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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey Fatima

pg 75 I had fun with this ch

Most of it sounded like Preet, except for the sarcasm he threw at Meher.


Well considering what happened in the previous chapter he is upset at Meher so the sarcasm is expected...even Meher was on the look out for him to be taking some sort of revenge. 😆

Wow Maya actually didn't drool but behaved :O this is the 1st time .

She actually thinks Preet and Meher are meant to be so is happy for her friend, hence the drool is controlled on her part.

1st time I actually read thru song dance scene in ur story cuz I like that scene in that movie. SRK and his antics as Raj was hilarious.

Yes it was ... I loved it too...😆

Parties always hv some weird games. I wonder y. But then again it's no different than what usually happens in school functions. 1 thing didn't add up - Preet being an employee in ad firm , he even says to guests bit behaves like a lil teenager while speaking to Maya. I guess he has 2 personalities - mature and child act.

Ok let's see if Meher has anything smart up her sleeve to get back at him for his rudeness. Is maya going to give her hand - to get off the floor? Ty 4 it. Dialogues are fab.


Preet is talented and often people underestimate him...but there is an inherent goofy, fun loving part of his personality that just doesn't go away...sometimes it causes him to behave in an immature fashion...and that will hurt him...maybe even in the work place.

Will Meher get him back...or will she make peace...I refuse to give anything away. 😈

Thanks for reading Athisda 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
woow that was good!!!👏
Awesome...
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
absolutly fantastic👏
this is great ..
oww and the ddly scne just perfect for them ...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi fatima 😊

Thanks for the pm
And I am sorry for being late in posting this comment 😳 but this is because I wasnt expecting a double blast from you in just one week hmmm I must say with this ff you are not only giving us a new story but also new kind of surprises because with your 1st chap when you said you will be updating fortnightly I was really sad that time but luckily and all thanks to you we are getting not only our regular weekly dose but also with this week we can expect that if time permits you can always give us more
😉 😉
now coming back to the update
I liked the nok jhok between meet though preet is being sarcastic alongwith his I am the great preet juneja attitude but I guess this is what preet is and thats the way we love him 😛
like everyone else even I love this ddlj song and the scene so imagining our very own meet doing the same was great fun and honestly they actually fitted in this song completely
But preet dropping meher the same way srk droped kajol is going to be embarassing for meher dont know how meher will take it
the precap is looking a bit sad but what I am thinking is from here only their friendship might start and thats what I am waiting to see
😃
so with that thought I am waiting for your next update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi fatima 😊

Thanks for the pm
And I am sorry for being late in posting this comment 😳 but this is because I wasnt expecting a double blast from you in just one week hmmm I must say with this ff you are not only giving us a new story but also new kind of surprises because with your 1st chap when you said you will be updating fortnightly I was really sad that time but luckily and all thanks to you we are getting not only our regular weekly dose but also with this week we can expect that if time permits you can always give us more
😉 😉
now coming back to the update
I liked the nok jhok between meet though preet is being sarcastic alongwith his I am the great preet juneja attitude but I guess this is what preet is and thats the way we love him 😛
like everyone else even I love this ddlj song and the scene so imagining our very own meet doing the same was great fun and honestly they actually fitted in this song completely
But preet dropping meher the same way srk droped kajol is going to be embarassing for meher dont know how meher will take it
the precap is looking a bit sad but what I am thinking is from here only their friendship might start and thats what I am waiting to see
😃
so with that thought I am waiting for your next update


Thanks for the feedback Bhagyashree.
Oh...did I do a double update this week? I'm trying to stick to a more predictable schedule...but everything is out of whack on my end. Anyway It's okay...Chicago is being pummeled with snow, so I'm home bound and in a writing mood 😆

Yes the DDLJ scene suits Meet really well. Especially since Preet was looking for a way to get back at Meher.

Friends so soon? I don't know about that. 😈

I think the next chapter will surprise everyone.

Edited by ummesulaiman - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well in that case I will have to thank the snow of Chicago 😉

and as far as the next update is concerned I am waiting for the surprise now so bring it on fatima 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ummesulaiman


@ bold: You noticed 😆


How could I not notice. 😉
It's related to Sushant.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh. I loved this part, Fatima! 😛
You are amazing!

You've got to stop Preet and Meher from bumping into each other.
They'll be black and blue all the time. 😉😆

Loved the bedroom encounter.
The chemistry between them is palpable.
Fantastic writing! 👍🏼

Off to read the next chapter now.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
So the tension continues.
These two are stubborn. 😊
Looking forward to the next installment to get the results of this game and to see what the upsetting news is.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ma'am. I know sorry wont do. But extremely sorry. Late like always but college keeps me busy. Was suppose to comment tomorrow but seems like wont get time again. Didnt get to like the previous chapters but they were amazing. My net speed is horrible today. So sorry. I like this story and m in love with this preet and meher.. I love their fights. Premeer just gives me the extra good feeling. :-D Maya preet and meher banter was cute <3 <3 the game was <3 <3 <3 and the song choice was <3 <3 gr8 update. Thank u for the pm. Love vrushika.

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