new SS -Hamara pyar ka Desh updated Chp 49/ pg 95 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Thank you. You write so well. I like this one. This ch. is too overwhelming with emotions.
I'd be happy when you write more fun scenes too.
Keep up the writing.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Thank you all for the Appreciation.

Thanks a lot. Hope u will like chapter 2nd as well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Prem carried Heer to the bed. Heer is still crying by Hugging Prem. Prem also hugs back. Heer didnt stopped crying at all but helpless prem didnt even said single word. Just kept hugging her. After few hours, Heer fell asleep in Prem's Arm with tears rolling down her cheek. Prem Gently looked at her and adjusted her head in the pillow taking off her head from his hand. he Wiped off her tears with his thumb, put on blanket on her and switched off the light. He went to the window and looked over the Moon with tears in his eyes.

He started Thinking

What should I do? I can't see Heer like this, Agar mein chala vi gaya toh Heer ... kavi aage nai bade gi.. Sahi kaha heer ne.. sayad mujhe aana hii nai chaeye tha... !!! lekin.. Abb mein kya karu? I can't stay like this by being Prem here.. i have to do something for Heer and the family so that they could easily let me go. Koi mujhe na rooke. !!!

Prem Went to Bed again.. , Kissed Heer's Forhead and then SAID " I am sorry Heer!! ho sake toh mujhe Maaf kar de na lekin Abb mere pass isske alawa koi rasta nai hai. Its better u cry and be sad for few months rather than whole life. I am sorry !!!"

Prem slept Next to heer Looking at her whole night.

In the Morning...

Heer opened Her Eyes.. she was feeling Headache.. her eyes were swollen, hair were rough, body was feeling tired. She looked around but couldn't find Prem. She Hurriedly went to bathroom, took bath, changed and ran Down. She saw every one standing still in the Hall... Bauji was there with teary eyes, kul dii was crying, harman and maya was in shock state, Meher were Handling Bauji. Heer couldnt figure out what happend.. her heart raced when she noticed prem standing in the corner... As she came down.. she saw a Girl standing near Prem...

As she came down.. every one looked at Heer with Strange Nazar... SHe said " Kya hua? Maa.. thik hai na...?? kul di.. kya hua,,? " she looked at prem but didnt talked?

Bauji stepped Forward to Heer.. as heer asked. kya hua bauji... ?? Bauji came near and Suddenly... Heer Felt SLAPPP on her Cheek. Every one Out there Got Stunned...!!!! Heer was SHocked??? SHe looked at bauji with Questioning Eyes...??

Bauji - Kya sabit Karna chahati thii Tuu...?? Yeah sab karke... tujhe lagta hai. bohut aacha kam kiya hai tune...??? Bolll?? kya mila tujh ko.. ek dukhi maa ke dil se khel ke... ?? kya mila tujhe.. ek buda baap ko uuska sahara lauta ne ka natak karke? tujhe kya lagta hai Heer.. iss duniya mein Ek akeli tu hai jo Bohut BAhadur hai... Hum sab toh Kal paeda hue hai.. jo ki kuch nai samjte and kuch sehe nai sakta???

Heer - Bauji.. Yeh app...!!! mein... ( heer looked at Prem with Fear.. ) but prem didnt even saw at Heer.

Bauji --- Yeh Ladka jo yaha Khada hai.. Kaun hai yeh...???

Heer - Jii??? ( tears started rolling down )

Bauji - why are u feeling nervous... ?? Bol na.. Bauji. yeh PREM HAI? Kya ho gaya hai app ko? Bol... Bolti kyun nai hii...

Heer- Jii.. Prem...///

Bauji - BAASSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Khabar daar jo PREM ka naam iss so called MAHAN ACTOR GAURAV ko diya toh...!!!

As soon as Bauji said that.. Heer felt that the Ground down her feet swept off...!!! she.. couldnt say a word.. she just kept staring at bauji with wide eyes with continuos flow of tears..!!!

Bauji- Hume toh pata hii nai chalta agar YEh ladki.. GAURAV KI PATNi nai aati yeh kehene ko ki Gaurav ki maa bohut Bimar hai...

Heer JUst heard.. the word " GAURAV KI PATNI " she looked at Prem and the GAl.. she only kept looking at them with broken heart which prem was feeling inside and which was killinh him badly.. but he didnt looked at Heer...

Bauji - Phir vi bohut kosis ki iss ne ki yeh baat hume pata na chale... Akhir bohut sare paise jo diya hai issko Tum ne Heer.. kaise Paisa bar baad hone deta.. woh toh meine iiki baate sunnli... aur... ( BAUJI FELL down on SOFA ) Preet and Meher Run to bauji)

Preet - Bauji..,!! Bhabi ne jo kiya MAa ko bachane ke liye kiya.. woh aavi vi Bimar hai... issko Prem samjh tii hai.. agar hum iss woqt kuch karte hai.. toh hum maa ko vi kho denge.. woh bed rest me bauji... ( preet cried )

Heer was standing there looking at prem with no HALCHAT AND NO TEARS..!!!

Bauji- ( went to Prem and joined Hand ) dekho gaurav.. ajj tak tumne hamare liye.. jo kiya uuske liye bohut sukriya.. abb mein gayatri ko khona nai chahata .. toh kuch din aur.. jab tak mein gayatri ko uuske baiye ke ghar canada na vej du.. tum yahi rehena.. and tumari maa ka iilaz hum kar denge.. baas kuch din aur eeheshan kar do...!!!

Prem, - ( contolling Hard) jii.. bilkul.. mera contract one month aur hai.. so I will.. paar meri biwi vi kuch din yehi mere sath rahe gi...

HEER... LOOKED AT PREM WITH ALL THE ANGER IN HER FACE AND EYES... but couldnt utter a word...

bauji- Thik hai..! and silently went to his room.. preet took him
every one went to the room.. meher came near HEer and said " didi chalo..."
Meher Holded heers hand and draged her.. Heer went like JINDA LAASS...

Prem Looked heer to the time she was out of sight...

Gal - PRem... !!! tum

Prem- Thanks jia... thanks.. aaj tumari waje se.. mera ek booj kaam hua.. thank u for helping.. abb baas kuch din hume pati patni ka natak karna hoga.. please trust me.. i wont cross my limits.. abb baas mera ek KAAM REHEGAYA HAI... woh karne ke baad.. I will move away...

Jia - Don't worry I am with U.. u saved my mother from bomb blast.. i am ready to do anything!! but Kya Kaam??

PREM - HEER ki SADHI...!!


Episod.. ENDS 😃 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
OMG how could prem do this to Heer
poor Heer feeling really sad for her
nice update...pls cont soon
want to read more of it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
lovely update sanju..
poor heer..she is really shattered..and prem is planning for heer's shadi...??
i hope heer will make some sense to prem's head and soon the truth abt his illness will come out..
cant wait for next upadate..
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyahmt

lovely update sanju..

poor heer..she is really shattered..and prem is planning for heer's shadi...??
i hope heer will make some sense to prem's head and soon the truth abt his illness will come out..
cant wait for next upadate..
update soon..



Thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: priyahmt

lovely update sanju..

poor heer..she is really shattered..and prem is planning for heer's shadi...??
i hope heer will make some sense to prem's head and soon the truth abt his illness will come out..
cant wait for next upadate..
update soon..



Sure i wont delay for the update.. because 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Woww awosome update waiting for the next part... please update soon... Add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
don't you dare to bring any vamp now 😡 HEER KI SHADI?? do something about this prem 😔
now coming to you. claps for you 👏 thanks for updating. the way you are writing is really different idea 😃 best of luck

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Superb update ...👏 waiting for the next update ...please update soon ...and please add me in ur pm list ...

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