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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Ooh an update,

pg 67

G and P convo is v cool. Like the comfort level they share.

Oooh Ash gives attutde lol. She is good at creating scene.

That was kind of fun.

Preet didn't get along with dad huh. Oh well now it.s too late to prove his talent. Aww

That's kind of sad part.

It was intersting.

Ty Fatima.

Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#522

wow this is amazing... 👏
i just loved it..
eagerly waiting for nxt chapter...

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Finally Preet is here!

When you started with the alarm clock bit I was reminded of Kismat connection, but then it didn't go down that route at all which was good. I quite liked the convo between Ash and Preet- he might be chasing her but he has his head firmly in place.

Oh, and looks Veera's wedding is the place where Preet and Meher will bump.. and .. a fight? :D Eee.. I'm excited! Looking forward to the next part now!

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

What a good friend Gaurav is for steering Preet in the right direction, away from Ash. I just hope Preet adheres!lol

Great part and thanks for the pm. can't wait for Meet's first meet..lol

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Timepassss

@Timepassss

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

yippeee... preet...!!

sushant in ny form is adorable..😳

n preet here is doing quite well for himself...

okk...so both will bump at the wedding looks like..

gr8...put in a nice nok jhok...

waiting...😛 thnks for the pm...🤗

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: AASUS
Ooh an update,

pg 67

G and P convo is v cool. Like the comfort level they share.
Oooh Ash gives attutde lol. She is good at creating scene.
That was kind of fun.
Preet didn't get along with dad huh. Oh well now it.s too late to prove his talent. Aww
That's kind of sad part.
It was intersting.
Ty Fatima.

Yes I'm updating weekly as I have a bit of slack time this month 😆

Lalit is dead...I'm going to be really bad and kill a lot of people in this FF {rubs hands and gives evil laugh} 😈

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
wow this is amazing... 👏
i just loved it..
eagerly waiting for nxt chapter...

Thanks for reading Sadi...yes the next chapter is when the fun starts 😆

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: nikitagmc
Finally Preet is here!

When you started with the alarm clock bit I was reminded of Kismat connection, but then it didn't go down that route at all which was good. I quite liked the convo between Ash and Preet- he might be chasing her but he has his head firmly in place.
I wouldn't say he's chasing her...but if gets her along with the contract ...hey well then it's the icing on the cake 😆

Oh, and looks Veera's wedding is the place where Preet and Meher will bump.. and .. a fight? :D
Just one fight? Hang onto your seats...😆

Eee.. I'm excited! Looking forward to the next part now!
Thanks for reading Nikita

Edited by ummesulaiman - 11 years ago