 12 years ago
happy Beleted B'day Seema.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks sanju for wishes



Plss update next
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Chapter 35

Heer is Shocked seeing the Truck run so fast with Bright light and Big horn.. She looks Behind and shouts

Heer- Preeemmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She Runs towards where prem was…

Premmm Premn… (shouting) she reaches in the middle of the road and sees Pren's watch on the road… She picks it up and starts getting scared…!!

Shouts Premmm… (starts Crying and shouting Looking here and there) but Prem is not there… She again runs little bit more far and sees The Blood on the road.. Her leg starts trembling…!! Breath are almost out now.. She Sits in front of Blood part and starts crying , looks lil bit far and sees the crowd .. she runs to it and stops. She don't have courage to look wht they are looking to as ppl there saying…

Hey bhagwan.. kitna buri tara se mara.. please take to hospital.. koi host\pital le jawo… Haa. Haaa utho issko…

She is Just listening them with wide eyes… The crowd picked up and moved to the car there..?/ Heer is still standing in the one side not having courage.. she sees the blood are dropping on the road as they picked the Body..!!

She slowly follows the crowd . They are much ahead than Heer as they are Running and Heer Is walking… She starts panicking and runs SHOUTING PREMmm.111 she runs so fast that Reaches the crowd.. and She tries to enter the crouwd as they are putting the body in the car..

Heer- Premmm. Premm.. chodo./. please… Prem (not in sense)

Man- kya kar rahi hai… go from here,,. We need to take hospital (ppl are stoping her to see the body)

Heer- chodo pleas.e Premmm… (ppl are catching her as they know she isn't in sense)

Ppl- tumara kaun hai woh.. apna hai.. sambhalo aapne aap ko.. Car Moves in speed..and Heer shouts

Heer- CHodo mujhe.. PREM.. Jane do… CHODO… Hospital jane Do.. prem ke paas… CHodo.. (crying )

Man- Stop it.,…!! (catching her tight not letting move.. as Heer is trying too hard to set her Free.. looking towards Car which already go) SAMBHALO …!!!

Heer- CHODO MUJHE (still not looking who is catching her)

Man Drags her tight to the corner of road.. and Heer is Bitting his hand which is tight on her wrist .

Heer- CHodo..!!! jane do (crying)

Man makes Her corner to the Tree and Heer gets scared.

Heer- Kaun Ho..? kya kar rahe ho? Chodo..?/( she Tries to set her free by getting to much of scared… as its raining and too dark she cant see the face) CHODO…!! (starts Bitting him)

Man- MEIN Huuu (catching Her hand) PREM HUU MEIN.. HEER.. HOOS MEIN AAWO.. HEER… ( as she isn't listening) PREM Huuu (shouts)

Heer stops Hearing the voice…and Looks Up and then Thunder LIGHT makes her see her PREM FACE..

Heer- Prem Tum…,(crying and cuping his Face) Tum Thik ho.. Tum..( touching his shoulder and hand) Tum Thik ho.. Tum.. (hugs tight and starts Crying)

Prem- Hugs her back.. hm… Thik hu… Kuch nai hua hai…!!

Heer ( breaks the hug ans still crying ) – lekin who blood.. who accident

Prem (cuping her face) – Kisi aur ka tha..

Heer- lein uusko hamare car mein..??

Prem- ambulance nai aayi thi.. so.. I was trying to say u.. I m ok.. but tum suno toh na.. that truck hit him.. I was in the crowd helping him to take him to car.. lekin tumne dekha hii nai baass Prem prem chila rahi thii…???

Heer- (crying) mujhe laga.. timari( hugs him again)

Prem hugs her back with smile. !!!

The rain is Too heavy and her sneezes..!!

Prem- tumko sardi lag gayi..?? chalo ghar chale..

Heer- car nai hai.. Kaise Chale?

pRem- Oh ya… ( confused and tensed.. and sees a tiny light far away..

Chalo… ( catches heer's hand and they both Runs… after running for a while They reach to the place.. It's a small Den type… Prem is about to enter when Heer catches His hand tight?| lets not Go? Pata nai kya hai… Chodo

Prem- Kyun daar rahi ho? Mein hu na…? chalo..pulls her inside. They enter the place.. and sees . Its very Dark inside.. Thye both aren't seing each other..Heer is Holding Prem's hand Tight…and moving forward by getting scared.

Prem – ( prem switches on the Mobile torch and looks around, it's a khandar place where only dry grass and tyres are seen ) Tum yehi ruuko mein aat a hu..

Heer- nai.. kaha ja rahe ho? Mein vi chalti hu?

Prem- kahi nai.. Tum bas yehi khadi raho.. mein aata hu.. ( tries to set his hand free from heer's tight hold)

Heer- nai kaha na..?? mujhe daar lag raha hai.. Mein vi jawungi

Prem- thik hai chalo uudar.. aram se…??

They slowly Moves forward and reach in the corner.. Prem holds Heer hand and makes Her sit. He stands are Roams The Light all around… n looks at Heer and says

Prem- yehi betho mein aata hu

Heer quickly Gets Up. And says – i nai… . Nai nai… mein vi… ( cuts in bet)

Prem- Waha jaunga.. (shows the light towards place)

Heer keeps looking at him with scary eyes..

Prem- Tum betho chalo (makes Her sit lovelingly ) aacha tum yeh torch pakdo and light to waha dekhwo.. yehi se… dekhna uuse Jyada dur nai jaunga…!!

Heer nods and takes the torch and shows the light where prem had said.. sitting there only

Heer is Seeing Prem Going far and Bring some wood and stuffs to Born the Fire..!! he is collecting the things and heer is showing light where ever he is saying..

But suddenly… The cell torch Becomes OFF and Heer gets up being scared and shouting Prem.. Prem.. and Starts Moving towards Prem

Prem- Heer tum wohi raho.. don't move…

Heer- Prem … Prem.. kaha ho…

Prem- Heer.. wohi raho maat hilo please.. Waha bech mein Hole hai , tumara pair phas jayega.. aur tum (stops)

Heer- AAAhhh…1! Prem ( falls Down)

Prem _ heer…!!! (Moves slowly sloly towards her..and his feet touches Her pallu of sari…) Heer.. sits Down and makes Heer sit who was lying ..!!

Heer- aaah…!!! Ahhh..!!

Prem- (cuping her face) Kaha than a meine maat hilo.. nai . lekin tum sunti kaha ho? Chot aayi kya..???

Heer – aahh…!!!

Prem- tum vi na… abb ruko yehi.. yaha se kahi hilna maat… 2 min.. (prem is anout to get up when heer catches his hand)

Heer- Mein vi

Prem (shouts)- SHUT UP..!! meine kaha na yehi betho.. samjh mein nai aata kya???

Heer leaves his hand hearing this and looks down.. Prem gets up and does smth far away.. heer is only hearing the sound of some stuffs..!!

Then suddenly she sees Fire infront of her and prem who is litting it up…

On the light of fire She sees Her Prem's wet hair and the drops of water which is falling on the floor from his nose… and some black marks on his face..!!

She takes the breath of relief seeing him.. and is about to get up.. but sits down as her leg don't support

Heer- AAhhh..!!

Prem- (comes towards Her) aarma se..!! He helps her get up and takes to the place wher he have mede set up to sit .

Heer is sneezing..

Prem- tumko toh sardi lag gayi… abb kya kare…??? Looks here and there and sees a dress in the corner… He goes and brings it… and Gives to Heer..

Prem- yeh toh tum change karlo..!! geli kapde peheno gi toh aur bimar pad jawo gi

Heer (looking at Dress)- yeh kya hai?

Prem- pata nai.. Tum jawo n pehen ke awo.. jawo.. uutho…

Prem makes Heer get up and takes her to the dark place and he come to fire…!!

After a While..

Prem- heer.. ktni deer laga rahi ho… yaha aawo.. yaha garam hai… !! jaldi karo.. ( looking towards the fire and adding stuff in it.. )

Heer slowly comes with little bit awkwardness and sees Prem Busy in littling up the fire more Brightly but he is SHIRTLESS>!!!

Prem – heer jaldi aawo.. ( looks towards the side where heer is standing and stops doing wht he was)

Prem Sees.. Heer Bare Leg.. He Looks up from Her feet .. her het is not covered.. Her white thigh above the Knee is Visible and sees The white Dress covering her upper part of thigh but heer is pulling it down, her waist , and her upper body and her face . Her eyes are downward.. face is red coz of Shyness.. and hair is open from where rain drops are droping,.

Heer's beauty in One and only shirt she was wearing was taking his breath,.

The camara is on Prem (staring at Heer), heer Looking down and The FIRE which is between them.

Episod Ends…!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part thankx for the Awosome update
loved it
please update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew!!!! Thank god..prem ka accident nhi hua...heer ki trha mae bhi bohot dar gai thi...
Nd now i guess romantic track is on the way 😳
Pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i almost gt a panic attack..bt thank God it wasnt prem who gt hit
by the truck..
awesome update..specially the last part 😛
eagerly waiting for premeer romance
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank god prem ko kuch nahi hua ...
awesome and cute update ...
eagerly waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh me too thought it will be prem
Acha hua ki wo prem nahi hai
nice update dear
Waiting for the next part

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