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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeermania

don't you dare to bring any vamp now 😡 HEER KI SHADI?? do something about this prem 😔

now coming to you. claps for you 👏 thanks for updating. the way you are writing is really different idea 😃 best of luck



Thank u THnak U.. 😳 😛

And VAMPS... hmmm... Soch tii hu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Thank You all For reading and Appreciating..!!!
Thanks...

Here comes My Quick Update on Chapter 3

Chapter- 3

MEher takes Heer to the room.. Heer is in No sense,,!!!

Meher - Didi.. Didi.!! Hooss mein AAYee.. Didi...!!! ( sparks water on her face)

Heer- (Gets Sense & look at meher ) and Hugs and Cries

Meher - ( crying ) how did u tolerated him? how can u be so tolerance dii.. kaha se aati hai aap me itni himat...??

Heer - ( wiping her tears ) mein thik hu meher... I am Fine... I had accepted this fact long back... I am fine... avi ke liye.. will u do one favour to me...

Meher - Ji boliye diii...

Heer- Please mujhe thodi deer ke liye aakela chod doo.. please... I assure u.. i will be fine.. please... i will come down for lunch..

Meher - Thik hai...

Meher Leaves...Heer closes the door and CRies HArd..

Then Next part.. Bauji calls every one in his room, including gaurav and Jia.. meher goes and calls heer.. and heer goes...

In bauji room

Abb sab ko pata hai yeh prem nai hai.. lekin koi vi gaurav se bura bartab nai kare ga.. he is here to save gayatri.. so all will behave nicely with him . at least try... Gaurav.. tumko koi parisani nai hogi...

Prem Nods his head.. bt from corner of eyes he is looking at heer.. who is standing there with her nazar down...

Bauji- Heer... iidar aa...

Heer goes

Bauji- mujhe maaf karde beta... guuse me.. pata nai meine...

Heer- Nai bauji.. pls.. mein samjh tii hu... i am soory...

Bauji- jiti rehe... ( spares his hand on heers head and notices sindoor )

Bauji - Dekh heer... tu uupar ja... aur.. yeh sindoor and magal sutra uutar dee...

Heer becomes shock and so do prem...

Heer- bauji...??

Bauji- abb yeh natak karne ki jarurat nai hai.. maat dee apne aap ko takleef.. yeh sindoor n magal sutra ka haaq JIA KA HAI...

Heer becomes too shockkk

Bauji - yeh gaurav hai and yeh sadhi sudha hai.. so please.. bandh kar yeh natak...bandh karde yeh Gaurav ka KIsssaa

Prem closes his eyes in Pain...

Heer- Bauji...!! Thik kaha aapne.. Chinta maat kijye.. mein bandh kar dungi yeh GAURAV ka kissa..!! ( Heer looks at Prem.. and so do Prem ( ( back ground music yaad karo. readers).. 😳

Everyone goes from there.. Prem and Heer shares the eye staring and heer moves On...

at Lunch Table. every one is silent.. Prem and jia are sitting aside.. heer comes down with simple yellow salwar ( of kis desh ) with ties hair MINUS MANAGAL SUTRA AND SINDUr...

bauji and all becomes sad.. so do Prem...

Heer sits opposite Prem... they look at each other... while eating... suddenly.. Jia starts coughing...

Prem looks at her and says.. KYA HUA JIA|? Are u ok.. and gives her water putting his hand on Jia's head...

heer Looks at them with tears...

Jia- ya.. mein thik huu.. sorry...

Bauji- aaram se beta...

Heer looks at bauji... and Prem with WIde eyes.. But prem steals looks at heer eyes...
so din bhar yese hii biit jata hai...

at night.. in dinning Table..

Bauji says - heer... tu gaurav aur Jia ka kamra Guest room me laga de... they will stay there peacefully...

Heer Stunned.. and So do prem...

Kul di- Haa... aakhir pai patni itne dino baad mil rahe hai.. ( in low voice..) bt every one hears..

heer has tears in eyes bt manage to hide and Say OK...

Heer is managing bed of them in Guest room.. when Prem Comes... They look at each other... after few sec.. Jia too comes... jia feels odd...

Prem - Thank you... Heer

Heer slowly moves toward door crossing Prem sides... Goes out the room and Looks behind.. pRem comes near the door.. they are staring eachother eyes without blinking... and slowly PREM CLOSES THE DOOR IN THE FACE OF HEER WITHOUT MIISING EYE CONTACT WITH HER...

Prem closes the door, drops tears from his eys.. and says " I AM SORRY" I am SORRY..!!!

heer comes in sense with close door sound... Tears Drops down... hand started trembling.. and slowly moves towards her room... falls down on bed.. put pillow on Mouth and then... Loud CRY...!!!!!!

EPISOD ENDS IN SAD NOTE...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Sanju di :-D i loved it. Gr8 . . M suprised actually coz you've started writing. . Do continue. . !! U r gonna rock it. . And i loved the dialogues. . Muuhax
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Thanks for the update ...🤗
Great update ...loved it ...
Waiting for the next update ...
Please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
poor prem and heer 😭

what is next? eagerly waiting to know what is going to happen 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update dear
such a sad update
pls do cont soon
thanx for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Here Comes THe Next Episode..!!

Chapter- 4

In the Morning..!!

Heer Open up the eyes in Head pain because of stressful night. She gets ready and moves down.

She goes in the kitchen and sees Jia making tea but searching Sugar. ( no one have wake up yet )

Heer- ( in little bit anger ) kuch dund rahi ho?

Jia- Huh? oh hi...!! haa woh.. chini nai mil rahi...!!! woh... Gaurav ke liye chaye banana tha,...

Heer- ( takes Breath in anger ) and moves forward and hand over sugar to her. She goes near the basin, folds her hand and keep looking at Jia making tea and says " only one spoon of sugar.. " Ur so called Jhoot muut ka pati will only have one spoon of sugar, u have put little two spoon.. he won't have that "

Jia in confusion and akwardness.. not knowing wht to say ? Heer moves forward.. says... may I..??

Jia moves back ward.. Heers takes that tea pot from GAS and takes it to basin to thrown it.. bt before she could throw.. she feels her hand catched by Prem..!! Heer looks at him...

Prem - Yeh Kya kar rahi ho???? why r u throwing that tea?

Heer - She pu the sugar two spoon.. and U only have one spoon.. so by throwing it i will make new one...

Prem- No need...!!! I will have this one only...!! two spoon is OK...!!! I have started taking two spoon already from last few months... so let it be..

Heer Gets Stunned with Prem words... and Jia smiles..!!! Prem moves from there by taking tea and giving it to Jia as well...!!!

Heer keeps standing there with Tears..!!

Bauji is coming to Breakfast hall.. and when Prem and jia sees him coming near .. They starts their convo...

Jia- Mujhe Bohut bura lagta hai heer ke liye...She is just 22 and look wht kind of trouble she is facing..!! she lost her family, her love... and everything... Its very difficult to live alone in life gaurav... how will she manage..?? i have seen my elder sister suffering from pain when mu jiju died. she have no reason to be happy

Prem - But ur sis have bacha..for whom she will live life... bt HEER. for whom she will be happy..?? for WHom she will Live? for whom she will do Shringar of gals??? Wen i used to be with her in room.. i used to sleep in couch and she on bed... bt she didnt used to sleep at all.. every night.. she just keep staring at sky?? don't know why? and kept crying? she never had sleep at night... it will affect her health also...I am not prem.. but insan toh huu... i can feel her pain..But hum kya kar sakte hai???

Jia - COme on Gaurav.. she can re marry.. she is young, beautiful and very sanskari. any good man will marry her. it will be luck of any boy to get her... isnt it?

Prem ( feels pain in heart ) bt says... haaa.. kismat wala hoga jo heer ka sath paaye ga.. !! ( takes deep breathe) and says.. bt hamare kehene se kya hoga...?? leave this matter JIA... She have wonderful family.. i m sure they will think of her by getting over the pain of prem Death... !!

Bauji Hears Whole con Vo and Gives big Thought.. and goes in to room and again started having flashback of Guarav and Jia Talks...!!!

In the evening time.. every one is busy on work.. Heer is cutting vegetable sitting in dinning... and then Prem and Jia comes down...and says..

Woh.. hum aaj.. bahar ja rahe hai.. khana khane ko.. so.. please don't prepare for us.. to Kul di...
Kul di.. looks at them and Nods the Head.. Heer looks at Prem again with wide eyes nd keep looking them going in tears the time they were out of sight...!!! Tears Drops DOWN...!!!

In night..!! Prem and Jia comes BAck...!!! As they were tending to the Guest Room... Prem Hears

Servant saying to next Servant " Heer MAdam ne kahan nai kaha ya hai aab tak... kya karu? freeze mein rakh duu ya phir uunko khane ke liye kahu?"

next servant - I said many times but she refused and even she lied the family by saying she had food but the fact is she havnt had any thing from the morning.. she had gone to kitchen to have tea but dont know what happend.. she didnt even took tea...!! pata nai kya hoga madam ka... !!! i feel very sorry for Her...

Prem Becomes Stunned to hear it and remembers the comvo he had with her in Kitchen in the morning regarding TEa...When Servant LEaves... he goes to kitchen, warms the food and takes to the heer room but he couldnt find her there.. SO, by assuming she must be on terrace he goes there with Food..

In terrace..!!

Heer on swing by looking at sky...!!! Prem comes NEar and sits down with Food... Heer sees Prem bt don't talk..

PRem - Khana kyun nai khaya???

Heer- Tum ne kha liya na..?? aapni patni ke sath... Kaisa tha DATE?? Kaha gaye theee...?? Hope U had Fun !!

Prem- Takes deep breath and says.. KHANA KHAWO..!! yeh Loh..!!

Heer- Ur wife must be waiting for u in the room.. jawo... why are wasting time here.. thak gaye hoge... jake soo jawoo.. and HAAA darwaja BAND KARKE SOONA...!!

Prem- (in anger) but controls and says.. Khana Khaow.. phir se thanda Ho jaye Ga)

Heer- ( gets up from the Swings and shouts|) mujhe Bhook nai hai... and mein nai khaungi...!! samjhe Mr. Gaurav...!!! u may leave now( and turns around)

Prem - ( Gets up from the Swing and shouts back and makes her turn around him ) Jyada NATAK maat KAro Heer... CHup Chap Khana Khalo.. JAldi... !!

Heer- Kyun Jaldi???? Jaldi ho rahi hai.. Jia ke baho me jane ke liye...!!!

Prem SHouts HEEERRR and picks up his hand to Slap her but STOPS>...!!!

Heer Looks at him in TEars rolling down non stop and starts crying and says... KYUN KAR RAHE HO MERE SATH YESA>.!! PLase maat karo...!!!

Prem- (goes near her and Hugs.) Heer, mujhe samjo please.. i cant stay with u always.. please co-operate.. please.. meri muskil maat badawo.. jab tak jinda huu tab tak at least mera sath doo

heer- ( gets Away from hug and says) Mein Muskil bada rahi hu tumari... ??? I am trouble now for u...??

Prem- Heer...!!! Dekho please.. mere saar me bohut dard ho raha hai... please khana kha lo... I m dying with head ache.. i want to sleep and jab tak tum khana nai kahwo gi i wont go...

heer- Kya dard ho raha hai... Kaise..?? ( roams her hand around his head )

Prem- ( taks away her hand and says ) khana...!!1

heer takes food and eats all... till then prem sits there with closed eyes since he was having head ache..he gets mini sleep there only but comes in sense when he feels Heer Massaging his head with coconut oil..!! He Looks at her...

heer- coconut will make u feel better... close ur eyes.. thats why i say.. iitna jyda stress maat loh.. dard ho gaya na sar pe... !! PAr mein huu hii kaun jo meri baat mano ge???

Prem- gets up from swing and says , I m fine... u had food naa... now go to sleep... i m also going...

Heer again on tears.. they both comes in stares.. prem closes the door of terrace and they both moves down...
Heer rooms comes.. Prem Says Good night and moves bt heer hand holds His HAnd... He Looks BEhind with questioning eyes...

Heer comes Closer.. closer and closer.. Prem Heart Beat starts beating FAst.. and Heer hugs him tight.. roams her hand on his back lovinly...

Prem Becomes breathless...!! and hugs her back and kisses her shoulder Automatically...
They Hug for FEw min and then Heer says Good Night and moves inside the room with Smile..

Prem Keeps Looking at Heer... with Love and slowly moves away from there.. falls down in the couch of Guest room.and drifts in the DREAM OF HEER..!!

EpisoD ENDS...!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
nice update yaar
poor heer and prem
really feeling very sad for them
pls cont cont
thanx for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Nice story . Lovd the 4 updates. Waiting for next :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: kiran_28

nice update yaar
poor heer and prem
really feeling very sad for them
pls cont cont
thanx for update



thank u 😃

bt wen will we get update..😭

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