new ss # Soulmates chapter 3, pg#9, 13/4 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Anokhi pls update ur ff I love ur ff a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey you wrote beautifully.
So sad Heer is in coma and Prem is devastated. Glad Preet is right there to support. Is Preet Prem's friend? Yap both r friends...😃
Didn't watch video but will do when I have a chance.
Ch 1 is very emotional but can feel what a close relationship PH had and how close Preet is to both of them.
Keep up the good job Khwahish.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER # 2
(FIRST MEET)

Flashback start:


"Oh no!" he scream, when he saw his wris watch..
"8:30" my meeting held at 9:00 am. Dammn . I am late oh! Today I m already late for office . he murmuring and tie his shoe lace. He run when he realize that his mother call his name'. she ask about breakfast but he ignore and leave for office'. Now he sit in his car gave by office'. He had higher post in an office'. He is most brilliant and honest employe of Thakraal industries'.
"hurry up!" he order his driver'


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"Heer" preet shout but no response towards her.
"o.k! I think her exam is over. Anyways I m already late for office. So I should leave now'" preet to hisself. Preet leave.
Preet is heer's first and elder cousin. He have no sister so he love heer a lot' heer is his doll "Glass doll".
After 10 minute. Heer run toward main gate.. she search preet's car and dad's scooter but both are absent.
"No" oh God! My exam." She saw her wrist watch.
"its 8:30 now". She inform herself and run toward the way of examination hall. Preet's mother look shock coz she thought heer's exam over so she didn't try to awake her'. Heer reach on bus stand.
"Dammn" how can I forgot today is transport stricke against passengers voilance'. No bus, rickshaw and taxi..what would I do now?" she take a long breath and said "Whatever" and run toward examination hall'


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His driver drive very professionally. Suddenly he saw a girl run on road in middle of it. Before whole scene turn on an accident scene driver push breaks by his feet, tyers are stopped by creating a loud sound.
Driver shout: are u blind?
Heer saw her watch, its 8:45 now. She is just ready to cry'..
"what's the problem?" prem ask her.
"today is my last paper, and just about to start, plz sir! I beg u plz drop me at my examination hall plz''
Driver said: No, Sir is already late for office'
Heer request, plz' plz'.
Tears rolling in her eyes.
Driver: mam! I m already told u that'.
[rem interrupt: stop it Rao. She ia needy'
Rao: but''
Prem: no but'. (to heer) u can sit'
Heer: thank God'..
Heer sit next to prem. Rao look angry coz, prem is late and boss will angry on both'..(rao and prem).
Herr: plz drive fast and take right.
Rao: it's a car not a plane.
Prem (warn) rao!
Herr revice her notes.
Prem take a brief look on heer' white college dress, wrist watch on one hand and rainbow colour bangles on other hand. Long black hair catch by black band. Strain are touching her face, Clean eyes with long lashes, Soft pink lips, Shiny face without any makeup.
She revice and also told rao left and right for examination hall. Prem still stare her. A cute smile crip on his face, and his heart miss a beat.
Now they reach at heer's examination hall. Heer quickly cameout from car and run inside without saw them or say "thank u".
Prem sigh and think: Ahhh! Why I not ask about her namr? Will we meet again????????? And why I m thinking about her????
Rao accelerate tha car and also he notice that prem is thinking something'.
Prem meeting is postpond coz he is not reach at time'.


PRECAPE:
Prem saw heer , she fails to recognize him.

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nice update yaar
love there first meeting
now pls cont soon
thanx for pm

and han eid mubarak to u 🤗
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Khwahish Eid Mubarak :) I love how you have gift for us on every celebration :D so cool!

Ch 2 is fabulous. It kept us gripped to the story from beginning to end.
Heer was so cute - her pov was nicely described.
Wow Preet's Heer's cousin :D looks like they're v close and have a loving relationship.
Interesting way to make PH meet :D
Thank you for updating and celebrating with your friends 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome update ..loved it ...
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
loved the update... fabulous.. awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow..loved premeer's first meeting..
prem droped heer for exams..so sweet..
precap was..poor prem...
anways waiting for the next update..cant wait to read detail
thanks for pm..

PS : Belated Eid mubrark :)
Edited by priyahmt - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Looking forward to see the next part 🤓
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

nice update yaar
love there first meeting
now pls cont soon
thanx for pm

and han eid mubarak to u 🤗

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