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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Fatima :D

pg 70

woah mr. cool is nt so cool in here huh

I love that cute outfit of Meher's stupid Preet is partially blind.

I totally dislike him in this ch. y didn't his sisters punish him really.

y'know in real i hv a older bro who is v much like this.

when he's happy everyone is his frd, he'll joke around and laugh.

If he becomes moody no one can do anything.

oh man Maya is a clueless teenager haha i didn't know whether to laugh or bang her head with something to bring her back to reality. On top of that she forgot Meher's dresses! 😲 now why Meher hangs out with such an airhead lol

so sad Meher cried 😒 giving her hug🤗 Meher is too kind to tolerate what happened. She's stuck betw her dream crazy frd and attitude Preet.

ok so Meher thinks except for 1, Junejas are generous huh.

lets see what happens in engagement. pls don't tell me he's going to accuse her again for stealing cloths now. ( Fatima if u did I'm coming after u with huge stick).

ya 1st meeting of Meher Preet from show I remember it.

going to read next ch. ty

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Back couldn't resist 😛

pg 73

I went like this for the entire update

😡

😲

I felt lil bad that bowl of Mehendi got dumped on Preet but man is he rude 😲

I loved all the tit for tat that Meher is able to give. way to go Meher.😎

Angry at Maya for all the antics - she blackmailed Meher 😡😲 I wish Meher came up with something cool to zip her mouth. She's way too annoying.

aw it's a never ending torture for Meher :( Poor her.

wow the kids are hilarious.

So next drama is at the party. Pre cap is interesting will Meher agree for it.

ty Fatima. This story is heating up right. It was all calm before.

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sapna sharma

@kamiya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

mind blowing dear😛

awesome job 👏

loved meet scene 😳

i eagerly await for the update

plz continue soon

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: AASUS
Back couldn't resist 😛

pg 73

I went like this for the entire update
😡

😲
I felt lil bad that bowl of Mehendi got dumped on Preet but man is he rude 😲
I loved all the tit for tat that Meher is able to give. way to go Meher.😎
Angry at Maya for all the antics - she blackmailed Meher 😡😲 I wish Meher came up with something cool to zip her mouth. She's way too annoying.
aw it's a never ending torture for Meher :( Poor her.
wow the kids are hilarious.
So next drama is at the party. Pre cap is interesting will Meher agree for it.

ty Fatima. This story is heating up right. It was all calm before.

Athisda you girly girl you 😆

You're always on the girl's side. well...maybe not on Maya's side...yes she is irritating, but she is Meher's roommate and pays her rent on time 😆

Preet did deserve a punishment...maybe you'll warm up to him in the upcoming chapters 🤔

Yes the story really picks up from here on end.

But a lot of surprises are in store for my readers.

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: kamiya
mind blowing dear😛
awesome job 👏
loved meet scene 😳

i eagerly await for the update

plz continue soon

Kamiya...welcome back to my corner 🤗

So nice to see you commenting after so long 😃

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Siti Nabilah

@ctnabilah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#576

Haha! Omg! I laughed soo much this time especially with what Kulraj's child phase on Preet... haha

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bhagyashree2011

@bhagyashree2011

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#577

Hi fatima

thanks for the pm
this update was the best I dont how to tell you that what a lovely update it was.
I really dont know how you manage but everything in this update brought a smile on my face be it the sulking of meher and maya trying to convince her or preet and meher's mehndi encounter or the cute little romantic moment you created between them or the fun that you made of preet with his towel everything was just so good.

From here your story has just not started but it is flying from here I just cant wait for the next part

The precap looks interesting but what I am wondering is whether preet is asking meher for a dance out of genuine likeness or whether something is going on in his mind
ohh god its so exciting, if the start is so good dont know what is store on future of this story because you are always successfull in amazing your readers with your writing

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011
Hi fatima

thanks for the pm
this update was the best I dont how to tell you that what a lovely update it was.
I really dont know how you manage but everything in this update brought a smile on my face be it the sulking of meher and maya trying to convince her or preet and meher's mehndi encounter or the cute little romantic moment you created between them or the fun that you made of preet with his towel everything was just so good.

From here your story has just not started but it is flying from here I just cant wait for the next part

The precap looks interesting but what I am wondering is whether preet is asking meher for a dance out of genuine likeness or whether something is going on in his mind
ohh god its so exciting, if the start is so good dont know what is store on future of this story because you are always successfull in amazing your readers with your writing

I'm glad you liked it dear.

See my FFs start a bit slow, because I need to lay a background and character foundation down...and then we finally take off...when the main leads meet... 😛

I am a stickler for detail...I can't help it...🤓..As a reader I love as much detail as I can get to visualize the story...so I do that in my writings too...that's why even my OS is so long. 😆

Getting back to the FF...I don't think right now anyone has any idea where I'm going with this story...😆...so yes...a lot of surprises are coming up. 😛