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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju..i never knew that u can write ahem ahem scenes too well..i read it yesterday and stil i'm blushng..
I guess Prem is worried abt heer's health or somethng..just a guess only..anyways i cant wait to read more premeer scene and phream..




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Posted: 12 years ago



Chapter 22

Prem comes Out the Bathroom with little bit awkwardness and sees Heer still sitting in Bed without changing in confused Expression.

Prem- Woohhh...!!!!!!!! Ummm..!! ( Heer looks at Him) Tumne aavi tak change nai Kiya? Change Karlo.

Heer Gets Up from the Bed , Prem takes out Heer's Nighty from the cupboard and Hand over to her. Heer takes It silently and Goes to change. When she comes sees Prem sleeping .she Goes Near and Lies Down. looks top Prem but don't sees any sign of him opening the eyes, so she turns around and sleep in Big confusion Playing with the Flower Thread Hung before Her. Prem Looks at Heer's Disappoint and takes Deep Breath and Sleeps .

In The Morning..!!!

Heer come swith Cup of tea and then

Heer- Prem,.!! Premmm|!! uuthooo

Prem- (opening the eyes )- Huh???? tum itni jaldi uuth gayii?? ( gets up and sits on the BEd, lazily)

Heer- Haa..!! Sadhi ka pehela DIn hai. BAdi bahu Hu.. deer se thodi uuthungi..!! ??

Prem Smiles Hearing It.

heer- tea for U..!! Hand Over it to Him...!!!

Prem Takes It where as heer is Just staring at him. Prem finishes The tea and notices heer seeing Him with all the Love in eyes.

Prem- Kya Hua? Kya dekh rahi Ho?

heer Goes near and Places Her head on His Chest and smiles. prem Too puts his hand on her Back n Places his CHeek on Her Head with smile and says...

Prem- Kya Baat Hai.. ?? AAj bada Pyar aa raha hai Mujh Pe.?

Heer smiles Shyly...!! and Gets Up and asks...??

Heer- Kaise Lag rahi Hu mein?

Prem - ( confused expression) - HUh???? Kyaa??? ( laughs abit)

Heer ( angry Expression)- Why are u so confused? Meine simple Question Pucha.. Kaise Lag rahi Hu Isss Sari Me...?? ( She revolves Round and ask with big smile)

Prem Gets Up from the bed and says- Hmmm...!!! So tarif Suuni Hai Tumko Mujh se..?? thik hai toh kar dete hai...!!!

heer- Nai..!! sach Sach Bol na...

Prem Goes Near Her, Catch Her Waist and Pulls her Near which makes Heer forget everything and puts her hand on His chest and look into his eyes

Prem- Mein nai janta Kya Kahu? lekin.. tum Iss Dress me...??? Yeh Tumare Beghe Hue Baal... ( Playing with the hair coming on Her face) , uusme yeh SHarm se LAAL ho chuke GAAl ( caressing her Cheek with Finge ) Yeh AAKhe... Yeh Hoth Ke Pink Lipstick ( Slowly touching Her lips with his Thunb which Makes heer close the eyes ) aur Issme Yeh Green Sari...!! Goes Near Her Ear and making Heer Go Crazy with his Breath and says ALOUD in Her EYES.. BILKIUL VI SUIT NAI KAR RAHE????

heer opens the eyes in shock hearing It and looks at him with Weird expression...

Prem- AALlele... ( Pulls Her Cheek) U look so cute In anger.. hahahaha

Heer Bits in his Hand seting her Cheek Free from His HAnd..!!! and Beats Him Bt Prem Runs Around the Room, and heer Follows Him To Beat..

Prem is Laughing and Heer is In anger... But suddenly Heer stops as She feels Chakkar and is about to fall when Prem Holds Her Shouting " HEER". He picks Up in the arm and makes Her sit in the Bed.

Cups Her FAce and says- Tum Thik Ho na...???

Heer- hmmm/...!!! woh baas.. chakkar... !!!

Prem- ( in anger ) kisne kaha tha Tea Banae Ko.. aram Karne ke liye kaha hai na? badi aayi BADI BAHU BAANE..?? pehe aapna Khyal rakho Uuske Baad kisi Aur SAMJhe..?? Now Lie Down here..

he is About to make her sleep but Mistakely His Hand gets Hit on the Stone table watch put aside The bed ..

Prem-- AAhhh..!! ( Holds His palm...)

heer Quickly Takes The Hit Area in her Mouth Shouting Prem .

Prem was now Little Bit Weaken with her saliva and Tongue Roaming on His Palm. Prem is Looking at her with Love and Heer after a Few Mins Realizes What she is Doing so Nervously without Leaving his His Hand. She looks up the Prem.. They Both Stares at each Other

when Prem Slowly Forwards His next Hand to Her Lips and slowly was going with the shape of her Lower lips with his thumb. Heer closes Her eyes when She sees Prem forwarding His LIps to Her,

There She Feels Prem Lips on Her and Then again They Lost on their Kiss. Heer is Now Lying on the bed with her Arm wrapped on His Neck and Prem's Hand Caressing her Cheek.The Kisses For a While and Then Breaks It. Heer Opens The eyes Slowly and smiles shly and turns Her Face aside with Shy. Prem Smiles at her expression and Hugs Her from Up Lifting Her Wight Little Bit On hIs Strong Grip which makes Heer Smile n Hug him Back.

Prem slowly now Taking his Hand to her Exposed Waise which Makes Heer Hold The Breath with A mOan.. Prem is kissing Her Cheek and Heading Towards The Neck.. Then SHe hears The Prem Saying

Prem - Mein Jau Abbb...!!!

heer Opens the eyes suddenly and Sees She is still Sitting Catching Prem Hand Tightly.

heer.. Huh..??? Umm...!! confused...

Prem- LAst 5 mind u are holding my hand Like this... ? I Am Fine Now.. Dard nai Ho raha ha... !! Mein jau Nahane...??

heer leave his hand Quickly and says- Haa.. Jawo.. ( Nervously putting Her Hair Side...)

Prem Smiles and leave from there

When Prem Goes heer Hits Her forehead With Her Hand in smile...!! and says- TU PAGAL HO GAYI HAI HEER and Falls down The BEd Hugging The Pillow and remembering Dream she saw with Open eyes Just Few Mins before.
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To Be continued....

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the awesome update ...
loved premeer scenes ...
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update sanju..
Lovd the premeer scenes..
And heer's dream is..ahem ahem..
Update nxt part soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ...
loved heer dream scenes ...
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update sanju..
premeer scenes were awesome..
pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

omg!! heer's dream
badmaash prem!! he did this to his wife at the very first day of their married life

i guess there is more work of dr.poroma tasnim in coming updates 😉
gr8888 update 👏 waiting for the next. thank you ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update👏👏👏...premeer scenes are ☺️...next update asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

loved premeer scene
looking forward to next
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 23

The Day was Over with All the Rasams and All.

In NIght..!!!

Prem is working On Laptop on couch


Heer ( from Bed who is lying on bed and Looking at Him with weird face ) - Kya Kar Rahe Ho???

Prem- ( without Looking )- Kaam Kar raha Huu Heer..!!! Tum so Jawo..!!

Heer- ( makes Face ) and says - BUDHU KAHI KYA ??

Prem- Huh?? Kuch KAHA TUMNE???

Heer- Nai..!! Kuch nai??? mein Kya kahu?

Prem - Thik hai so jawo..!!

heer- aur TUm???

Prem- Mein...?? aata Hu.. Thoda Kaam hai...???

Heer ( upset, turn aroond and sleeps in anger )

In the Morning..!!!!!!

heer opens the eyes and Spreads Her Hand to touch Prem but couldnt Find him.. She roams Hand around the empty space on the Bed Besides Her. She looks at confusion and looks on the couch and Gets Shocked Seeing Prem Sleeping On couch.

She Gets Up and Goes Near... Put aside the file and sits down in the floor roaming her hand on his Hair. Prem Opens the eyes with Her touch, Prem Smiles looking at Her...

Prem- uuth Gayi tum..!!

Heer- Soye Nai Tum?

Prem- soya na.. yaha.. Kaam kar raha tha Toh yehi pe...??

Heer ( sadly )- Hmmm...!!!

Prem- aacha Mein fresh Hota huu... office Jaana hai aaj...???

heer- Hmm..!! I will Prepare Food for u..!!

Both get up and goes to own work.

Heer comes with the Breakfast in the Room and Heer makes Him sit and Have it. Prem is getting ready with His dress and comes out of the Bathroom wearing Shirt and Pant,

Prem- Heer TIe...!!!

Heer takes Tie and goes near Him to Tie him Up...!!!

Prem is continuously looking her with Love...!! Heer is smiling and avoiding his Intense Gaze.
Suddenly Prem Pulls Her from Her waist Near Him...

Heer- Prem...!!! Kya Kar rahe Ho...!! ( shyly ) office ke liye deri Ho jaye Gi...!!!

Prem- ( romantically ) Nahhh..!!!! ( tries To go near)

Heer- Premmm. ( Pushes Him Back ) pehenane do Tie ko..??

Prem- Maine Kya Kiya..|? U are Pulling Me with this Tie?

Heer- HHhaaa??? ( smiles..) Nahi..!! Mein Baas pehena rahi hu...??

Prem- Tum Ko pata Hai...?? Why Pati ASK Wife to Tie the Tie..??

heer- ( smiling )- Kyun?

Prem- Kyuki? yeh na.. Morning ka bohut Romantic waqt Hota hai..?| and Tie ke bahane .. Pati Patnii ko kareeb Kheech Sakta hAi ( Pulls heer Near from Waist )

heer- Prem... !!! |( nervously)

Prem- Pyar karne Ke liye...!!!

Heer ( Tries To set Her Free Bt end up looking into eyes of Prem which Makes Her Forget Everything ) prem Puts heer's Hair aside which Makes Her close the eyes. Prem Forwards His Lips to Kiss her CHeek But Shyly heer Pushes Her With big Smile and Runs which Puts Prem ABACK and shouts

Prem HEEERrr??

FLASH BACK ENDS...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Prem- HEERrr????????????

Heer comes back In sense...??? SHe is sitting On bed Holding Tie..!!

Prem- ( from Infront of Mirror ) Kaha khoee ho..?? kab se bulara huu ? MERA TIE...

Heer- Haa..? HAA Tie.. (She gets Up Kicking Her thought with smile and Goes Near Prem.) Pehena Du,..???

Prem- hmmm..!!! Pehena Do...!!!

heer SMiles..!!!

She starts to Tie the Tie around the neck... thinking What H append at the same moment when they weren't married. so Expecting Some romantic Moment with him again

Prem- ( with irritation) Kya Kar rahi Ho? Jaldi karo na..???

Heer becomes Abash hearing It ...

Heer- HUH??? Ya... ( she starts Fasten Her hand in Confusion bt in hurry she makes the Mess.. as She is very Disturbed with sudden such behavior of Prem )

Prem- ( angrily ) - Yeh kya kiya? CHODO... Rehene do.. Mein Khud kar lunga..??? ( goes Away Pulling the Tie from neck and Moves out the Room in anger carrying his Bag. )

heer Is just standing there with Tears rolling down the Cheek.

The Whole Day.. HEER was Upset. She called Prem But He didnt Pick up. She was oNly lying on her Bed with much confusion of Prem's Behavior.

Then Phone Rings...!!! Seeing The Office Number He face Lighten ups. and picks the Phone excitingly.

heer- HEELOOO..!!!

Girl - HELoo..!!

Heer- huh??

Girl- Ji woh.. Prem sir ajj Ghar deri se aayenge.. late night meeting hai.. so he said me to inform you.

Heer- ( sadly )- THIK HAI..!!!

In Night..! Its Almost 11 pm Prem Havn't arrived.. Heer is waiting for Him Restlessly in the Room when she sees from window Prem's cars coming Inside. her face lightens Up.

Prem enters the Room and Sits In couch with Tired. Heer comes Near and takes His coat Off and gives Him water. Prem haves the water and rest his head on couch upper part closing His eyes.

Heer ( roaming hand around his hair )- Thak Gaye Bohut???

Prem- Hmmm( without opening the eyes)

heer- Fresh Ho jawo.. u will Feel Better.. Then LEts have Food... and

Prem- ( lazily closing the eyes ) Maine Khana Kha Liya hai..?? Meeting Thii na... foreign delegates aaye Huee thee toh uunke sath hii...?????????? ( opens Up the eyes suddenly and Looks up to Heer Strangly) Ekkk Min...??? LETS HAVE FOOD MEANS????? TUMNE NAI???

Heer- ha woh..!! Maine socha Tum aawo Ge toh SATH ME KARENGE>.?? Koi baat nai.. tumne Kiya toh Abb mein vi...????/////

Prem- HAVE U LOSTED??? ( GETS UP IN ANGER FROM THE COUCH) Time Kya hai Dekha HAI????????? Tumne aab tak khana nai KHAYA???????? Maine msg vej waee thii na I WILL BE LATE

Heer ( gets Up )- HA... MSG TOH MILA BT ...mujhe laga sath me khayenge..Mujhe laga tum aayo ge khane ko ??? tum Ne nai kaha khane Ko toh???

Prem- ( even more angily )- CHOTI BACHI HO TUM.. ki mujhe 2- 2 mins me tumko call karke bolna pae ga khana KHAWO HEER>>... MEDICINE loh HEER...!!!!!!!!!!!! ?? HA?? Itni se baat samjh me nai aati.. agar mein late ho ta huu toh khana khaje aaunga...???

Heer gets Tears in eyes...!!!

Prem- ( Puts his hand on the Head and again shouts ) - Kya tumko pata nai hai... tumko DAWAEE LENI HOGI??? EK BAJE TAK NAI AATA TOH NAI KHATIII?? HAAA... ?? AGAR TUM CHAHATI HO NA... MEIN 24 HOURS... HEER YEH KARO, WOH KARO... YEH KHAWO.. WOH KHAWO.. KARTE HU TUMARE AAGE PICHE PHIR TA RAHU TOH.. THIK HAI NA.. KAL SE KAAM DHAM CHODKE BETH TA HU GHAR ME... TUMARI SEWA MEIN...??? DISGUSTING HEERrr...!!!!!!!! ( moves out of the room in anger...)

The Tears are Flowing from her eyes... and she is Silently standing...

Prem comes in room with Food... Sits in Couch with food and looks up Heer who is still standing and cryng..!!

Prem- Please mujhe bata dijye aapka yeh rone ka program kab lhattam Hoga..?? coz khana leke aaya hu aap ke liye...???

Heer Looks at Prem who is in anger and sits Near Prem, . he gives the plate to Heer and Goes to Freshen up.

heer Looks at Prem going washroom and starts eating by crying..!! She completes the food bt still sittin in couch with tears when prem comes out the washroom wiping his face with towel. He goes near Table , takes out the medicine and Gives it to Her...!!

she is still on couch...!!!

Prem goes on Bed and Looks at Heer..!!

Prem- abb wohi pe rehena hai raat bhar ya phir SONa Hai.. ??

Heer Looks at Prem who is looking at His laptop on his lap..!!

Heer takes her nighty out and goes to bathroom . She cries, wash her face , changes and come to the room and sees Prem already asleep turning next side which makes Heer even More hurt. She lies on Bed and switch off the light and then closes her mouth with one pillow & tears are flowing in pain.

to be continued..!!!


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