new ss # Soulmates chapter 3, pg#9, 13/4 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Khwahish Eid Mubarak :) I love how you have gift for us on every celebration :D so cool!

Ch 2 is fabulous. It kept us gripped to the story from beginning to end.
Heer was so cute - her pov was nicely described.
Wow Preet's Heer's cousin :D looks like they're v close and have a loving relationship.
Interesting way to make PH meet :D
Thank you for updating and celebrating with your friends 🤗

aathi...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it love it love it love it love it ..
update next part soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love it love it love it love it love it ..
update next part soon
thanks for pm

thank u so much... will update, jab free time milayga😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Waiting for next update Khwahish. ❤️ Hope you're able to do so soon.
tc love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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next update tayyar hai bas siggie bananii hai update tou tabhi karungi jb ye tans ho jaega..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mods i want it shift back to kdmhmd forum please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeee tranfer ho gaya will update on monday agar koi nayi prob khari nahi hui tou...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🥳Hey Khwahish rock the next ch😎 Exciting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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giong to update wait siggie bana lun zara😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3




Wo jab bhi apni ankhen band karta cham se uss larki ki tasveer ankhon main utar ati. Phir wo ankhen khol deta or kuch der ruk k dobara ankhen band karta tou phir se wo nazar ati. Tang aa k wo bed se uth gaya or idhar udhar chakkar lagane laga.
"Why?why? Why? Kyun tm ne mera peecha le lya hai. Meri har soch pe shamil hogai ho, koi kaam nahi kar sakta, do hafton se soya nahi hon, jb soney ki koshish karta hn tm samne ajati ho. Na sone deti ho, na khane deti ho, na kaam karne deti ho. Jahan jata hon wahin nazar ane lagti ho. Tang agaya ho in sb cheezon se".
Prem sit on couch.
"Plz meet me. Sirf ek bar milna chahta hon tm se, tmhen batana chahta hon k tmse milne k baad se ek din ek pal chain se nahi guzra, pata nahi kya hogaya hai mujhe."
he sigh and stand up from couch.
" why i want to meet you again? Ek bar mila tha ye haal hua hai, dobara milunga tou pagal hi hojaonga."
he lay on bed and try to sleep.

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Heer or preet mall main enter huay. Heer ne kuch dresses lye or chooriyan lene k lye ek choori wali shop pe enter hogai.
Preet apni shopping doosri shop se kar raha tha. Heer ko ek multishade ka bangle set pasand aya tabhi usay laga k koi usey dekh raha hai Heer ne charun orh dekha tab usay ek larka nazar aya tou constantly usay hi dekhe ja raha tha. Heer gave him angry look but he didnt change his position. Heer gussay se bangle set wahin chhor k shop se nikal gai.
And in shop uss larke ne wo bangle set uthaya or muskuraya, phir usne wo chooriyan kharidin or apne dost se milne k lye nikal gaya. He is happy and sad at same time, happy b/c he saw her again, and sad b/c he didnt find out her name or address e.t.c

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Prem call preet. Prem: kahan ho?
Preet: yar aaj meri sis k birthday hai, usay shopping pe leke aya hua hun, tu bata.
Prem: main soch raha tha aj chutti hai tou saath main kisi resturant main khapa karte hain, khair agli baar sahi.
Preet: ek kaam kar tu b aja, sab se mil lena, birthday party k baad coffee k lye chalengey.
Prem: acha nahi lagta teri sis ki birthday party or main bewajah hi kood jaon party main.
Preet: tu pagal hogaya hai. Jab main bol raha hn k aja tou matlab aja. Maa paa b milna chahte hain tjhse. Bas tu araha hai or ye final hai.
Prem haar mantay hue: ok tu jeeta. Araha hun.
Preet: done sham ko milte hain bye.
Prem: hmm bye.

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Prem ab ghar jaa raha tha. Preet heer ko ghar drop kar k cake ka order dene chala gaya.
Heer shaam ki tayari kar rahi thi usne dress press karna shru ki saath hi wo gana ganay lagi.
"Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan main kisi k ...
Wo press karti hui gana gati rahi.
Aaj usay sb se acha jo dikhna tha. Aaj ka din sirf uska tha.

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At evening:

Prem enter in preet's home. He meet preet's parents and also preet's other guests. And then she came with full white gown, white barbie gloves. smoky eye makeup with baby pink lip glose make her complitly stunning.
Prem saw her and murmuring: OmG! I found her.
He complitely lost in her innocent face, crystal eyes and mesmerizing smile.
His gaze on her notice by preet. Heer meet her friend and other guests one by one. She recive gift and flowers and after that she cut her birthday cake between claps and birthday song.
Preet notice that prem ek hi position main khara hai or jb se heer i hai tb se usay hi dekhe ja raha hai.
Usne heer ko bolaya or prem se introduce karwaya.
Preet: heer ye mera dost prem or prem ye meri pyari sis heer.
Prem: hello. Many happy returns of the day.
Heer: hi! Thanks alot.
Prem: sorry about gift wo ab due raha.
Heer: no its o.k
heer soch rahi thi k usne prem ko kahin dekha tha par kahan usay yaad nahi araha tha.
Prem still focus her, preet still notice him and smile creep on his face.


o.k chapi ends here...sorry guys english main nahi likh sakti iss liye hinglish likhi hai... 😆ab se hinglish main hi update mile gi..
Edited by InnocentZindagi - 11 years ago

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